
Apprenticed to Master Simu: I Slay Demons, Earn Merit, and Become an Immortal!
拜师四目:我靠斩妖,功德成仙!
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- Ongoing
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- 704k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban Cultivation
- Updated
- 4mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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334Chapters
88Reads
5.7Score
23Listens
126.5kReads · all time
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One Female Lead, No Harem, No Flirting Around
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It's very interesting. Although I haven't finished it yet, I hope this is a novel with a single female protagonist, otherwise it will definitely not be very popular. This theme setting is really not suitable for multiple female protagonists. The male protagonist and the little fox will be very good as a pair.
The plot is ups and downs, exciting, and full of unexpected turns, keeping readers interested in reading and immersed in it. The story structure is exquisite, with a fascinating beginning and a long ending. The overall layout is natural, the logic is clear and rigorous, the layers are clear, and the connections between paragraphs are natural and tight. The characters are vivid and full of personality, as if they are really living in front of the readers. The description of the characters is very deep and can reveal the inner world of the characters. The writing is fluent and the rhetoric is appropriate, showing extraordinary literary skills. The language is easy to understand without losing literary grace, is close to the reality of life, and is highly readable. It has far-reaching intentions, profound thoughts, depth, connotation, and philosophy, and can make readers think. It is sincere, down-to-earth, not cold or esoteric, and can arouse emotional resonance among readers.
It looks good, but the fan fiction should be written a little differently. I feel that many things are quite novel, without classic routines or poisonous points. I don't know if it will be a single heroine or multiple heroines? If there are 2.3 More heroines, I still hope to accept Ren Tingting. After all, Ren Tingting's setting does not conflict with the fox demon's setting, and she can be given some qualifications. The bad thing is that there are too few and not enough to see. The next few dozen pictures feel like writing a diary, and there is no feeling when reading them. This book is like a person without a soul. Also, the pace is too fast and there are only a few chapters in one copy. If it is to be finished quickly, then I didn't say it. If not, then change it quickly, otherwise no one will read it. For example, the copy of Secret Realm ended in two chapters. Write the content more vividly. The writing is too rigid. If you don't know how to write, you can just find a book about cultivating immortals and read it. How do they write their copy? Also, the protagonist should not use adjectives such as "extremely perfect" in everything he does. Use less or no adjectives. Otherwise, when you read it, you will feel that the protagonist is already invincible. Then what else should I read? The author still has a lot to learn, so come on. Generally speaking, it has ideas and ideas, but unfortunately the writing and writing style are too poor.
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It's ridiculous and humorous, hahahahahaha. I've never watched Jiu Shu before. I can't understand it. I can't understand it at all. Come on!
It looks pretty good, but the key is that it is different from the plot in the movie, which surprised me. Everyone has their own character, which is really good, especially the villain, who is quite pitiful! ! I like Little Fox very much. I hope I can write more about it. It's great! Ren Tingting is too miserable, please give her a good ending! ! ! Come on come on! More!
Everyone is welcome to come and see it. If you have any questions, just ask them.
I'm out of ideas, the updates are too slow, I feel like this novel is about to be mailed.
It's a very interesting book with great details. I listened to it for an hour before I knew it. I've been following this book recently. It's most comfortable to listen to a book while working.
The writing of the male protagonist is interesting, hahahaha. I look forward to the performance of the male protagonist in the future. I will update it quickly. Ten chapters a day. The author cannot afford to languish.