Clan Cultivation: Seeking Immortality Through Reincarnation

I saw Chapter 36, another well-written book, I like it. From my personal reading so far, I haven't come across any plot with obvious problems with its logical closure. The protagonist is practicing hard in the sect, but the late stages of his Qi training are not going well. His Dantian is damaged and he decides to go down the mountain. On the way, he is ambushed by a fellow sect member who has a gap in the sect, and is destroyed with a thunder talisman. He found his spiritual veins and married a sweet wife with spiritual roots. He entered the borderland and found two concubines with spiritual roots in the human teeth. On the way, he accidentally obtained the wood sword technique. After practicing for several years, he repaired his Dantian and broke through the late stage of Qi training. The Zhao family in the city exchanged for the status of a Qi training family, and his children gradually grew up. —— The plot reaches chapter 36, which is almost the same. In the middle, the author's observation of the protagonist's character and the character's dialogue are consistent with the middle-aged city. It also vividly describes the relationship between the spoiled wives, the children's out-of-control temperament, and other various psyches. The whole book is wonderful to read. In addition, the golden finger in this book is also a bit innovative. I haven't read the end of this life yet, so I don't know how the golden finger works. I will evaluate it later. I hope the author will work hard to update, please come on. By about Chapter 120, I personally feel that the combat power is a bit skewed. They are both at the 9th level of Qi training, and the gap is too big. Even if they are born in the Yuanying family, one person can defeat a dozen or more people of the same level, and it is ridiculously easy. In particular, Qi Xuanqing was easily defeated by Zhao Changque's spiritual eye, which was not fully activated yet. Isn't it true that everyone in the Zhao family can resist the great realm, and everyone has the talent of the Golden Pill Nascent Soul? In addition, Goldfinger did not handle Qi Xuantong's death well and was still observed by juniors, which is unjustifiable. After all, the Nascent Soul cannot be detected after your seed is sealed. As a result, even after death, such a large whirlpool formation is seen by the junior. This junior can still escape after encountering the whirlpool. If it is really a high-level treasure, the qi vibration it emits can kill it. Just like a Qi-training monk who looks directly at the Nascent Soul for a long time may explode and die. It is not a creature on the same level at all. This is not to leave a clue, it really shouldn't be like this, the design is not very good. —— In addition, the first life chapter is too long, and the previous chapter is very well written. The protagonist is scheming and moves forward step by step. However, after entering the secret realm, the overall plot is a bit out of control. The golden finger is exposed and is plotted by various Yuanying old monsters. The high battle is revealed too early. The protagonist hasn't appeared for a long time and is a bit overshadowed. Nowadays, many family stories like to skip qi training and start directly with foundation building. I understand. The qi training stage is really difficult to write. Moreover, in the world of cultivating immortals, the qi training stage is like a primitive person. Once the foundation is established and the person enters civilized society, many family novels are a bit too cliche. I don't know what the author thinks. Today's readers have read too many novels and naturally have sophisticated tastes. They will also pay more attention to the culture of cultivating immortal civilization. This kind of Qi training is not as good as that of dogs, and foundation building can suddenly improve the huge status difference, which is a bit cliché. Jianghu is not about fighting, but about human nature. By chance, the Zhao family killed and injured a generation of disciples who were in the Qi training period of their family. In the end, many families are expected to go up and down. This is not in line with the style of a stable rule. Of course, there is the secret realm itself, so this arrangement is reasonable, but the ending of the first life, the final family, the protagonist is forced to commit suicide, which is a bit unclear. Maybe the low score has something to do with the later chapters of the first life, which is a bit boring. In addition, the author updates slowly, and is more concerned about the completion rate and follow-up updates. The plot is a bit slow. From November 25 to now, it is less than 500,000 words. Many similar books have already reached one million or even more than one million. —— When I saw the second generation, I couldn't stand it. One reason is that the golden finger may be different from what I originally thought. I don't really like the setting of being reborn in a descendant. The other reason is that the realm is too boring and there are too many group portraits. Of course, the author may have set the group portrait setting, but I can't say anything specific. Writing is not easy, so writers, please do your best.

