Reborn in a Blood-and-Iron World: I, Scar, Conquer the Universe

The plot pace is smooth and the transitions are smooth. In the early stage, it was a bit embarrassing for the owner to look too towards humans, but the cooperation part with humans was reasonable. The protagonist is not a brainless fighter, he is considered to be a more intelligent type. The problem now is that the main plot is not very clear, and the protagonist's purpose does not have a clear goal in the plot. Now he is more led by the tasks assigned by the elders, rather than having a clear goal to perform the tasks himself. I hope the author will add some character plots later, so that the protagonist team can perform tasks purposefully according to their own ideas, instead of being led along like an assembly line.

"Urgent Fu" I admire your splendor, and my heart beats with longing. I recall how amazing it was when I first read it, as if I was enjoying the spring breeze. The exquisiteness of the words is like the splendor of a brocade. Every time I unroll my scroll, I am meditating on it. I often waste my time eating and forget about it. He suddenly stopped writing and stopped working, which made everyone feel hesitant. I am tired of reading the old chapters, but I am eagerly looking forward to the new chapters. The day is late and difficult, the night is long but not yet young. Looking at the king's door, he hesitates, and he is anxious and hurts. You are so talented and virtuous, how can you allow your inspiration to be hidden? In the past, my writing seemed to be full of energy, so why am I so hesitant now? Don't be disturbed by worldly affairs and put aside trivial matters for a while. Quickly hold on and continue to work, soothing our hot intestines. I look forward to the new chapter coming out soon, just like the drought-stricken seedlings looking forward to the rain. If the beautiful chapter continues again, hit the knot and sing loudly. May you not hesitate again and show your talent to the fullest. I will look forward to it with eager anticipation, waiting for the masterpiece to come. [Crying] A reminder letter from a "loving father" comrade to the author: Dear Comrade Dabaiev: Are you feeling well these days? However, the weather and storms in Siberia have become colder and colder these days. The snowstorms have continued for several rounds, and the scenery is great. Please be sure to update 500,000 words every day so that I can read more wonderful things. Otherwise, the potatoes that have not yet been harvested in Siberia will become your daily work content and basic meals, and the beautiful Siberian scenery is waiting for you to appreciate. I hope to see you soon, my dear Comrade Dabaiev. Joseph Vissarionovich Stalin

After reading Chapter 18, after two stages, I feel pretty good, well, overall it's okay, and in the category of newcomers, it's already considered an upper-level masterpiece. In fact, this one is quite okay, after all, it's already qualified now. As for my personal opinion, I looked at the comment area and it seems that some people said that the protagonist is the Virgin. In fact, this should not be counted. The main reason is that the protagonist does not kill those humans who hold weapons. If they do not kill, then it is true. Mainly in the iron-blooded culture, as long as you take weapons, don't go without being sick and disabled. The most obvious one is the one I remember seems to be in When Aliens vs. Iron-Blooded, the old man in the first part had lung cancer, and was released by Scar immediately after seeing him [face-covering] [face-covering], no, I also had to go shopping in the morning, full of energy. It seems that by chapter 20, the protagonist has only worn it for nearly a month, two months. In that little time, it will still be difficult for the protagonist to adapt to the iron-blooded culture [face-covering] [face-covering] [OK] Overall, it's okay, but I hope there will be a female protagonist in the back [smile][smile][smile]. After all, I don't know much about the iron-blooded culture here. It seems that when you reach the age of elders, there will be some female iron-bloods who will pursue you [smile]

As we all know, watch more of those female videos and so on. It's not a good idea to come and see it. (I've been having a bit of an emergency response lately, I've read too much) Well, right, fortunately, not many people write about Iron-Blooded. If there were many people writing about it, your book would probably be labeled with the same words as super god, licking the dog, etc. All I can say is that the few that are there are quite beautiful. But if you don't write too much, it's good, but if you write too much, it won't look good. Well, I'm sorry, because I just finished reading the short article on female porn, and I read it again, and after searching for some super-magical articles, I saw your book that was just good enough to read, so I came in. Subconsciously, I thought of these, uh, and my comments were probably what I subconsciously thought of saying.

The quality of the work is good, the plot is very good, and the characterization is also very good. The author is very active. The world-building is still very good. Still a work worth seeing.

Anyone who dares to write a book about Predator will be praised, because the background of the world of Predator is too big, the movie is also full of problems, and the comic collapsed in the end. It is normal to write poorly if you don't have the skills [face covering]

A rare Predator novel worth reading

There are very few Predator-themed books, but this one is already very good. The protagonist could have been more ruthless.

The author's writing skills are quite strong. This kind of fighting scene is expressed very clearly and is very enjoyable to watch. But the details still need to be paid attention to. Don't the Predators need to eat?

Night Storm is not bad blood. There are tribes in the game. Super Predator tribes, including Lion Face, Eagle Face, and Elephant Face. You can also consider adding legendary characters. The protagonist of Scarface Jungle can be set as Celtic's brother. The protagonist of the game Alien vs. Predator 1, the protagonist of the game Alien vs. Predator 2, the protagonist of the game Alien vs. Predator 2010 The young blood of Ancient Bronzeface recycles the mask and the spear.