Transformed into Tianshan Tonglao, My Goal Is Eternal Life

It's written quite well and shows potential. It's just that being so popular might attract some attention; there are all sorts of people, like those who like to read invincible or semi-invincible stories, various cultivation novels, and those who like to fawn over others and repay favors. It seems there are many selfless people these days, truly selfless and admirable! 🍉🍉🍉

I've read up to chapter 95, just one chapter short of catching up. First, let me explain why I deducted points. I came here for a wuxia story, but the author attempts to explain the wuxia world using a lot of non-wuxia elements. This made me feel very out of place, and I had to skip large sections. After all, skipping these explanations doesn't affect the reading experience.

It's very well written. Some people like it (like me) and it feels like a great talent. I also feel that it's gradually able to portray the protagonist leading a major event.

It's actually quite good. Those tired of the same old wuxia novels might want to give it a try. If you can't stand it, you can leave. Some people who don't read the synopsis or the author's explanation think they're so great, and they won't let the protagonist with flaws just start having sex. I'm just trying to enjoy the novel, and I have to watch you vent.

Having grown accustomed to the same old wuxia novels, this book offers a refreshing change with its many novel settings, incorporating the author's understanding of martial arts and combat. As for the conspiracy theories, they're just part of the setting and don't deviate from the original work; almost all fantasy novels are based on conspiracy theories, and nobody says they're bad.

Currently, most of the characters are ambiguous relationships. It's a wuxia (martial arts) story; I haven't read the original novel, but the plot seems logically sound. Regarding the early part about Xiaoyaozi, my opinion is that the protagonist seems hypocritical and ungrateful at first glance, but it becomes reasonable when considered in conjunction with a mid-game event (similar to being…

The martial arts system is fantastic; it's been a long time since I've seen a martial arts novel with such a reasonable yet uncomplicated system. The plot also flows smoothly. Why is there so much talk about changing the world later on? It reminds me of a book about Guo Xiang, but that book's title is about pursuing immortality. Changing society like that is deviating from the main theme; it's just a superfluous addition.

The opening might be off-putting, but it gets better later. It combines theory and practice, and hasn't suffered any major setbacks. I'm looking forward to seeing how many apprentices there are later on. There's also a "hundred" chapter, but it hasn't appeared yet; maybe a master-apprentice relationship will follow. 🥰

I saw a shadow of an old friend. There's an author next door who wrote 9 million words of Naruto fiction, all of it preachy and didactic. Later, he wrote a story about fox spirits from the Investiture of the Gods era, also in a similar style. This book must be that author's pseudonym, right? Coming to free online novels to spew out millions of words of didacticism, at least he has some conscience. I'll add one star to my 3-star rating.

It's pretty good so far; it's a bit bland, but not boring either.