I'm Far Too Cautious in the One-Punch World

Wow, this is amazing! 😭😭😭 I started reading it as a light read, but I didn't expect the author to be so talented. It's a rare gem among One-Punch Man fanfics, it's just that there aren't enough of them! 😢

The new approach combines fantasy and martial arts with One-Punch Man without feeling too out of place. The protagonist's survival strategy is also just right. After gaining confidence and having a backup plan, he can relax a bit and then gradually step back into the spotlight from his clone to his main body. (PS: One-Punch Man actually discusses different perspectives on the concepts of hero, justice, and power. Since it's based on One-Punch Man, the author shouldn't be too biased.)

Overall, it's not bad. The main character and the other characters are very well-defined and vivid. However, the setting could be improved. The first and ninth levels are not as intuitive as the Qi Refining and Golden Core Dao, which has a well-established system.

It's really good. Of all the One-Punch Man fanfiction by Qi Dian and Tomato, this novel is my number one (this is just my personal opinion). Other One-Punch Man fanfiction novels often have various problems. Some have a chaotic protagonist system, some have multiple female leads, some have poorly developed male leads, and many suffer from pretentious, artsy writing.

The clones are enough; let the main body come out when it's time, otherwise it will become poisonous.

Five stars to encourage you! The early chapters were alright, but the romance felt rushed (they started dating right after a fight) and I didn't quite understand it. The author could learn from other romance novels on other websites or by reading some on Tomato. The combat scenes were handled well, and the main plot is currently fine. If things get really bad, focus more on the combat; romance doesn't need to be rushed.

It's alright. The cautious character trait is commendable, but it feels like it's not cautious enough. Simply whipping the corpse and having a backup plan doesn't qualify as caution; the scenes involving fighting the tornado make it seem like overconfidence in one's own abilities. And even that wasn't maintained, as the scenes of whipping the corpse disappear later.

After reading a dozen or so chapters, I can say the author has done a fantastic job designing the protagonist's power system and character. The plot moves quickly with minimal unnecessary dialogue. Even after just a short while, I knew this was going to be a hit, and sure enough, it has over 100,000 reads.

There are no obvious flaws, and the character development for One-Punch Man is excellent. I read it in one go, and if the writing style remains the same throughout, it will definitely be a top-quality read! 🤔

Author, I've traveled back from 500 years in the future. The future reality will slowly merge with your novel, and aliens from another world will invade Earth. To achieve victory, they captured you before you could write the ending, after which humanity faced a true catastrophe. Five hundred years from now, the genius Mr.