Unmarried, Yet I Have Five Sons and Three Daughters in Ancient Times

It's good-looking. The first part is very good, but the later part is written a little faster and feels rushed. However, the author also said that he could only write faster because of poor traffic. This is a really good book, but it has no traffic. It might be better if I can go to JJ. I feel like I don't like this kind of slow writing. I like cool and bloody plots. But the author really writes well. I will definitely get better and better in the future if I work hard. I still hope that I will finish this book well and will support you!

The author's writing is quite good. It's plain and has golden fingers but not that big. The group portraits are well described and the focus of the character descriptions is also very clear. All five sons and three daughters are involved in it. The reason why the popularity is not high may be that it is too peaceful and not exciting. The heroine is like a surveillance camera, recording the daily behavior of the five sons and three daughters of the Li family. She does not promote the change of the destiny of the entire Li family, and does not give any constructive significance. She is very much like a local old lady, unlike a time traveler. The scene where Yaonv suspects the heroine at the beginning feels like the first climax of this article, but the author also describes it very calmly. When I read it, my emotions just started to rise, and the plot was flat and smooth, giving people a feeling of ending abruptly. The heroine just woke up and sighed that she was old and old. If it is mixed with the plot of Yaonv's suspicion, it may be more natural, and the reader's mood may be better lifted. Has the author considered writing a brief introduction to the relationship between the Li family? It is okay to explain the characters as the plot unfolds. However, there are some mistakes in names later in the article, which slightly affects the reading experience. Except for Chun Lai Chun Zhong, for the other sons, the heroine can actually give a certain degree of perspective. Chunshan Woodworking can talk about some modern knitting products. The heroine of Chunxi Rouge Shop can talk about some modern beauty knowledge. The heroine Chunjiang can make some meat sauce or something. The heroine may not look like a surveillance camera, which will promote the plot to a certain extent. (My humble opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)

It's very well written, please don't shorten it or rush it to the end! Sometimes the first book is like this, but the second one gets better, and people return to the first one to read more! Don't be discouraged! Come on! !

This is my first time to review a book. I really like the family portrait story. Every character is very good. I really like to see this kind of long flow. Everyone is positive. There is love and help between brothers and sisters. The third generation is also flourishing. I am looking forward to the direction of the story.

It's very interesting. I watched it in one sitting. It's my favorite type. The heroine's time travel is really lucky and comfortable.

It's pretty good. I don't know why the traffic is just recommending it to me now. I see that there's nothing poisonous about it now.

Wow, the people here are so nice, especially the children, they are so cute

It's very interesting. I'm about to see the update. I hope there will be more updates. I'm looking forward to the follow-up development of the story.

Updates are too slow, it's a pity that this good book

Very nice, detailed description, love to read