Two Worlds: Pokemon Help Me Ascend to Immortality

Both worlds have roles. Problems in one world can be answered in the other. However, I personally feel that the cruel aspects of cultivating immortals and the world of Pokémon can be written in more detail. I feel that it is too smooth sailing now [cool] There are too many scenes in Hua Chanye, and the upgrade speed is frighteningly fast. The logic has not yet been explained. It is a branch of the spiritual grass. To gain the heart of the grass and trees in the world of cultivation, you must embrace the thighs of a big family and absorb the power of the grass and trees in a specific year and place. The protagonist is to travel between two worlds, buy talismans in the Immortal Cultivation Chronicle, and squeeze the power of the plants and trees in the Pokémon world. If you want to obtain the Bai family's territory in the Immortal Cultivation World, you can only wait a few years. That Hua Chan Ye lacks all resources and has no way to obtain the heart of grass and branches. She is always written about her hydrology. It is better to write her to death before entering elementary school.

Very good. I originally thought it was the kind of brainless two-world transmission, system invincibility text, but it turns out that it is not the case. There is a foreign world plug-in, but it can be restrained. It is used very carefully in order to prevent others from discovering it. [Thinking] [Thinking] The protagonist is very cautious, very tolerant, and decisive in killing. He has IQ and is not a virgin. [Punch] [Punch] The character is very suitable for me. Appetite, the protagonist's world is a fantasy world of cultivating immortals, and he can travel into a Pokémon world (a world that is a fusion of modern Pokémon and Pokémon, not a purely primitive elf world). As far as I can see, it is a five-star good book. Although the pace is a bit slow, it is well written and has the potential of a divine book. The author should update it soon. Don't be too late. This kind of subject is rare [laughing][laughing]

I have recommended this book several times, but every time I read the beginning and threw it away, thinking about some messy elf writing. Until this time I patiently looked at the back. OK OK! What a cyber cultivator, a cyber cultivator dressed in elf writing, whose writing style is very slow. No other cyber cultivator writes with such passion, but I think the author handled it very well. I almost missed it. This should be in the category of cybernetic cultivators. I was almost confused about the niche literature written at the beginning. Modify the score. Hua Chanye's promotion is simply unreasonable. His qualifications are incredible, but how can he make up for the resource gap? The author doesn't write it clearly, even if it says that the protagonist is funded, or she turns on the resource link, it can be understood. If it is still written like this in the future, I think the book may not exceed 8.5 Points.

Magnificent imagination, Hu Hu's "biological alchemy furnace", the Purple Jade Overlord Flower that transcends two realms of time and space to obtain its essence, the fairy version of Eevee..., The magnificent fusion of immortality and Pokémon is the ultimate collision of ambition and rationality against the background of dark and cold reality!

The overall look and feel is okay. I have my own ideas about the themes and ideas across the world, including creating my own Pokémon in the later stage. The main world is a world of cultivators, not Pokémon. The Pokémon world is also urban fiction, not the original anime. The latest cultivation level is the Nascent Soul stage, and the progress is not bad. At least compared to other immortal cultivation texts, there are more words and inks when breaking through each stage, and normal cultivation is covered in one stroke, which is a relatively good advantage. The reason why I gave it 4 points instead of 5 points is because the AI ​​flavor is too strong, and the artificiality of AI can be seen between the lines. If it is not AI, then the author's writing style is too AI. Normal writing is either in certain scenes or in general vernacular. This article seems to be a bit full of nonsense. The heroine is multi-talented, with main, um, emotional scenes and some school lines, which are the three main themes of ancient novels. It's a bit old but not too wrong. Overall it's OK. It's a pity that the main world is a cultivator and not a Pokémon ai ai ai Say important things three times, this AI generator really made up the word count

I've read about 300 chapters, let me tell you my feelings. Advantages: The subject matter is really good! I really like the theme of combining Pokémon and immortality. The author's writing style is smooth, not a clichéd white text, but gives people a sense of the real world. Disadvantages: The description of the background in the novel, the description of the characters' psychology, and even the description of doing one thing are too detailed. It affects the reading experience, especially in the first few chapters, which almost delays the plot until more than 20 chapters. It feels like there are too many descriptive things, and it is most obvious when listening to the book that I have to skip chapters to read it. But things will improve after Chapter 200, and the plot will obviously speed up. Then the plot content is relatively depressing. It is obvious that the author has more experience and will bring a lot of thinking into the plot. This also leads to a lack of enjoyment. After reading more than 300 chapters, many times the protagonist's harvest should have been a refreshing scene, but it was suppressed by the protagonist's excessive thinking and sense of worry. I hope the author will work hard and look forward to your next work.

It's a very novel setting. Although I've only read Chapter 25, it doesn't matter how novel the subject matter is. It is also a depiction of the human relationship between people. The protagonist seizes every opportunity to play scheming games on people, and has an urgent desire to be injected with spiritual marrow. It made me heartbroken when I watched it. Also, I saved the fellow traveler who is the same type of person as the protagonist. I think it is necessary because the journey of cultivating immortality is too lonely. . The writing is also good. I just don't know what will happen to combat descriptions in the future. But I am willing to give five stars here.

It's good, it's good. It's just that the hook for Hua Chanye is too big. The protagonist is desperately plotting, but she inexplicably keeps up.

Xiancao, I don't know why the rating is so low, I stayed up all night to read the latest chapter The subject matter is very novel and perfectly combines the two world systems. The protagonist has a calm personality and likes to research and develop new things.

After reading Chapter 17, I can't help but praise it. This book is really good. The protagonist's IQ and ability are good in all aspects, but the balance between Pokémon's strength and immortality must be balanced. After all, Pokémon grow very fast. In fact, it's better to switch to the world of beast control. If not, add some original content. The Pokémon's food and immortality resources exceed the upper limit. I suggest the author balance the strength comparison. Anyway, in terms of appearance, I personally like Pokémon very much.