Honkai: Star Rail: The Nameless Who Became an Emanator of Abundance

I think it's good to watch, with an original plot, a somewhat unique protagonist, vivid scenes, and some profound philosophical thoughts. But sometimes it only focuses on writing philosophical thoughts and lacks the vividness of the characters, making it a bit cold, blunt, and rigid. For example, in the two things at the beginning, the overall story is grand but lacks some details (I personally feel that the characteristics of the protagonist are not fully reflected, and the impression is not deep enough), and the narrative rhythm is a bit fast. ... In addition, for the protagonist's skills: combat power, situation, intensity, and innovative use can be adjusted (this much can be thought of for the time being)

As a new author, it is already very good to write like this. If you want to improve it, make it more graphic. I think when it comes to character creation, it's like "how to say it." Don't always use so-and-so. Add some descriptions in front to make the character image better. Some novels are so well written that one can get a sense of the picture while reading them, and one can read hundreds of chapters in one go before they can react. Some novels have a good setting and good ideas, but they are written in a very literal and one-sided way, and the characters are bland, making people have no desire to read them. After reading more than ten chapters, it feels like a long time has passed. But I can feel the author's progress. In the following chapters, the characters have improved. If you want to change, I think you should start with the details and how to proceed. Don't just go through it with so-and-so. You can change some words, such as taking a step forward, spreading your legs, coming slowly, etc. You can also add some environmental description appropriately, don't make the plot too compact, and have gentle ups and downs.

It's great to watch, the plot is original, and the character of the protagonist is also very good, but will Hoshi still become a protector? In fact, I can also write about Walter's reaction when he saw Cocolia and Bronya.

It's good to watch, the protagonist is kind but not stupid, and the plot also has an original planet. The author has also read the detailed settings of Beng Tie, and there are no OOC characters. You pass!

In fact, Belloberg's money should not be returned. On the contrary, the company should pay Belloberg a storage fee. At first, the company lent Belloberg a sum of money and gave him the robotics technology. But the usage code is not given. Beloberg built a large number of them but could not use them and had to save them. The mechas currently in use are built using reversed technology. And during the period when the star orbit was cut off, the company has been monitoring the planet. If they really didn't know that there was civilization on this planet, when you contacted the advertising department in Xiacheng District, the salesperson wouldn't have stayed in the place responsible for this planet for so long. In other words, Interstellar Peace Company has always been trying to survive.

In time, it will become a great book. It reads smoothly, but it is not the kind of bold and refreshing writing. The writing style is more everyday, which is suitable for me to read. The only drawback is that after a while you will see the shit yellow button 😢

It's very interesting. This is the only novel I've read that takes people from Luo Hu's mouth. Moreover, this novel is not aggrieved. It makes Ling not accustomed to the original characters, and the abundant life gives the protagonist a reasonable reason to make up for the regrets of the original work.

Fairly good, although there are some flaws, no OOC found

It's really good. There is no OOC place at the moment.

A highly recommended article. The description of power is in line with the expectations of the commander's combat power.