The Immortal Empress Who Ruled for Eternity

A masterpiece, somewhere between food and grass. The rhythm of the plot is eye-catching. The character of the heroine was shaped to the point where I enjoyed it. I have nothing to say. Regarding the frequency of system panel appearances, there are suspicions of water numbers, hum. The descriptions of combat, state of mind, and breakthroughs in strength are excellent but there is still room for improvement. (The grass jelly still lacks an indescribable taste) As for the heroine's increasingly alluring physique, which makes the men around her fall in love but not in their hearts, it reminds me of an old friend. Is it you, Dark Summoner. No! ! ! A cold sweat broke out on my back. In short, the author treats the heroine's emotional line well and sets up longevity. Of course, it is best to be single. It's acceptable even if it's orange in the orange.

It's a very good book. Chapter 102 has nothing poisonous and is quite real. Sexual transformation and immortality union are also very attractive. The only shortcoming is that the pace of an immortal novel is too fast, but the storyline is quite reasonable and compact. Overall, it should be an 8+ level book [Like] @It's So Cold Today Author, you don't look like a novice at your level. Do you have any completed books on transformation/immortality before?

The later values expand too fast, but it's okay, at least it's pretty cool. No matter how powerful the protagonist becomes, all she thinks about is whether there will be a stronger man who wants to forcefully marry her. In the author's worldview, men are all like this, no matter what realm they are in.

It's a very good longevity novel [Sending Hearts] without any poisonous points in the plot. Basically, the heroine is very efficient in doing things (for example, some villains will be dealt with in advance, and there is basically no overnight feud). The author's update speed is also good, but he is good at word count. This book is also in its later stages, and it is unavoidable. In the later stage, it seemed very weak and boring. The cultivation system has the shadow of the perfect world and other major novels. The comment section is right to say that it is like a female channel. It is far-fetched based on the author's reasons for writing that the heroine becomes stronger (the appearance of the heroine is often described in the early stage). There is also the point of the body becoming sensitive. It is a bit inappropriate to put it in this kind of novel. I skipped these plots when I read it.

It's a very good novel with five-star reviews, but there are too few updates. Write more exciting content. There are also the group of licking dogs around the protagonist. The protagonist wants to be an empress in the future, so the more followers around her, the better.

I think this novel is very good. There are many funny plots interspersed in it. Already seen the latest chapter. If you are interested in male-to-female transformation, God rewards hard work, one certificate lasts forever, system, fake invincibility, and good looks come first, take a look. This novel is very well written.

It's okay. It's very beautiful. I've given it five stars right now [Adoration]. As long as the main character is uniquely beautiful, everything else is fine. As long as there's no emotional line, as long as there's no ambiguous line, I'll keep watching [laughing] To be honest, the best part is the part about falling into the immortal land. In fact, it was just so-so during the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths. I felt that entering the original world after the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths was a bit like a chronicle. The subsequent plot is not very interesting [crying]

Personal opinion, for reference only. Now I only see the way to Enze. I wish the author continuous inspiration, great progress in writing, and more practice. It may not be so obvious to understand how to refine the writing just by reading other novels. Writing style: Very good (but there are too many descriptions of body details, and there are too many erotic parts. The author must have read a lot of pornographic literature) Career: Very fast, so fast that I feel my combat power is out of balance, and my mood has always been as light as water with occasional fluctuations. There were no big setbacks to temper the heroine and she quickly found her way. Details: average Characters: Various people appeared in the middle, and the character details or changes in Lu Xingzhou, Sword God, Juggernaut and Monk were well written. The sister of Yuanshen is also very straightforward and good in character. This person lacks more highlight descriptions, but the supporting roles are normal, and the villain emperor is also clearly bad. It is not so three-dimensional, but it is okay. The description of the trade-offs between the aristocratic family and the Li family is okay at the beginning, but later the brother becomes a stranger. The characterization of Jiang at the beginning is also very good. It feels like the author has used a character with deeper thoughts, but there is actually more that can be explored in depth. The other characters feel like they are just scratching the surface. The women who come into contact with the protagonist (Ying, Yuan, Xiaolan) will inevitably have a psychological description of their bodies being yellowish. In fact, there should be some points that can be explored deeply in these female characters. It is not enough to just write about the psychological activities of the heroine. Plot: Although it is a single change, it is actually more ambiguous and stronger than others. They always focus on depicting the heroine's body details and other people's erotic scenes. The protagonist's growth path is relatively clear and very satisfying, except for the fact that he is taken out for obscenity from time to time. Overall, it's a medium-to-novice and heavy-duty novel, without the kind of conspiracy or big-shot plotting. As for the protagonist's attitude, the descriptions of those characters with high levels of cultivation in the divine realm are very bright (I hope the protagonist can clear the way to the Jedi instead of trying to seize the body or absorb it), the ghost granny and the sword god Juggernaut also have bright spots. Protagonist's personality: Flexible and flexible, kind-hearted, emphasizing love and justice but soft, tending to ignore others who have nothing to do, being indifferent to others' apparent indignities, and only sticking to oneself. Maybe it's the tendency to only care about other people's actions and not their hearts, but it's not enough. Now let's keep it to the point where the protagonist wants to be pure and pure but will be taken advantage of by female characters from time to time. The author also obviously uses this part to attract people. The protagonist's portrayal charm is still very good. The first volume was very successful. It also made me feel that the protagonist is that kind of person who should be independent from the world and only pursue getting stronger. However, the greasy plots that appeared from time to time made me feel off-putting. I felt that the protagonist was manipulated and manipulated by the author and was not three-dimensional enough, so that his character seemed too soft or puppet, and there was no more detailed depiction of growth and changes. It stands to reason that as the realm grows and the understanding of the avenue deepens, there will definitely be more detailed changes, but it still feels like that person's character, although it can be explained by not forgetting the original intention. I hope the characterization of the protagonist will be more interesting. In terms of supporting characters: I hope that there will be more three-dimensional characters or interesting funny characters or other more unexpected twists and turns. I prefer to be in control, but I still hope that the protagonist will have a strong opponent (opponent, benchmark) or someone who can't be dealt with at first (difficult to deal with) and is conquered later. Plot: I hope the author can learn how to combine everything together. Generally speaking, a story like this is fast-paced and the combat power becomes stronger quickly. It is easy to write a story or not know how to connect it with other more interesting stories. Although being invincible is fun, it's not easy to hone your writing skills and ideas. Imagination: The author's imagination is very good, and the first volume is amazing (from the trade-offs in the small family to being forced by the body to become stronger, and the response when facing Jiang), until he fights one against a hundred in the capital, he is amazing. I firmly believe that a book is written around the protagonist, and if the supporting characters are good and the plot has twists and turns, it will definitely be very interesting. I hope the author will make more progress and write better in the next book. In fact, the heroine's longevity setting is really useful. There are many things you can write about, so I'm just looking forward to it. In the beginning, I was attracted by the longevity and proficiency panels. Then I was attracted by the portrayal of the heroine in the first volume. I felt that the heroine should be beautiful and strong if she is very good.

They have flesh and blood, have feelings and know how to weigh situations. This is an excellent book, it will be very comfortable to read it patiently

Not bad, but why does the more you practice, the more sensitive you become?