My Best Bro Long Aotian Is Acting Strange!

I like it very much. I like the character of the protagonist very much. At first, I thought it was just a routine. But after joining the sect, I felt a leap forward and everyone became more alive. College student Pai Long Aotian is very real, interesting, and also has growth. At first, the protagonist thought it was a traditional plot of a vicious male protagonist awakening, but later he discovered that his self, the high-spirited look in red clothes, was not the stiff feeling in many stories, but the demeanor of a royal child. The group portrait is excellent, and I like the senior sister very much. She looks towards the "Tao", and looks indifferent and cute. Moreover, there is also a clear explanation of the core of cultivating immortality, which means cultivating Taoism. The writing style is also very good, and the slow growth of the plot struck a chord with me every time. After all, I have read many traditional immortal novels. This is what novels about immortality should be like, in order to present a magnificent and colorful world. So, the author must finish the book well. It is so short, if he had to write a thousand chapters for me, I could finish it.

The writing is super strong, not like a book on a foreign persimmon, and the characters are created very well. Regarding the description of the First Palace of Taishang Dao and the apprenticeship, it can be seen that the author is serious about describing the cultivation of immortality, rather than a fast-food upgrade.

The story of this book is very attractive to me. Lu Heyun's character and his arrogant little moves are crazy on my xp. I also like his interaction with Lin Hefeng. It is really like the daily life of cats and dogs. Of course, it is not only about describing them, but also like Gu's Taoist heart and the common people. Like Mo, he is loyal to his friends, and like Du, even if he is usually cunning, he is always consistent with others at critical moments. The friendship between several people is enviable. It can be regarded as a micro-group portrait, and I also like this. In short, I can't finish it in a few words, and I have to go and savor it myself. Highly recommended, hurry up!

It took me a while to rate it! How should I put it? I rewrote it twice. This is the third time. I found that my expression ability is very poor, but the teacher wrote it very well. The one who had a deeper feeling was Lin Xianglu saying that he had nothing to compare with him, it was nothing. I think what he was talking about was that he was mainly from other worlds, and the sense of alienation in other worlds. Although the expression was not deep, it was there, and it was similar to what Wen Xian said later,

I hope Xiaolin can mature soon a I feel like I'm feeling springy (bushi) every day now, and I hope I can grow up as a person soon.

Ahhhh, Ah Feng has trained Long Aotian into a dog, it's so sweet [Adoration]

It's not so pretty, hehehehe, this threesome is so cool (referring to friends!) The group portrait is so good! Fragrant rice ~ Hehehehehe

It's so beautiful, His Highness's character is so cute, I like it (*´ω｀*), I want to put a sack in it and catch him~

Well, it looks good. I hope it will look better later.

It looks great, good luck to the author!