
Harry Potter: The Pale Peacock's Downfall
HP:苍白孔雀的陷落
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Looking for books similar to *Are You Kidding Me? These Two Chosen Ones Have a Romance Plot!*.
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Harry Potter Fics Where Someone Dates Riddle: Give Me Something Steamy!
Harry Potter Stories with Riddle as the Love Interest, Please!!!
I'm looking for a story with Riddle as the love interest, and yes, he should have a nose. The female lead should preferably be a villain, since I like antagonists. I really hate saintly, self-sacrificing types. Both leads should be equally strong, and the story should be set during the orphanage years. Please, please!!!
Harry Potter: Tom Riddle × Lucius Malfoy
Looking for HP stories featuring Tom Riddle × Lucius Malfoy.
Any Harry Potter Stories With a Male Protagonist Who's Beloved by Everyone? I'm Desperate to Read One
Looking for books like HP: I Keep Them Captive by Kissing Them to Stay Alive. Are there any Harry Potter stories with a male protagonist who’s adored by everyone?
HP Masterpiece Incoming (Complete)
Looking for books like *HP and Draco's Hogwarts Romance*. I want Harry Potter fanfiction. Any style is fine, but it has to be complete. Complete, complete, complete! Please!
Harry Potter: Looking for a Story with Two Male Leads and Tom Riddle as the Love Interest!!!
Harry, Please Recommend Stories About Voldemort and Lucius
Any Harry Potter Stories Where Voldemort Is the Love Interest? I Don't Mind If He Has No Nose 🙏
Looking for books similar to *Harry Potter: The Mad Girl's Love Story*.
HP Slytherin Fics Are All Masterpieces, Two Male Leads, Disagree? Come Debate
Looking for Harry Potter Fics With Tom Riddle as the Male Lead
Both bad and happy endings are fine, but it should involve Tom. There must be a lot of bad endings, right? Recently I have become completely obsessed with Tom. Preferably no Voldemort, though I am fine with it if he does appear.
Harry Potter, Voldemort, and a Male-Male Couple
I'm looking for a novel where the protagonist transmigrates into a diary and then resurrects Voldemort. I read it before but forgot to add it to my bookshelf, and now I can't find it TAT
Looking for Voldemort and Abraxas Ship Fics
Harry Potter: Stories About Transmigrating into the Malfoy Family, Being Reborn, or Original Characters
Are there any Harry Potter male-oriented stories where the protagonist transmigrates into the Malfoy family, is reborn, or is an original character? Thanks!
Harry Potter Male/Male!!!!
I'm looking for books similar to LVSS: The Dark Lord's Eighth Horcrux.
Any Stories with a Slytherin Head Boy as the Protagonist, White Hair, and a Male-Male Couple?
Looking for books like *When Harry Had a Younger Brother*. Something along those lines, even though this one doesn't have a white-haired character. One more requirement: no saintly, self-sacrificing types.
Looking for Harry Potter Fics with Two Male Leads. No Female Lead Is Fine Too 🥲🥲
Looking for books like "HP: I Died After the Dark Lord Confessed to Me." I seriously can't find anything good to read 😭😭😭😭
I Want to Read Harry Potter Fanfiction About Voldemort and Lucius
Looking for books similar to *HP: The Young Lord*.
Harry Potter: Looking for Stories About Voldemort and Lucius, Preferably Well Written
I'm looking for books like HP: The White Peacock.
Stories with Tom Riddle as the CP and Two Male Protagonists
Looking for stories like *HP: The Devout Traitor*. Two male leads, with Tom Riddle as the CP.
HP Stories With Two Male Leads, Assemble!!!!!
Looking for stories like HP: The Silver Snake and the Bat. Please recommend some absolutely amazing Harry Potter stories.
Harry Potter: The Male Lead Is Voldemort, with a Yandere Personality
Please Recommend Lucius Malfoy Stories, No Everyone-Loves-Him Plots, One-on-One Only
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In the early stage, Lucius struggled and escaped, but was eventually forced to return to the embrace of the Dark Lord. I hope that Xiao Lu can pry open the Dark Lord's defense and in turn control the Dark Lord to fight with him. Hahaha, come on, madam, the emotions are written very delicately, without the kind of industrial abuse and desserts that are tortured for the sake of being tortured and sweet for the sake of sweetness. The period under the rule of the Dark Lord is indeed extremely depressing. I hope Lucius can regain the glory of platinum.
