The Human Emperor Banner Is Billowing Black Smoke? I'm a Perfectly Decent Person!

Feng Aotianliu's novel about cultivating immortals is very good. The female protagonist is ruthless and stubborn, and the female characters are well represented. It does not stress the strength and does not rely purely on the system. Overall, it is a grassroots growth history, which is very resonant. What's not good for me is when a man forces his female partner to marry him without caring about the woman's wishes and thinks he is affectionate. And I think this direction is more suitable for no cp and no male. At first, I thought it was a plot without emotional connection, and the heroine was too cold when faced with the heroine being kidnapped to get married... She would put others into the Human Emperor Banner without asking for any reason, and be gentle to the man who was attached to her. . Editor 3: I endured the nausea and came back to take a look. I still felt that the female supporting character's plot was quite vicious. Although this is just a story about a strong female character and does not require the author to favor other female characters, I still felt quite uncomfortable with it. Other than that, I think this book is pretty good.

The writing is really good. This is the smoothest book I have read among the many fantasy novels I have read in Tomato. There is no messy and forced drama to highlight the protagonist's plot, and there is no deliberate description of the character's appearance. It looks very comfortable and smooth. So far, the world view and some settings are quite complete. It is a combination of games and traditional cultivation of immortality. It not only abandons the childishness of cultivating immortality in games, but also combines some characteristics of the game with the concept of cultivating immortality. This is better than other games that cultivate immortality (including male videos). Needless to say the writing style. But there are also some shortcomings. I hope that the author can make progress together with the protagonist. At more than 110 chapters, there are still relatively few female characters in the book. Whether it is indigenous people or players, they all hope to have more (I am not asking the author to write "girl-loving" novels, but I just suggest that there should be more female characters with charming personalities. It doesn't matter whether they are good or bad. Because whether it is indigenous people or players, it is unfair to have more men than women). I don't know if the author has the habit of reading book reviews. I hope the author can see that if he wants to get a higher score, this is the best choice. Add more female characters, so that the ratio of male to female characters is balanced or there are more women than men. Also, try not to write words that insult women. Hong Cibei's smashing the pot is a good counterexample. Don't say it is a writing habit. In the female video market, the beneficiaries are women, and the readers are more women. No matter what characters say words that insult women, it will not leave a good impression on the readers. Even if the book cannot be changed, even if the book survives, the end will be even worse.

Super pretty [crying] The super orthodox heroine is practicing fairy literature. She is moving forward diligently step by step. But the Holy Mother has her own way. What is wrong with this heroine? She is not bad at all [crying][crying][crying] How normal and normal people love themselves more! ! ! We, Bai Yue, are very upright. We will seek revenge and repay injustice, and we will never let go of those who have offended us. This is how we are normal people! ! ! Some articles write about the Holy Mother under the banner of evil girl. My dear Bai Yue is such an upright and lovely baby [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] There is no trace of the male protagonist at all! Sisters, feel free to rush! ! ! The villains are also very smart and are not just here to deliver food!

The biggest advantage of this book is that the protagonist never hesitates and has no messy moral burdens or psychological activities. How can it be so refreshing! ! ! Anyone who wants to kill her, anyone who stands in the way, regardless of male or female, will be killed. If you can't kill her now, you will always kill her in the future. Just do it. The author never writes "if so and so..., She/he is not afraid of..." Or that in order to protect himself, the protagonist has no choice but to..., And never writes a series of hypocritical "disclaimers" before the protagonist goes to kill. This is the coolest place. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Also, the author should not mention those words that need to be changed. The inexplicable words or phrases will only affect the speed of my reading comprehension. Is it really necessary to pursue and find fault with the author because of a few words in order to achieve equality between men and women? It doesn't matter whether you are male or female, they are all stepping stones for the protagonist. You will not let them go just because you are a woman, nor will you deal with them more harshly just because you are a man. Before gender, we are individuals first [smile][smile][smile] In short, reading novels does not need to affect the reading experience. To please the so-called "female market" and "female-friendly", it only needs the protagonist to be friendly [thinking][thinking][thinking]

This book is very beautiful, but the rating is so low, so I specially rated it: 1️⃣Senior brother and sister, there are many girls who use these details, siss can feel free to join 2️⃣The rhythm is very fast and refreshing, one wave after another rises again, the heroine must retaliate, she is smart, bold and ambitious, it is a very refreshing novel. Finished reading it in one sitting. 3️⃣The supporting characters are well portrayed. Not a flat supporting character. Every character, even the villain, has something fresh to him.

