The Record of the Immortal Maidens of Fuyao

The writing is good, and the overall impression is very good. As for letting the cousin off the hook, I don't think it's okay. First of all, the relationship between the protagonist and the cousin was not bad in the past, and the protagonist is not heartless. Furthermore, my cousin has been imprisoned and tortured non-stop, and he has also assisted in the relationship between the senior sister and the protagonist [face covering]. The current bad impression is that the protagonist feels quite calm and mature in the early stage. However, his performance during the mission is somewhat separated from the previous character performance, and the same goes for the subsequent pick-up with girls. To use a popular term at the moment, it feels like a "screenwriter's big hand" [shy]

It poisoned me to death. It looks good. I love watching it. Everyone comes to watch it.

It's a retro book, with a growth-oriented protagonist, excellent writing, multiple female protagonists but not a stud, but the pacing is very well controlled, and there are a lot of foreshadowings in the early stages. The protagonist didn't do some things properly in the early stage, but it is an opportunity for growth. It will become more and more interesting in the future, and the emotional scenes will be delicate.

It feels like it was written by the author of a female video, tsql. It will be very boring to watch it all the time, but occasionally it will be very refreshing [makes a face]

How should I put it, the ancient fantasy style has a literary flavor. I personally admire the author's writing style. Maybe judging from the current male channels, he is a bit biased towards female channels. One thing to say, the author's vocabulary is very gorgeous, and it's obvious that he has a profound literary background. I would have read a book if I could do it hahaha [laughing and crying] Then, I took a look at the issues in Chapter 14 that were being attacked in the book review section. In my opinion, they are not that big a poisonous point. [Thinking] That one is the protagonist's cousin since he was a child, and he has it on the back of his hand. He is also very confused and doesn't know why he is like this. What's more, he has also been punished by the sect, so it's not that he misses his old lover. (I feel like some people have seen too much of the so-called "killing and decisiveness" and cannot see that there is anything different from him) But it can still be seen that the author's emotional description is not accurate enough. Occasionally need a little This book gave me the feeling that it was too bland, without any major ups and downs, and lacked a lot of highlights. The writing style of The Eunuch is such a pity. The author can take a look (Sword Immortal: The word cards are the introduction, the poems are the moves) This is one of the few fairy-like chaff that I see in tomatoes [blowing kiss]

I strongly recommend that the author's writing style is really very delicate. The description of the heroine's feelings is really great. It was written in my heart. The heroine's unswerving love till death is really very sympathetic. Also (can Shen He continue to do this, is there anything pornographic about this? It's just that the description is more detailed). The author's writing style is really good. He really writes with his heart. I want to write an excellent literary work. Some people always say that there are some poisonous points in the front. It's really okay. People are growing up. The same goes for the protagonist (Lu Mingfei was also bad at the beginning, wasn't he)? In the end, I hope this book will get better and better. Come on, author! [Praise]

Author, you must keep writing. I have seen your efforts. Wet wipes will always shine. After reading Zhu Zhu's masterpiece, the writing is full of wonderful works, the literary talent is outstanding, the plot echoes the foreshadowing, the characters are vivid on the page, as if they are in the scene, and the aftertaste is endless. It is really a masterpiece. I look forward to reading the next article to enjoy the masterpiece again. --Silent [top post][please update]

Not much to say, brothers, the text is exquisite, the knowledge reserve is sufficient, it is good to read, and besides, please read and cherish it.

Chapter 3, this delicate emotion and unique opening is unique in Tomato. I am not sure whether the author is right in choosing Tomato, but it is indeed a masterpiece. Please take a look and cherish it [eating melon] [please update]

It looks good, the text is very good, and the theme of the novel is also interesting.