It's very beautiful, and the character descriptions are very good (but how can I put it, I always feel that Lu likes Draco a little too much. An innocent person would actually like the product of rape. I know that he doted on Draco in the original work. This feeling is purely my personal opinion)
Not bad, not bad I just feel that Draco's position in this article is a bit... Um... As if he was born to torture Lu, and there is no plot behind it. Of course, I don't deny Draco's role: making Lu gradually dependent, whether it is physical or psychological dependence In short: abuse is really abuse. This is also very subtle, but it is also very beautiful. There is a wonderful feeling of symbiosis between the knife and the sugar. You can't separate them. If you separate the knife, you can't taste the sugar. If you separate the sugar, it will be connected to the knife. Anyway, it looks good. Please be patient and watch. This kind of perverted "love" I think is delicious ƪ(˘⌣˘)ʃelegant
It's okay. The writing style is improving chapter by chapter, which can be seen with the naked eye (although sometimes it may be inadvertently OOC), but overall it is still a very high-quality fanfic. But the relationship between the two people was not equal from the beginning. I watched it in one sitting at 5 a. M. In the morning. Later, I saw that Lucius was broken and rebuilt. He finally put himself back together little by little, only to be broken again. He was kneaded into a docile and hollow appearance. The proud soul that attracted me at the beginning seemed to have really died. I really feel that Lucius was tricked out of Stockholm by Lao Fu in the later period [face covering] I have to say that Dumbledore was right. The power of love made Voldemort, who wanted to leap to death, die for love. How can this not be considered defeating Voldemort with love? [Face covering] But I still think two people should be equal first and then love each other. (Every time I see Lucius being tortured, I will inexplicably think of Abu. Abu is looking at you with disappointment in the sky) [face covering] And I personally think that Lucius's feelings for Draco can be described as more contradictory and complicated. After all, it is forced by others. Lucius is still a man with a high social status. This, this, he is forced to have a child, and he is the child of someone he hates. He is such a proud person... Although there will be tenderness due to blood, after all, Draco can be said to be Lucius. The only relative in the world, so Draco's identity will be very complicated in Lucius's eyes - the child of a disgusted person, an unbearable witness, an innocent child, the only relative... And Draco's emotions towards Lucius, the "mother", should also be very complicated and twisted, so I think a more tense picture can actually be drawn between the two people.
It's really good to watch. In the early stage, Lucius was tortured, and in the later stage, Voldemort was not allowed to chase his wife in the crematorium [laughing]
This is a book I devoured in one gulp. I have always liked Harry Potter fans, especially those related to Riddle. I can accept their stories and even bless them, but due to my own understanding of Riddle, I think most of their stories are actually Be's. When I read this article, I was still shocked. I felt that I could not understand that in my eyes, the proud heir of the Malfoy family ended up like this. Even writing down his ending stroke by stroke was better than watching him become like this bit by bit. Maybe it's because I feel sorry for the boy at the beginning, so I always feel that one of them should die and the other be injured. I see him being tamed little by little.
After reading The Young Masters, I kept looking for books about Lucius Malfoy and the Dark Lord, but none of them had the feeling I wanted, until this book. When I read this novel, I felt it was a little better than average at first, maybe three or four stars. But when I read that Lucius attempted suicide, I didn't want to read anymore. Many old bookworms know that usually after this kind of plot, they wake up and fall in love again and again. In my opinion, it is Stockholm and Lima Syndrome. It is not even certain whether Lima Syndrome exists. It is most likely that the author is trying to force the love of the protagonists back. But this novel didn't. Lucius was still the same Lucius after he woke up, and the Dark Lord only noticed how special Lucius was to him. Until the last extra chapter, it was only the Dark Lord who finally realized that he loved Lucius after losing him, but it was unclear when he fell in love with him. As for whether Lucius loves the Dark Lord or not, who knows. The relationship between the two of them is like the statue made by Malfoy, the snake is tightly wrapped around the twisted person.
I'm skipping to watch it, I'm a little sizy now, I'll come back to watch it when the time comes  ̄  ̄)σ I read some skipped content, eleven years, a whole eleven years [smile] Can you still drink it? Otherwise, it's still Be. It's Draco Malfoy, not Riddle [stunned]
It's very beautiful, but when can you start torturing me?
This book is actually quite cruel to Luke, but it was really fun to read (there is a fertility potion in the middle... 😋 Well, after seeing what happened later, all I can say is that I have been torturing Luke😭😭