This book is really good. I'm the kind of person who doesn't want to read it if there are some flaws, but I will take a quick glance at it. However, I can listen to this book and read it seriously. I have to say that the writing is really good. It really describes the world of immortality, not just good and evil, or the illusory setting of neutrality. In short, it is quite good. At least I am reading this now and hope to keep it in the future. . . . Well, I hope the author can change some of the word-sensitive issues, so that the rating can be long and there is no harm. Let me add that if you want to see the plot and don't care about these words, you can follow it. Supplement: There are quite a lot of ups and downs in the plot at the end, and many people will abandon the book because of this. Moreover, the connection between the ups and downs is not very good, which makes it a bit confusing. The emotional construction in some places is not very good, which makes the actions of the protagonist a bit difficult to understand. I feel that the author's description of the protagonist's shaping is a bit difficult to write, so it is okay to read it as a fake novel. The shaping and writing in the early stage are pretty good, but the connection in the later stage is a bit difficult, so be careful.

It's very good-looking. Don't be misled by some comments. The heroine is a true egoist and a true villain. She is not merciful and will take revenge. She is not the kind who just kills you if you offend me. Some clans will be wiped out and some clans will be wiped out. Don't think the heroine is too cruel. She is originally a villain heroine, and this is also a dark fairy tale. I am currently tied with it. I am still wondering why there are so few readers and the rating is a bit low. After reading it, I found out in the comment section that many comments have their own personal opinions, but that is not the case. They are taken out of context. The heroine has no emotional line, from beginning to end, and the things obtained in the second week are obviously better. Many people did not see it, so they directly commented and complained. I have read more than 10,000 hours of reading on Tomato, and I have read many good novels. I have bought a lot of them recently 💩. This book can be said to be the only gold mine recently.

It's really beautiful. The heroine is not kind at all, very ruthless and neat, but she is grateful. It has the flavor of a traditional fairy tale. She has always been a lone wolf and has been working hard to become stronger. The supporting characters in it also have their own origins and personalities. They all have ambitions and use various means to compete for opportunities. It is particularly refreshing and there are some very touching plots. The author is really very experienced in writing and the logic is not broken at all. I highly recommend it. The rating of this book is definitely low now. I will never discriminate against books with low ratings in the future. It is very in line with my appetite. The plot is exciting and ups and downs. I was attracted immediately and kept reading. The only pity is that it is a serialized novel. After finishing it, I was really excited and wanted to read it. The author came over and quickly continued writing. I hope it is not a high start but a low start. I hope that the current style can be continued all the way in the future. When the author writes the story he wants to write, he can also attract a group of readers with the same concept. Let's make this book better together. ㊗️Everyone can be rich and prosperous.

The author wrote such a tough book with a cute name. It is simply awesome. Those who have not read it will regret it. The female channel upgrade flow is very cool, and it can be seen that the author has her own thoughts and opinions, and will not let some other voices affect her writing style. Also, every time those who say insulting words ask the author to change the words, the author will not change them. I completely like this. Using other words that do not convey the meaning completely affects the perception. The author is awesome. Why on earth do we need to change the word? Does everyone's focus have to be on the word? I only saw a group of people struggling with one word to encircle and suppress the living space of the female author. The heroine of this book is so happy and powerful. She keeps fighting and killing. Why not? Fight for things that are truly beneficial to women, instead of a group of people attacking a female author who clearly writes well. Why do you have to embarrass a small author? Why don't you go to Tomato and ask them to ban the words? I am not confident and think everything is insulting to women.

Despite the confusion, I still gave it 4 stars. The early reading experience was quite good. I only remembered to read it after reading the beginning. Because I didn't like the description of Mr. Yang in the early stage, I skipped it the second time. The ratio of women to men is 1:1, but the ones in high positions are mostly men. The heroine is a decisive and murderous person who will use any means to climb up the ladder, but she happens to encounter people who want to kill her, so she kills people and licks the bag without any moral pressure. It is very good and very satisfying, if you can accept it. Some of the insulting phrases have been criticized very loudly and have not been changed, and some minor ones have been changed. If you have a strong female consciousness, you can withdraw here. Later on, there is a plot where the female supporting character is forcibly married and the heroine is raped and sucked by a leech man. I haven't watched it yet and I plan to finish it quickly before commenting on it. To put it simply, readers who are not very aware of women can read it, while readers who are strongly aware of women can stop reading this book review.