Delta Force: The Demon King Guards? If I Don't Hit the Head, Call Me a Terrible Shot

I clicked on it many times and read the comments, but was persuaded to leave by the comments about the heroine. I ran out of books to read, clicked to open again, and exited again. Yesterday I got on the plane and ran out of books to read. I read it offline and finished it. The comments were a bit misleading. I don't know if it has been changed. From the looks of it, I feel that the proportion of female protagonists is quite low. The heroine in a wheelchair seems to have only one chapter in total, although the settings of these female protagonists are indeed a bit too classic. Putting aside these, whether it is live streaming, interaction, games, systems, and new game settings, they are all very good. Overall, it is a very good Delta novel. Can take off

After watching so many Delta live streams, this is the only one that has some personal characteristics. There is a heroine who is bitter and resentful. Couldn't she write it more relaxedly?

It's so cool, funny and irritating. I've been watching Lao Feiyu's slices since I got into it. The author writes the funny jokes very interestingly. It's very funny and irritating. Come on, author, you're a little crazy. Please hurry up and update more.

Come on, author, I personally feel that Delta has one of the best novels with a female protagonist. Don't listen to others who say they don't want a female lead. There are already many female leads in the label, and they've all told him what's in the dish. Should he still blame others if he doesn't like it?

I've almost finished watching it. The fighting is really fun. It's said to have multiple female protagonists, but in fact it's almost 200 chapters and I don't really recommend the emotional scenes. This depends on everyone. It's definitely okay for those who don't want to see the female protagonist, but for those who want to see the female protagonist, it feels like it's too slow. Then there are some Riddlers and some plots that feel fragmented, and I feel like the context is not connected. Overall, the writing is okay.

It's really nice, but too short! I had to get a little cool and show the author two ads.

Judging from my reading time, I have been catching up on it for several consecutive night shifts. Summary: Before the new season, the viewing experience was great, absolutely treasure level. After starting the new season, I suddenly felt that it was no longer the same as before, and the sense of fragmentation was very strong. Maybe I read more game articles without female protagonists or girls. I prefer Brother Xu and 78, Lao Yang to team up and interact together, or Brother Xu to use the nameless game to teach in solo queue, so I'm sorry, I have to read the book for a while and skipped this paragraph about the female protagonist. I also like Brother Xu very much, but I can't accept Brother Xu pretending to be a tang and having a girl [face covering] Um, the heroine still needs a few more chapters. I can't stand it anymore. I suggest changing the title of the book to "I'm pretending to be in a triangular basket and slapping her face to subdue a troubled beauty" [awkward laugh]

I could have given this book five stars because the first half was really speechless. It was very cool. It felt like watching those Chen Ze Cup games. It felt so good to kill, especially the chapters of "I Finished Killing". It felt like it was at its peak. When I saw that, I recommended this book in various book circles in the Delta. It can be said that the author's action description of this kind of game screen is simply top-notch. But starting from the anchor peak game, the author began to A large number of various female characters, emotions, and story descriptions are very delicate, but this book originally drew us in because of the excitement of fighting. I have not wanted to read the updates in the past month. I used to follow them every day, but now I have more than ten chapters and I want to skip them all. Just like Ultraman or Armor Warrior, the real core is fighting, not fighting with a bunch of girls (original family does not Okay, there are those who are beautiful and rich but dare not talk about their feelings. There are also several very beautiful female internet celebrities, and now there is a childhood sweetheart who is seriously ill.) There are all kinds of entanglements. To be honest, even if there is only one female protagonist, I can accept it if she really falls in love and plays Delta every day. The protagonist is so well portrayed, and I don't know if the author can clean up this mess of emotional lines. I'm not tired of writing, I'm really tired of reading. Really, why don't you stop reading for a day and read it. The book you wrote is really good at the beginning, but then you lose the motivation to read it. We have other choices for love and youth books, but Fighting is fun. You wrote it very well. I got goosebumps when I read Xu Xiang's Seventeen Killers in Space. Even if you delete the files and start over, try to reduce the emotional drama, okay?

It's really the one that kept me reading out of all the Delta fanfics I've seen. I finished reading it all in one go. I wanted to go to sleep. I hate you, author. I just feel that the current female protagonists are in quite miserable situations, being PUAed by their roommates, and being abused by their mothers or sisters, I don't know [I'm almost crying]

This book has advantages and disadvantages, but overall it can be considered a good book. First state the advantages. The protagonist of this book has a positive outlook on life, the overall narrative is smooth, the interaction with other anchors is moderate, and the ideas for interaction with fans are also relatively fresh. There is no cliche plot of pretending to be a cup and slap in the face, and the description of the battle scenes is also relatively detailed and in-depth. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The author's writing style is a bit immature. The thinking is a bit off-topic, and the writing skills are not able to connect perfectly, which will lead to a somewhat abrupt transition in reading. Moreover, there is no clear distinction between the characters' inner thoughts and their dialogues. Sometimes it's hard to tell whether this is the character's inner thoughts or what the character says. This situation will also occur when describing the barrages sent by the audience. These barrages are not clearly distinguished and will be mixed with the dialogues of the characters. In addition, some sentences without subjects often appear during the writing process. Although it does not affect reading, it will sound strange when listening to the book. Overall, this is a book worth reading. The current rating of 8.1 Is definitely underestimated. It may have something to do with the name. I hope the author can write better and better.