Xu Zixiu: “Cultivation is like a blaze soaring into the sky on a night without reply.”
Qi Zhengrong: “I have two disciples. One is called Xu Zixiu, and the other is called Ji Qinghui.”
Ji Qinghui: “My junior brother is still far from mastering his art.”
Li Yangui: “No need to be jealous, everyone. Sure, I'm handsome, but I'm young too, with a bright future ahead of me. Unlike you, you're already finished.”
Si Yuchi: “The scabbard held a blade that had been lonely for a hundred years. At last, I caught the tassel of his wandering sword.”
Guxiang Ming: “The door to my old family home seemed like an old man. A gentle push made it creak out a long sigh, as if complaining that I'd disturbed its long slumber.”
Qin Xiaoyu: “I'm still young, and I've got talent too. Xu Zixiu… there's no doubt about his character either. I won't regret being with him.”
An Mei: “He's my best fortune. Master asked for it, so I'll listen to Master.”
Jiang Yuyan: “Whoever marries you would be terribly unlucky.”
Cui Mingzhu: “Keep it up, Cui Mingzhu. The future is bright!”
Yu Wanyin: “My lord, Xu Zixiu.”
Zhao Kong: “Beyond sacrifice lies more sacrifice; beyond keeping watch lies yet more keeping watch.”
Sun Miao: “When realization finally came, crashing down like thunder and lightning, the conviction buried in my heart was laid bare in all its searing clarity.”
Xu Songran: “Life is the forging of a poem from fragments that face death and live on. Within it, I am the beginning, the end, and eternity itself.”
Zhao Tiehe: “I've been dumped.”
Niu Ben: “Returning to an old place is like carving a mark in a boat to find a lost sword. Only that year's victories surpass every year after.”
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It's quite good. I like the explanations and interpretations of the Tao. However, I wish the relationships between the female leads were developed in more detail. It felt too fast. From the initial innocent feelings to the current flirtatious talk, it felt like something was missing. They said they liked and loved each other without really understanding each other, and those who had been together longer seemed unwilling to face reality. The pacing could be slower.
Consistent style, no need to say more, just give it a boost.
It's alright. The beginning is unusually watchable for a traditional fantasy series, and most importantly, I really like the multiple female leads. [Learned something new] To be honest, I still dislike Sun Miao quite a bit. Later on, he was suddenly redeemed. Also, the scene where he pinned the female lead against the wall in the early episodes was slightly toxic to me.
The writing is good, and the plot logic is much better than those clichéd cultivation novels.
Hmm, it's pretty good so far, please keep writing! 😭😭😭😭 Don't abandon it! 😭😭😭😭 Don't make it too hard on the stomach! 😭😭😭😭 Don't let it be a heartless story! 😭😭😭😭
Great! The writing is quiet and delicate, the female lead is well-developed and vividly portrayed, very good indeed. The few flaws are the silly supporting characters and the virgin male lead, but considering the quiet and simple writing style, the male lead is quite suitable. Too much eroticism would ruin the overall atmosphere.
It has a strong traditional fantasy feel, and its exploration of cultivation is also excellent. Most importantly, the author updates incredibly fast! A full score, it absolutely deserves a full score!
It's written like the romance magazines I read in elementary school.
With so many female leads, can I manage to win them over?
The early writing style was quite reassuring.