Transformed into Tianshan Tonglao, My Goal Is Eternal Life

The writing is quite good and has potential. It's just that it may be a bit of a big deal, and everyone has it, such as those who like to read invincible articles, semi-invincible articles, various kinds of immortals, and those who like to lick people to repay their kindness. It seems that there are many dedicated people nowadays, and they are all people without selfish desires. It's great [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] In a simple martial arts world, science is used to explain metaphysics, and many strange things are added, such as gods and ultimate creatures like super bacteria. Moreover, I feel that the protagonist has basically no real feelings and treats most people like NPCs. He is out of tune with this world and has not integrated into it. Originally, the number of updates per day was small, but most of the article starts with explaining various theories, then demonstrates whether the results are correct, and then forcefully adds them into it reasonably. It is very boring. It can only be said that you have chosen the wrong material. It is much better to write these in a cyberpunk or wasteland world than to tinker with them in martial arts. The taste of martial arts has begun to deteriorate

I have read Chapter 95 and am currently one chapter away from catching up with the latest progress. Let's talk about the reason for deduction of points first. I came to see martial arts. The author tried to use a lot of non-martial arts elements to explain the martial arts world in the book. I was very surprised when I saw it, and I could only skip large sections when I encountered it. After all, skipping such an explanation does not affect reading. What I want to see is the plot and the interaction of the characters. I really can't stand this long theory. Let's talk about the advantages. The quantity is large, the taste is good, it is very Jianghu, and the character is round and round. The author is very thoughtful and can write a long story. Putting aside the above-mentioned shortcomings, it is worth reading in one sitting for a while.

The writing is very good, and some people like it (such as me), and it has a great and knowledgeable feeling, and I feel that I can gradually write the feeling of the protagonist leading a major event.

It's quite interesting. Those who are used to reading the same martial arts novels can give it a try, and those who can't stand it can quit. Some people who don't read the introduction and the author's explanation think they are too awesome and won't let the protagonist with character flaws go straight to it🐴. As a good reader of novels, I have to watch you guys vent. 🍅 There are really all kinds of xxs. Let's not mention that the protagonist's soul is a repressed male doctor. If the protagonist complains selfishly in his heart, it will be xxn? I usually don't know how many evil thoughts I have in my heart, but I know in my heart who has double standards. I can't do to others what I don't want to do to others. I don't see the evil label? I don't want to read the transformation stories. If you read them, you have to be hardcore. Are these people really adults? I'm very curious. Although sometimes a bit watery, the author's writing is good and beautiful.

I am used to reading cookie-cutter martial arts novels, but many of the novel settings in this book are eye-catching, incorporating the author's understanding of martial arts and combat. As for the conspiracy theory, it is just a setting and does not violate the original work. Almost all Honghuang novels are conspiracy theories and no one can say anything wrong.

There are hundreds of changes, and most of them are currently ambiguous objects. I haven't read the original work about martial arts, but I think this article is logically logical. Regarding the part about Xiaoyaozi in the early stage, my opinion is that if you look at the early stage alone, you will feel that the protagonist is double-labeled and ungrateful, but when combined with an incident in the mid-term, it makes sense (similar to being raised by an enemy, no spoilers, it is actually a bit complicated but reasonable), but in the early stage, I only said that there was a conjecture like a conspiracy theory. It is recommended that you tolerate the discomfort in the early stage, and the feeling will be very good in the middle and later stages. The protagonist is very strong in creating spells, but is limited by his semi-obsessive internal skills and body. He can crush the weak ones, and he can stay open for a while and run away against the strong ones. He will be at a disadvantage if he is attacked and restrained by the first mover. Now look at it, if there was no internal strength limit in this state, the protagonist would already be at the top of the column.

Very exciting martial arts setting. I haven't seen such a reasonable but not complicated martial arts novel for a long time. The content and plot are also very smooth. Why is there so much content about changing the world in the back? It reminds me of a book by Guo Xiang, but the title of this book is "Pursue Immortality." If you change society, don't you deviate from the topic?

It's easy to put readers off at the beginning, but it's interesting later on. Theory + practice are carried out, and I have not suffered any losses. I look forward to seeing more apprentices in the future. If there is another hundred, it hasn't appeared yet, maybe it will be Master and Disciple [Admiration]

I saw the shadow of an old friend. There is an author next door who wrote a 9-million-word Naruto story, all of which is similar to preaching. Later, he wrote a story about a vixen in the Conferred God Period, which is also written in a similar way. This book should be that author's vest, right? I came to the free Internet to publish millions of words of private sermons, which finally gave me some conscience. 3 Stars plus one star for you.

It's pretty good so far, a bit bland but not boring.