Main contents: Reincarnation + Family Enlightenment + Group Portraits + Golden Finger This is the first time I have seen a novel with such a theme. The protagonist can be reborn as a descendant of his own blood. It is well written and the author has literary literacy. I hope the author can write a similar story in his next book. I like the word count, the plot is too slow, don't watch it

The look and feel of this book is okay, and the better writing style masks the drag on the plot, but the protagonist is stuck in a certain state for a long time, which is really uncomfortable. Considering this is a slow-burn book, understandable. But I still hope that the author will write more about the protagonist's growth experience and less details. (I really don't want to read nonsense, so I might as well write about the experiences of other characters) Samsung provides writing, very good! Rarely written well. One star for the plot, which is coherent and free of confusion.

The writing style is considered to be top-notch in Tomato, but the cool writing tends to favor farming style. The book is logical and it is better to recommend starting from the beginning. Tomato relies on gimmicks and creativity. Only the audience at the starting point have the patience to wait for the saplings to grow slowly. I hope the author will persevere and that good books will not be buried. Persistence will have its time.

This is high-quality food and grass, a very thoughtful reincarnation flow. I don't want other templates and quick routines like using Douyin. The author of this book carefully writes the characteristics of each key character and slowly unfolds the world view. The writing is also good. I hope the author will write more. Pay attention to the world view to be bigger and not to be petty. It's a pity that I have placed too many restrictions on myself, which makes people feel very bad. For example, there are strict restrictions on the cultivation of spiritual energy attributes, and there are special spiritual energy that can only cultivate the spirit? It also includes the incense system. There are too many fluff, and the plot begins to feel weak. The main line is dragging. I also suspect that the author Wen Qing is seriously ill.

This book is not a novice, but the writing style is quite good. Although the author is a bit pretentious, which made me a little tired, but the flaws are not concealed. The author's writing style is still very good, and the plot is also coherent. At present, it seems that it should be a long novel. The arrangement between the family and the various forces is relatively reasonable, and it is not brainless. Therefore, it still seems a bit aggrieved. The protagonist is too stubborn. He keeps using a fake face, blinding a handsome face, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to read. ╯╰, This article seems to be a bit group portrait at the moment. It also describes the protagonist's descendants. Each has a distinct personality and is not a thin paper character. It can be seen that the author has put his heart into this. As a kind of childbirth novel, there is no brainless harem, and all the descendants and Taoist companions are not treated as tools. The protagonist is not Long Aotian, and all supporting characters have online IQs. They are not brainless villains who rush to give experience. Still worth seeing. A 9 for Tomato is actually not too much.

Come on, author, although the writing is not very good in some places, the setting is really awesome. I haven't read a novel that makes me so addicted in a long time. The characters are flesh and blood and well-shaped. The best thing is that it deeply reflects the cruelty of the world of cultivating immortals. I don't want the protagonist of other family novels to be a nanny. In the family novels I have read before, the protagonist becomes very strong as soon as he comes to the family, and there is no chance of success. Therefore, it would be outrageous to have a divine body or a holy body among the children, and basically no one in the family would die. It would be outrageous even if the Qi Lian family and the Jin Dan family were to fight against each other. So I never read nanny novels. This one is very well written and deeply reflects the intrigues in the world of immortality. I don't like writing reviews very much. I feel a little uncomfortable seeing such a good novel with so few ratings. But come on, the author, keep writing and update more, ☺️

The writing is very good, the writing style is delicate and sophisticated, and the characters are very carefully created. The villains are not just facial expressions, they all have character and methods, which is very good! ! It's just not enough. The author would like to work harder and make more updates.

There is a reason why the rating is not high. Some of the chapters are just like being strung together. I just read it and then repeated the same lines. It was only when I read the comments that it was AI that I suddenly realized it. But it is indeed readable and the AI ​​flavor is not too strong.

The first 100 chapters are online at a standard level. Although there are some shortcomings, they are still good. It can be regarded as one of the few good works of Tomato that is logical and not brainless! How to follow up after tasting it... The first life was good, but the follow-up was formulaic, not very brilliant and just barely watchable. If you don't know how to write family stories, it's best not to squeeze into this track!