Surviving on an Alien Planet: From the Start, Raising a Young Lady and Beastgirls

Come on, big brother who writes harem stories. Go away if you are single or have no girls, harem literature is the orthodoxy! ! ! ! [Laughing awkwardly]

It's very interesting. I really like this kind of farming story that travels between two worlds. There are many advantages, so I won't list them all. I think the best thing is that the two worlds in this article are well written, because most of the articles about traveling between two worlds are well written in different worlds, but the original world is poorly written. In this article, farming, collecting tribes, and killing giant beasts in a different world are well written. The protagonist travels back to the original world to grab resources and the reactions of the people in the original world are also very interesting. My personal shortcoming is that the relationship develops too quickly, and there are too many descriptions of the appearance of the twins' mother. I hope I won't accept them in the harem (if I accept them, I hope it will be written that the twins are adopted, and I don't really like to be a thief) Also, the protagonist develops too fast. It feels like there is nothing in the original world to help the protagonist. I don't know how I will write it in the future, but I believe the author can balance it well (this point is mentioned in the article) All in all, the shortcomings outweigh the good points. Come on, the author. It's been a long time since I've seen such a well-written book that makes me want to keep reading. [Like][Like][Like] It was indeed okay in the early stage, but now it is a bit mediocre as it is a parallel world and a virtual world. The narrative logic feels a bit confusing, including the part that travels decades later, which feels very stiff and forced to move people. Maybe it's just a simple interpenetration between the two worlds and there's no need to write about it. In short, it just fell into a cliché and it doesn't have the amazing feeling that made people shine before.

Recommended to read, a very interesting story about alien development with multiple female protagonists. The further back you look, the larger the world background becomes, with a sci-fi flavor and yet focusing on daily life. There are currently two female protagonists (also growth-type), there are no mindless plots that hold back the story, and the author's writing style is very interesting (it's very relaxing to watch). The further back you look, the less interesting it becomes. I thought it was a science fiction article and the setting was eye-catching, but this article is like a vibranium spear. Some science fiction settings are just for the protagonist to have a harem with a girl with animal ears. Of course, these plots can still be read as ordinary text. But the daily chapter is too long. I thought it would be about earth culture and exploring the universe later. At present, it seems that it is just an excessive description of beast-eared girls and the method of reproduction, right? At the same time, there is little growth in the protagonist, and even a slight decline in IQ. He only knows that he has reproduced, and the description style is a bit anime-style, with the beast-eared girl and some fantasy creatures that change in size at every turn. Overall, you can only watch daily life, pseudo-science fiction, and individualism (the protagonist). If you want to read about survival, group portraits, technological explosions, etc., Run away.

Come on, big brother who writes harem stories! The writing is good and the subject matter is very novel. However, I have only read Chapter 63 so far. The writing is smooth and interesting. As for the rest, I don't know how it will be.

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It's beautiful, very imaginative, and very novel.

Not bad, not bad, good, good, if you can keep it up. There are some small areas where the processing is not the best, but it is still a good way to deal with it. If you want to give it a 4.5, But Tomato can only give it a 4 or 5, then give it a 5. The 0.5 Is equivalent to an encouragement to the author. Li, come on, you wrote the big cat [laugh][like] (Note: I have read about eighty or ninety chapters now, and it is pretty good. If there are any problems, I will revise them at any time in the future (^￫ᴥ￩^)[ʕಠɷಠʔ])

It's a very interesting story, good-looking, but I personally feel it has some minor flaws. The urgency of three minutes is not expressed, and the description feels like it lasts three hours. Although it is very urgent, a single time is still enough. Anyway, cheers to the author, it's very interesting.

The setting is just to travel between two worlds to dump supplies, but through minor changes such as time limits, an urgent and passionate atmosphere is created to create excitement. All I can say is that good writing must go through good design.

Among the same genre, both the plot and the behavior of the protagonist are very good, and there are no depressive or vulgar routines. Unlike other novels, it constantly consumes feelings to stimulate emotions, and uses the abilities of normal people to take the most appropriate actions. I will add more words later when I have more words in this heart [Chigua]