One-Punch Man: Living with Saitama and His S-Rank Superpowers

It's pretty good. I guess I didn't grasp the emotional description between the characters well in the first 20 chapters or so. The relationship between the protagonist and the young Saitama is very subtle, but Saitama got better after losing her hair. In addition, the most important thing is that the quality of the plot has improved significantly since chapter 50. The use of the "emotional lack" module is very genius, which is really a piece of gold among all the one-punch movies. The interaction with Tatsumaki is also rare and natural and tranquil. The writing is always online. It is not top-notch but very comfortable. As long as you continue to maintain One Punch fandom, you will definitely open a new era because of you. Come on [like][like][like] @ My suggestion is to optimize the description of Saitama in the front and modify the feminine descriptions such as blushing. Otherwise, it will be easy to persuade people to quit if the previous plot does not attract people. I almost quit at that time [face covering]

The dog put his hands behind his back and said to the cat: "If you guess correctly how many pieces of sugar I have in my hand, I will give you both." The cat said depressedly: "My Tas1r2 gene lacks 247 base pairs and cannot synthesize the protein required for the sweet taste receptor. It cannot taste sweetness. Why do I want sugar?" The dog smiled and said: "I know, so this sugar is made by the reaction of amylase to stimulate aspartame. When you eat it, it is your β19 that is stimulated. Olfactory nerve reflex arc, there will be a sweet feeling

(The following evaluations are all personal opinions) It is currently tied, and the evaluation is good; the previous plot between Saitama and the male protagonist is indeed better; from the protagonist's group being destroyed to the protagonist's awakening, the narrative is a bit too fast and feels too sudden. After all, it is to serve the plot to speed up the progress, but it is too urgent and not handled well. At least the narrative is not wrong. The daily plot is good and I give out some candy from time to time. I am also looking forward to the next plot. Because I read Chapter 99 directly from the first chapter, I had a better impression of it; after reading it, I felt that it was a bit sadistic but not to the point of painful literature. The overall feeling was good. Of course, there are some minor points that are innocuous from my personal point of view; the whole book is still good. (The above is just my personal opinion. If you don't like it, please don't comment. Comments are welcome if there is any controversy. After all, as others have said, I have never had any health benefits. I give you a five-star encouragement and hope that the author will get better and better [blowing kiss])

The cover looks like the main character

It cured my hypotension. The author is very good at writing about the sunset of the sun. I must recommend such a good book [Like]

666. Since the protagonist lost his memory, the following plots feel like he is in jail. The 50 pictures I have seen so far are still in jail, but I am looking forward to the subsequent plots more and more.

Yes, it seems logical at the moment, and the process of getting to know Saitama is also very natural, unlike other novels. All in all, it's still very comfortable so far. Let's look at the emotional line with Tatsumaki later.

It's a good book, but I'm curious about what route the author will take next? Is it a reset line or the storyline of the original plot? There is nothing wrong with the original plot. If the line is reset, Star Wolf will be very troublesome. It depends on what route the author takes next.

It was very well written. Twenty chapters almost gave me a 7-star review, but I still read it.

The author's description of the emotional drama is very delicate, but it seems a bit gay in the early stage, but it gets much better in the later stage.