System on the Run? The Campus Beauty Offers Herself to Make Me Her System

Actually, generally speaking, the plot of Blue Star is quite good. It can be said that it is more attractive to me, and it is also good for Tomato. 😄 But I also can't stand the show of swords later. After all, it is a small parallel world, so it's best not to have too much content. 😄 It doesn't need to be too detailed, especially everyone's language, actions, and expressions. First, I explained that I spent more than a dozen chapters, and at most three or four chapters would be enough. The author wrote whatever he thought of. It seemed like he wrote a lot, but it felt like a running account, and it was not attractive enough. I wanted to skip this part, but at the end of the book, I was still speechless. I would like to give you some suggestions to make Blue Star more strategic. You can put a few more systems in Blue Star and expand them at the same time without writing them one by one. And then there will be spiritual energy recovery, which has great potential, and can't the protagonist also be a middleman? Everything is scanned by oneself, which means that it is difficult for the protagonist to obtain higher-level items. In the end, I was so kind-hearted that I couldn't bear to do it, so I gave it four stars. The author needs to work harder [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

I feel that the writing is very good so far, but the title of the book seems unattractive. In the first world, a sword is shown, and a Japanese corpse is exchanged for a ton of supplies. It doesn't slow down the pace at all. It's fun from beginning to end. [Sending my heart] 👍

A reminder for book friends who haven't read it yet, this is a love story covered in a system. I have read 75 chapters so far. They are either in Cao Pi or on Cao Pi's road. A lot of ink is spent on the girlfriend of the main world. The other worlds are basically very short descriptions. Although the writing in the main world is okay, this kind of writing should appear in female channels rather than male channels.

It's so good to watch, I think it's amazing, I'll update it quickly, and I'll give the first heroine more plot roles. I really like the little diva in the story. It's so good to watch. I love watching it. I love watching it. I love watching it. I love watching it. [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Air kiss][Air kiss][Air kiss][Air kiss][Air kiss][Air kiss][Air kiss][Air kiss][Air kiss][Air kiss][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore]

Come, the author, read with me, I solemnly swear: starting from today Beginning and never changing. I will not watch dramas, travel, or give birth disease. I won't play games, I won't do anything. Strict self-discipline and cherish time Like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, hard work Brilliant, taking pleasure in coding, refined into steel a hundred times, worthy of readers, unparalleled Ashamed of youth and worthy of the future. As an author, I Strict oath: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. The code word is me I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently I am the keyboard in the darkness, the guard on the Great Wall of Internet, I myself I am willing to dedicate my life to coding. Do this every day and night [laughter]

Come on, author! In fact, I still prefer the plot on the earth. It's not that Liang Jian is not well written, it just doesn't make me so sympathetic. If nothing else, your book can still be a little popular. I still believe in my own vision. Hehe 😳 6 or 7 is a very low rating? Is it because this is the author's first book? Did I make a mistake? \(`Δ')/

Create a world in the future. Then cultivate all kinds of talents, all kinds of treasures, geniuses and treasures, but you don't use them. Just create it from the system and give it to them directly from your own world. Moreover, the characters you summon can refine elixirs and weapons in your world, and can also be sold to travelers. You can also create a Zhutian trading platform. There are also chat groups. In the early stage, it relies on various emotions and the origin of life, and in the later stage, it relies on the origin of the world. Change the fate of all worlds and absorb the origin and laws of the world.

Very nice and super cool article! After the protagonist has the body of the system, he uses various templates to obtain energy, keeps snowballing, and keeps getting stronger! There is a girlfriend in the middle, and it is not 1v1. I feel that this is a bit weird. On the one hand, the heroine is written as a love brain, and on the other hand, I want to write the protagonist as an infatuated lover. Later, I broke this idea, and the idea that a strong man can have countless women. . . It would be better to just treat Ruyan as an ordinary girlfriend from the beginning. The ending was okay, but it was a pity that we didn't see the enemies of Blue Star in the previous life. After all, they were the enemies who killed the protagonist in the previous life. Why should we give them a surprise when they invaded? It's a pity here!

If the setting of the global hegemony system is extended to after the victory of the Anti-Japanese War, it will inevitably involve the imagination of the path after the victory of the revolution. However, once this kind of imagination is divorced from the background of people's supremacy, it can easily slide into the narrative of personal ambition and conflict with historical reality (the legitimacy of the revolutionary regime comes from the people). I advise the author of this copy of Bright Sword World to take care of yourself.

They are not allowed to meet each other for a year, but how can Emperor Ruyan not fall in love with the male protagonist?