The Reborn White Moonlight: The Obsessive Tycoon Fights to Claim Her

It can be seen that the author's writing skills are relatively immature, and the whole text is "fighting monsters". This is the failure of the sweet novel. The relationship between the male and female protagonists depends entirely on outsiders. The warmth and emotional descriptions of the male and female protagonists come and go only with trust, without too much psychological excess. It feels like primary school students falling in love, not quite like the emotions of adults. Also, the appearance of the male protagonist feels like an NPC completing a fixed task, while the appearance of the female protagonist also revolves around her best friend. The author emphasizes that the manager is for the artist, or he wants to highlight the career ability of the female protagonist. However, as a reader, I only feel that the appearance of this best friend is like a paper figure, without thinking for herself, and the whole process is just to highlight the female protagonist. The ending is also rather rushed, and the author probably didn't know how to write it until the end. This is the first time I have read a novel and written such a long review. The above are some of my personal opinions. The creation of every book is not easy, and every rising excellent author has to go through countless polishings to succeed. I believe that subsequent authors will probably write better works. This novel is like the experience of a newbie practicing. If you read it without thinking, it can still be regarded as an encouragement to a new author.

As I continue to follow up, the male and female protagonists created by the author are both very strong, and the female protagonist is no longer weak and needs protection. She is very interesting. I hope that in the future, the male and female protagonists will help each other to defeat the bad guys, and they will have a good harvest in career and love!

The characters of the male and female protagonists in the short story are pretty good, but I feel that the whole book is not that complete and lacks some details. For example, why did the male and female protagonists break up before, and what happened between Grandpa Sheng and Grandma Sheng? I'm quite curious myself Of course, this is just my personal opinion. If you only focus on the male and female protagonists, this book is quite interesting. If the female protagonist has a misunderstanding, she will just say that she is unhappy and she will not let herself be wronged.

Sheng Jinzhou + Su Jin Rebirth story + Wife Chasing Crematorium + Boss Crazy Review of Literature. I didn't write about two people getting together and breaking up four years ago. In fact, I really want to read it. Also, I feel that the author's name is useless. The heroine's best friend is named Ning Mo, the hero's mother is named Ning Man, and then a killer named Ning An comes out. The three of them are not related at all. Secondly, the heroine's scumbag father and scumbag mother and Bailianhua's adopted sister are just bankrupt. I feel uncomfortable with the abuse. After all, the heroine lost her life in the previous life. In the end, the ending is too hasty. Unlike many rebirth novels, this one is not about the heroine chasing her husband unilaterally, but a two-way redemption. After the heroine was reborn, she finally saw clearly the love deep in Sheng Jinzhou's heart and stopped escaping; and Sheng Jinzhou finally waited until his Bai Yueguang turned around and gave her all his tenderness and preference. From being separated for four years as strangers, to getting back together again, every interaction is sweet and every pull is full of tension.

The short story is interesting, the heroine returns and kills decisively, and renews her relationship with the hero. Get rid of all the people with bad intentions! Not only has love been gained, but friendship has also been consolidated, and this life has a happy ending.

It's good-looking. The heroine has the words to say it. There is no misunderstanding. A little sweet

2026.3.5 18:13 Except for the hasty ending, everything else is okay. I thought the heroine had some kind of vest [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Not bad, very pretty

Looks very comfortable, nothing uncomfortable

Good, good, look, look, look