After the Mission Succeeds, I Die of Illness, and the Heroine Finally Breaks Down

It's very sweet, and I know it will definitely be the ending of he, so after the death of the male protagonist, the heroine's knife to know the truth can be regarded as a revenge story for the heroine, and a foreshadowing for the heroine to meet and get along sweetly with the hero again in the future. Rounding it off is equivalent to not having a knife. The overall pacing is pretty good. Although I have seen many similar plots, this one is more enjoyable to read.

I cried to death, I haven't seen such a good article in a long time. The romance novels I read before were so endless that my IQ was rubbed to the ground. It's rare to see a normal article! ! ! Invincible, the rest is pure wisdom

It's really a story that I hate and love at the same time (laughs). My suggestion is that if you want to finish the whole portion by yourself and don't like spoilers, don't read the table of contents; if you want to avoid pitfalls in advance, read the table of contents and you'll almost understand. It's a good story. I haven't really seen many stories about time travel with memories from different timelines. It's quite novel. However, the author's writing skills are a bit immature. Even if some thunderous words are removed, the narrative rhythm, plot logic, and even the emotional line are a bit confusing. Overall, it feels to me like it is purely event-driven, and the characters' emotions are simply filling in for subsequent events, so I always feel that their emotions are a bit, um, cheap. It's not that this is not good, because it is simple and easy to understand, and readers will not feel tired when reading it. I just think it can be better.

This book has a lot of stomachaches that rival The Divine Band. But all I see is stomachache [laughs]

Overall, I feel good about it. It is one of the best female videos I have ever read. It is both sweet and medium-sized. It is quite engaging and makes people want to read more. It can be read as a dessert when the book is low. The content design is not novel, but the plot is not too slow and compact. 1000H Bookworm Review No. 2.

This is a youthful pain literature like Zhuang Sheng's Dream of Butterfly with some fantasy color. It is not a physical fantasy, but an emotional fantasy youth love story filled with sadness from beginning to end. I admit that I am a bitch who likes to look at knives, and I even prefer this kind of sweet knife mixture to sugar. At present, I feel that the writing is good, and the foreshadowing is well arranged without being obtrusive or hidden. You can basically guess that it will be used in the plot later, and it is precisely because of this that I have been intrigued. The only shortcoming at the moment is that it is too short. I am really afraid that this story is be. If it were to be completed around this dream chapter, it would be enough as a short story, but it would miss a large part of the emotion. Tragedy is indeed tearing beautiful things into pieces for people to watch, but it does not mean that incomplete tragedy and blank he are what I expect. It's really not appropriate to write too long. The price is about three to four hundred thousand. This book is quite suitable for publishing. Although the introduction of the god into the plot seems a bit awkward, it is true that the foreshadowing of this god is not easy to change. Recommended, full score, good book

Let's talk about the shortcomings first. The emotional changes later are still a bit abrupt. Although I can understand the reunion after a long separation, meeting again can make people unable to help but reunite. But because the protagonist hated the heroine at the time, it should have been more difficult to tolerate her again. After all, as far as memory is concerned, death of resentment and doubt in the fourth life is shorter than love in the first life, and the memory will be less. So when I see the protagonist, because of the memory of the fifth life, let go of the heroine and leave ruthlessly, I can completely accept this setting. After this, it is reasonable for the heroine to travel, immerse herself in nature, then recognize herself, and finally come back. But the problem arises with the male protagonist. He has become the same as before, working, working, and still working. In other words, he is still avoiding feelings. He has no chance to re-examine himself, and he has not really figured out why he still loves the female protagonist, so he accepts the return of the female protagonist without permission. This is something I don't approve of. The advantage is that the plot is still okay. Although it is a bit cliche, it is still fresh and fresh. It is not written to death or completely cliche. The author has his own control over the plot. And emotionally, it's okay, a little bit of a stretch, but it's also reasonable. As for the characters, the male and female protagonists are quite likable. Unfortunately, the method is more direct description, and I like to directly express the personalities of the male and female protagonists. Then, the small amount of side descriptions are still told from interchangeable perspectives. Furthermore, the supporting characters are not vivid enough, too one-sided, and too stereotyped. Forget it, it's understandable. It's short, so there's nothing I can do about it. All in all, it is a good short article that can be read quickly in half a day. It is not suitable for repeated review. However, we should also be more tolerant and encourage new authors, so... 5 Stars

The overall writing was pretty good, but when Jiang Xu in the fifth life lost his memory and turned into Jiang Xu in the first life, I always felt that he was no longer Jiang Xu. I couldn't watch it anymore. I just skipped and watched it, and when the heroine was chasing Jiang Xu, this feeling was even stronger.

I don't know why the rating is so low. Although the plot is very frustrating in terms of emotions, the writing at the end is pretty good and the writing is concise. So far, the reasons for hating the male protagonist have been clearly explained, which is pretty good. Also, the will of the world is a personal machine [smile]

Invincible, this kind of writing is really rare, very beautiful The language habits are very special, relatively concise, and shrouded in a touch of sadness. In terms of writing style, this novel is very good. As for the storytelling being inconsistent with common sense, that is to be expected. After all, the purpose of the story is to promote the emotional line, and it is somewhat illogical when it comes to the supernatural will of the world, which is completely understandable. Other articles of the same type that I have read have these problems. There is one thing I want to say to the author: don't torture for too long. You must pay attention to the proportion of knife and sugar. If you keep cutting it, you will feel uncomfortable and you won't be able to stand it anymore. I can't wait to see the sugar!