Harry Potter: What If Harry Had a Strong-Willed Older Sister?

The writing is very delicate, I quite like this style. And every character is not OOC, Harry is portrayed very well! I am the first to review this book! Hehe [send heart]

The world view is very detailed and the characters are well developed. But if the love line is gold, it will be a bit immovable, and there will always be a feeling of being forcibly bound. From the reading experience so far, even if there is not much interaction with roommates, the subtle chemical reaction is much stronger than that of Jin. Now it feels like the roommate's character construction is more fleshed out than Jin's, so that what is confusing is the relationship between the roommate and the protagonist. If the roommate wants to recruit the protagonist, the description of the roommate's career line so far has not mentioned the protagonist's position; if the roommate is another female protagonist, the description of Jin is confusing; if the roommate has no further possibility of developing a relationship with the protagonist, then the role of the words and ink used to describe the roommate is confusing. Although it can be a well-rounded character, the events described by changing the perspective in this way have little to do with the protagonist (maybe there is something I didn't pay attention to?), Which somewhat interrupts the rhythm of reading. Except for the confusing love line, the rest is pretty good. I like the diaries of those characters very much. Those details of life make people break away from the background image of labels, which is very interesting.

Great viewing experience! It's not tied yet, but the plot is quite smooth so far, and the slow pace is very comfortable to read. So who is the other heroine? No matter what, I vote for Anne

Beautiful, highly recommended! I hope the other heroine is my roommate Annie(՞_ ̫ _՞)ᐝ

Delicious and well written. But who is the other heroine? [What] @full of wisdom team building fees @full of wisdom team building fees

The writing is very good, concise and generous, easy to understand, and the ending echoes

Seeing that the author's recent update frequency is relatively low, I was afraid that the author would give up, so I came here to comment (I was really annoyed by the high frequency of abandonment by fan authors) I have only read the first few chapters so far. The writing is very delicate and makes me feel the indescribable atmosphere. I really like the heroine's character. I'll make a long review after I finish reading the rest.

The content is detailed and the author's outline is very clear. The image of the heroine is also very clear.

The writing is so good, and many small details feel like the original text. Good luck to the author! Although not many people see it now, excellent things will never be buried ᕦ(ò_óˇ)ᕤ However, I feel that some small details can be optimized. For example, there can be fewer nouns such as magic and perception. After all, the original book rarely mentions such words. It can be changed to the feeling of being noticed. The word magic seems too similar to the Internet article (just a suggestion, the author's capitalization is great) [Like]

Uh, the plot is detailed and vivid. I can't tell who the other heroine is now. I guess it's Annie.