After I Transmigrated into a Book, I Spoiled the Beautiful, Strong, and Tragic Tycoon into a Clingy Sweetheart

[Top post] As of twenty-one chapters, my evaluation is very good [Admiration] The author's writing is very attractive. The writing style is also good. The relationship between the young lovers is sour and sweet [I just like this feeling [learned]]. But Lian Cheng is a little afraid to express it verbally, so he can only test it step by step. Fortunately, Su Zhuo opened his mouth [sneaky smile] But I don't think anyone in the Gu family is good, especially the mistress of the Gu family who wants to break up the young couple [angry] Looking forward to the following plot [Blow kiss][Please update][Please pay attention] Now I have finished reading the first world [Sending Hearts]. The author's writing style is still stable and stable [Bird Eater], and the emotions between the young lovers are as sweet and sour as the author said [The main reason is that both parties don't like to express themselves (at first I thought Su Zhuo was a good talker, But when I saw it later, I found that he didn't like to ask and express, and closed himself in his own world [I almost cried] Fortunately, Lian Cheng is a ninja and a guiding lover) Secondly, there was provocation from others [smile]] Of course, the ending is sweet without the big sword [note]! Then there is the attitude towards dealing with Qiu that I don't think is very good [grievance], not decisive. Lian Cheng quickly suppressed him when he had the strength, but decisive. He also gave the surnamed Gu a chance to hijack [anger] There is no good person in the Gu family! Of course, without this point, Su Zhuo's feelings for Lian Cheng might not have developed so quickly. All in all, from a main point of view, it's still a very good [like], but at most it's a bit worrying when neither of them expresses themselves and causes a little bit of abuse. Come on author [please update] [please pay attention] This is the first time I have posted such a long comment

I have read Two Worlds so far. I thought it was a sweet story, but except for the ending, it was torture for the sake of torture. . . . . . I'm not a control person, but I couldn't stand the first world. The character design wasn't very good. Everything he said and did made people feel like the folds of his cerebral cortex were being smoothed out. And I pay more attention to the equal contribution of two people, but in the first world, I felt that in the early and middle stages, Gong was always working hard for the relationship and paying for the recipient, which made me very uncomfortable. The second world is much better, the characters and plot are better polished than the first world. Moreover, both the attacker and the sufferer are willing to pay and consider the long term for this relationship! I like this very much! Finally, it's not just wishful thinking on the part of one of the parties! The only thing that didn't work well was that there were misunderstandings and misunderstandings all the time. Various misunderstandings were superimposed. Originally, a few sentences could explain it clearly. It felt a bit like torture for the sake of torture. I hope both of us can be braver in the world to come. I gave this book three and a half points, but now I give it five points because I think some of the author's musings are cute. Cheers, author! After looking at the next few worlds, the latter worlds are very sweet. Marry first, love later, that world is very sweet! A long-lasting relationship. I recommend watching The World Behind.

It's a very interesting story. It's a different story. It's a bedtime cookie. The author's writing style is very good. The protagonists' emotional descriptions are very delicate, sweet and reassuring. Highly recommended! ! ! Every one of them is so loved, it's written on my heart! [Adoration][Adoration]

This unit article is different and outstanding from other unit articles. In each small world, there is either love at first sight or love over time, and the emotional changes are very delicate. Because they are ordinary people brought from different worlds, most of them actually have no idea about homosexuality. Gong is enlightened and willing to fall in love at the first sight of Shou, or he is involuntarily attracted to the other party during the process of getting along. The inner struggle and entanglement, as well as the final realization are all well written, as is Shou's transformation process. Some of the file systems I have seen before can always play a great role, such as monitoring, controlling the network, providing protection, etc. But the system in this article actually only serves the function of transmitting attacks. This makes everything they experience very real. Unexpected things will happen and disasters will happen suddenly, which makes everything more unforgettable. They are not omniscient and omnipotent gods, they are just ordinary people who want to protect their loved ones and live a good life. This is something that really pricks me. And the characters are rich in personality. I hope the teacher can work hard! [Sending Hearts]

Emotions are very delicate, and every small world is sour and sweet. You can't feel it when you live by yourself. But after reading the novel, I realized that everyone has their own ideas and choices, and they will not always open their mouths to solve problems proactively. It is inevitable to be confused. Everyone has their own secrets. When he chooses to tell you everything, then he must trust you very much. Everyone, please don't despise everyone in the small world for not opening your mouth when attacking or receiving. After all, that is the normal state of life [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Main focus, double cleansing, unit text, super good-looking, recommended

Overall, it's pretty good. I've finished watching the first Little World and I feel that Su Zhuo was too entangled in the early stages. The relationship between the two people is a bit lacking for me. I prefer to watch the love between the protagonists.

I watched the first world very carefully. To be honest, it was somewhat unexpected but also reasonable. Surprisingly, my wife's writing style was excellent, the little things between the two protagonists were lively and interesting, and the darkening had a beginning and an end. In my opinion, there is nothing wrong with it except that the ending is dry. I obviously missed so much, but in the end it was just the hero saving the beauty, which makes me feel... Regretful? (Also, I don't intend to reveal the identity of the protagonist. I always feel that there are still some small details that have not been filled in. I am still grateful for this book. It is beautiful.)

Ahhh, how did the author come up with so many delicious settings? Every couple is a fairy. The love line does not follow a formulaic plot, and there is no procrastination. The care of both parties is written unconsciously. The supporting characters are more three-dimensional. There is not too much description to allow the plot to proceed steadily in the protagonist's love line. Sweet, medium, small, sad, two-way redemption, and it is rare for the host to hurt the mission target, hahahahaha.

The author describes the love of young lovers in each world very delicately. I really like this book. I have read many fast-traveling articles and there are only a few that I can pick out and read all the time and look forward to the update. It won't be a loss if you invest in it!