
I'm Fan Xian's Dimwitted Younger Brother
我是范闲的傻弟弟
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 309k Words
- Updated
- 10mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
90Chapters
2Reads
6.5kReads · all time
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Reader comments 4
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The story is pretty good, but the author doesn't segment it very well, so each chapter is one long paragraph. Then there may be a pile of rhetoric, which makes it seem a bit shaky, but I quite like this style. In short, aside from some factors, this is indeed a good book 💕
There are too many modifiers. You may want to reflect a warm scene or certain behaviors, but there are too many modifiers. From now on, it will be like a long and difficult sentence in English, and you feel that you cannot grasp the key points. Some things can be slightly modified, and it can be done in one sentence or in a short paragraph. A long article and half a chapter are all about a small thing, and the rest are all modifiers. It is too tiring, watching
I feel a little sad. In the beginning, Chengyou was given up every time. Now I see that Fan Xian still doesn't know that Chengyou is his younger brother. I am so sad. But when I see someone who is not firmly chosen, I am also very sad. The author, please don't abuse me and give Chengyou a sweet life 😢
Too tired to watch