Honkai: Star Rail: Great! It's a Space Comedy!

I'll give it four stars first. In addition to the stability of subsequent updates, there are the following problems. The following are suggestions. 1. There is a MOD in the creative workshop that can fly both civil and military disasters at the same time. You can consider both civil and military disasters. Use the needles of cultural disasters as anchors and use the ether phase engine to blast other universes, the main universe at home. 2. Without Gray Wind, a lot of interest will be lost immediately. After all, the fourth natural disaster can declare war on the entire universe for Gray Wind. The fourth natural disaster specifies the value of a wife. If you don't know how to write it, you can refer to other authors and second creations. 3. I hope that at least popular and good-looking characters should be included. After all, I am interested in quite a few characters in Bengtie.

Now that I see it, I still don't understand it. This book is a Beng Tie fanfic, Star Elements, right? The author also said novice at the beginning The author and a large part of the readers like to substitute the stars after the ascension. Once someone popularizes Beng Tie and says that the protagonist cannot touch the Star God now, there will definitely be Wen Fei and Wu Fei, who must compete in combat power. No, this is a Beng Tie fan. You have Wu Fei and Wen Fei. Why are you studying the Star God? You are already deus ex machina. This book can be finished. Freedom of speech is also right. I can accept all of the above. After all, I am also a fun person, but I am more rigorous. Next, I will talk about some uncomfortable aspects and popular science. I have only read chapter twenty-eight now The timeline of this book is confusing, which is not a problem. The timeline of Bengtie is originally chaotic, but you are too far off. The ancient beast traces were last active in the Amber 180th century, and the backup team was established in the 1350th century. There is a difference of at least 90,000 years and a maximum of 280,000 years. Moreover, the credit point system has begun to develop, and the backup team is not that weak. The second is the most common combat power problem among book friends. The combat power of Qunxing and Bengtie are both extremely abstract, but in general the upper limit of Qunxing is ridiculously high, and the numerical value is meaningless. But still, this is a Bengtie fan, so the development of civilization must be stronger with time. Unless a few geniuses pop up, the author had better make a patch (the protagonist has no golden finger, no theory, and not many things). Why are his subordinates so arrogant? You need scientific research in the game, buddy. Third, it's still a question of the timeline, because I looked back and found that the world was plagued by locusts so quickly. The protagonist has no psychic powers or technology. How can he survive? It's not like a deus ex machina. The collapse can't be stopped. It's okay if Bengtie has spiritual energy. After all, it is an element of stars. Why is there a virtual mirror? Of course it makes sense as you write it, but the locust plague in the world affects 2/3 of the universe, and all production and proliferation behaviors will be captured, that is It says that what you produce is not a fleet but bugs. The contract should be written before the locust plague in the world. Bro, please change the introduction and change it into a fan of Stars and Iron Breaking Elements. After all, you haven't entered the main story yet, so you don't have to worry about the settings. It makes sense to write it down.

That's not the case with Noono tomatoes. You should enable the system, then collect rewards, open a harem, and become invincible; Instead of developing forces and technology in a clear and logical manner like now, dealing with relationships in a clear and logical manner, and also showing the "sacrifice" of supporting roles to make people remember her existence; That's not what Nono tomatoes are like. QWQ

It's very good. It describes the power of the Human Federation, but it's too little. I hope the author will update it five times a day [Like]

Just think of it as starting a war for me.

It's really good. Chapter 15 seems to be the protagonist group. Who knows that the foreshadowing will be revealed in a year and a month. If anyone sees it, you can tell me.

Why does the weapon used to kill the Star God have to be a cannon? Just build a machine like Rick and Morty. Directly obliterate people or objects from different latitudes and different timelines. How handsome is that! The quality is still high.

Is there any recycling technology? Or the marshal can mod his own civilization. I feel that ordinary stars are still weak against star gods.

I glanced at the comments section. I don't play Bengtie, so it's understandable that I synchronize Bengtie's main line after waking up. It's really easier to write if you follow the main line (if you get close, a dialog box will be generated, which is a no-brainer!). I don't really care about CP or anything like that, just don't let the protagonist fall behind. Very well written for the stars. However, as a Stars player, I still hope that others will be more in awe and fear of the Fourth Natural Disaster than tease (?). We can be more reasonable and humane, and not as irrelevant as at the beginning (the fourth natural disaster), but we still don't want to be completely integrated. As a marshal, you should look after the People's Alliance to some extent, yes) emmm may be curious about the general idea of ​​the follow-up. The current Human Federation is actually similar to the status of the Star Sea One Voice (the noble natural disaster empire is guarding his loyal Star Sea). In the middle and late stages of the Human Federation, I was all-red in diplomacy. After all, I knew that sooner or later, I would be declared at war by the entire Star Sea, and I would bomb the galaxy to get some dark matter. By the way, is there any wild L star gate that drops a little gray (

There are two ways to view this book, one is from Chapter 1 to Chapter 66. Chapters 1 to 66 can be called the prequel, telling the story of how the Human Federation rose and the Interstellar Peace Company and the Fairy Boat Alliance. In the end, they fought against the Star Gods and succeeded, and invented the god-killing weapon. Then the protagonist fell asleep and the Human Federation split into two factions. The beginning of Chapter 67 is about the period between 1000 and 1500 before the start of the main plot, which is when Black Tower was a child. The Black Tower woke up the protagonist when he was a child, and then started a series of stories. The story of Wuxiao on the Cloud probably happened during this period.