You Said You Wanted to Be a Knight, Not a Kamen Rider!

This is my first time writing a book, sob sob.

To be honest, judging from the author's literary level and writing style, this doesn't seem like a new author; it seems like an experienced one. So, author, is this a secondary account? I've read over 40 chapters and finished the whole book. To summarize, the protagonist does have a chivalrous heart, but how should I put it? Something's missing.

Review first, then revise. The opening is too ambitious; before any setting or background information is explained, a "battle of gods" begins, complete with a Kamen Rider projection? The story is piling on riddles and settings without any explanation. The first three chapters were supposed to give readers a general overview, but after finishing them, I'm still completely confused.

This is a very classic AI novel. Things like "shining eyes" and "captured her" are common. It also mentions the deep knowledge that comes with it. Many AI software programs are adapted from anime, and they tend to be quite absurd, with things like glowing eyes. Lately, I haven't read any novels that are very rigid, just like they're made from a template. They give you a stereotypical, mechanical impression.

When the protagonist wanted to forgive Lillian (a ruthless and sadistic monster who had killed countless people), I hallucinated as Gabe... Two stars...

My writing is so-so, and there's some overlap with my rival's work. Just a little encouragement, keep it up!

Am I reading a European knight-errant fairy tale?

Finally, there's another Kamen Rider story to follow!

I'm really looking forward to it.