[National Fate Survival] My System Comes from China

Overall, it's pretty good-looking. The strength of the heroine is very reasonable and admirable, but the weakness and cowardice of others are not so reasonable. After all, they all come from the end of the world. The pressure of survival is given to everyone. Those with weak survival ability will die early. When you arrive at a place rich in resources, who wouldn't hoard them desperately to survive?

It's good to watch. I personally like the storyline before the heroine and her teammates didn't come, because the previous storyline was when the heroine was alone. I felt very comfortable watching it. I personally like this feeling better. Then 10 people suddenly showed up, which made me feel very abrupt. This is how it felt to me. There are too many people, and I don't like this kind of team with too many people. Overall, it's a very good book, but personal preferences vary. For me, the arrival of these 10 people caught me off guard, so I was mentally prepared, but I still couldn't accept it. I wish this book will get better and better in the future.

The author's writing is very good. To be honest, other national fortune-telling stories either have to be updated by the author after a long time, or the plot is not good at all, but the author's work is better than those. Not only is the update time fixed, but the plot is also very good. The heroine is vividly written. The heroine is not invincible, but she also gives people a very strong feeling. And it does not seem to vilify any country at the moment. It is just fair (Japan is not counted, they are not worthy). I hope the author will continue to work hard and write better. And this time, I thought of commenting because I was so fascinated by it.

Personally, I prefer the survival interaction mode between the heroine and Leopard in the early stage. I am busy every day to improve my survivability step by step. Later, when I have a team, it feels boring. In the final battle, the heroine's country wins and resurrects the other team members. All other countries are defeated. In the end, it was discovered that the heroine was quite miserable. She had participated in dozens of games, had her memory erased, implanted new memories across time, and was thrown into a so-called advanced civilization trial field game. A group of orc-like things were watching and placing bets in the live broadcast. But I feel like the heroine's life is so miserable. When she opens her eyes, she is trying to survive in a broken game. Who is a good person who likes this kind of life?

It looks great. I finished it overnight. The heroine worked really hard. I really like this subject matter. But I can write more about the heroine catching some domesticated animals alive to contribute to the development of the national breeding industry. Eggs and duck eggs may contain fertilized eggs. Come on, author [shy]

How can I put it, in terms of the completeness of the logical structure of the story, this is a good story, but in the end Lin Xi did not break out of this Truman world, and she couldn't even remember a little bit of news. I don't think it's good. The author wrote that she participated in seventeen games of this kind, so there should be some possibility of awakening. In fact, this can be written as a series. From not knowing to knowing, from being unable to resist to ending and overthrowing everything, you can continue writing. The ending of all other countries is really cruel, but if you can continue writing and finally let Lin Xi overturn everything and restore the previously selected planet to its original state, I think it is still okay. Really, the author writes a series, think about it.

The specific content seems pretty good, and the survival aspect is very well written. However, some situations could be abbreviated, and some explosive points are missing. Others are good, but why should gender opposition be highlighted? You must know that the audience for your story about a heroine is very small, and it is even less based on the survival of the country. I hope the author can try to downplay this aspect of the description, and focus more on survival and the like. Also, you have to cast ten very ordinary people. You are suppressing the battle too hard. There must be at least one or two soldiers who have been militarized. At least the protagonist will have some helpers. I want to write it as You can pick out a few and write them down. Before, I thought that female soldiers would appear to help the protagonist, or soldiers would come out to relieve the pressure of the protagonist. But the result is this. Maybe I think it is too novelistic based on some logic. The author is a girl, and some things are written in detail, but the writing is really good. It's Ye. I read it to chapter 452 and it's over.

National Games Game - Wilderness Survival - Collection Infrastructure - Ten Thousand Times Present - Food - System - No CP, the golden finger is appropriate, the plot is gradual and relaxed, and the proportion of food mentioned above is a bit too much. The heroine Lin Xi travels through the wasteland world 50 years after the nuclear war. The "Civilization Revival System" was useless for many years until she was selected by the National Games game. She identifies mutant plants in other worlds, collects and fights ferocious beasts, builds safe houses, stores supplies, constantly manifests, handcrafts, rewards resources, and releases tasks to enter dungeons from time to time... The lone wolf in the early stage, the team in the later stage, the pet "Shen Gongbao", and ten more people from each country after chapter 350... Personally, I feel that it still looks better when it is a lone wolf, with more people, and less of the sense of non-stop fighting and crisis in the front.

It looks good, but it's too dense. What should I say? Just like delicacies from the mountains and seas, you may feel delicious if you eat them once in a while, but if you eat them on a daily basis, it would be a pity to throw them away and eat them tastelessly. This book gave me this feeling

Overall, it's okay. The writing was really good at the beginning ヾ(ω*)ノ. The heroine went from being weak to becoming stronger gradually, with sweat and hard work. ~(˶╹ꇴ╹˶)~ It was steady and steady step by step, but the last few chapters were not as satisfactory as expected, ᜊ•ᴗ•ᜊ I have been in this world for many days. Players from other countries, such as the bear country, the bald eagle, and the previous few players, I remember that they were not ordinary people from the beginning. Would they not know how to build a warmer and sheltered place? Also, even if you find a cave to live in, most people will make a trap or something at the entrance of the cave, but they will be so stupid and do nothing. In the last few chapters, about the bald eagle country, I wonder what the author wants to express? To express your perseverance despite adversity? And in that bear country, a little bear came to express that a strong man can also be gentle? The more you look, the harder it becomes to guess⚆ɞ⚆