Global Evolution: Starting with a Transformation Device

It's very good. I came here from "Becoming an Armor Summoner", which has the same theme and is also very interesting. But unfortunately, it is unfinished, so I don't have many requirements for this book. Armor summoners must have a real armor spirit. I don't want some "special" people to become armor summoners (such as extreme people, such people can be used as villains or "whetstones"), but it must not be unfinished! It can't be a mess! It can't be a mess! (Say important things three times) Come on, author!

It's pretty good and worth a look. The emotional line in the early stage may be a bit uncomfortable for some readers (mainly because they care about the summoner), but I believe the author will take this into consideration, and the protagonist will not be there in the future. After all, he is used to it [Chigua]

Hey hey hey, shamelessly give it to myself

It's beautiful, super beautiful, I can't stop. Now this rating is no longer a low issue. It took me 2 days to read the latest chapter. This book deserves a higher rating. In addition, I hope the author can answer a few questions. Is there a suitable person for the fifth adaptable person? This book has shadows of masks and armors, so why not have a female rider [shy], I hope it is Cynthia, and can you add some more protagonists and suitable characters? In the interactive plot between capable people, a newsletter function is added to the armor, so that the protagonist and the capable people can contact each other at any time, instead of only communicating through the mobile phone every time. Moreover, adding this function allows the protagonist to provide first-hand information to the capable people in the battle at any time, such as energy index, target position, overall space scanning, and various assistance. This can better allow the protagonist to join the battle.

This is a good tokusatsu article. The author did not completely apply the settings in existing tokusatsu dramas (for example: Armor Warrior, Kamen Rider), but the setting that we and the enemy are of the same origin has been retained. The protagonist is not so much a transformer, but a character who helps the able-bodied. (The setting of the Suitable One is similar to that of Ultraman Nexus). I have now seen the appearance of the second Suitable Person. The protagonist will design a transformation armor that matches the characteristics of the Suitable Person. I am curious whether the first Suitable Person will regain his transformation ability in the future.

It's so good. It's not that kind of invincible story. I guessed a narrative story based on logic. Facing the unknown revolutionary evolution, our country, the protagonist and his partners explore the evolutionary process in an orderly manner. The protagonist is more inclined to assist, and the system is a separate executive. The program is running, and the protagonist is the only variable that affects the system. It looks good and can be updated quickly.

Why do many Tomato novels always use so many adjectives? It makes me have a headache. Could it be AI?

It was very amazing at first. The plot and world view were described very well. I didn't understand why the score was so low. However, after the Orange Cat Chapter, the perception dropped significantly. Various flaws appeared in the plot one after another. Some settings appeared slightly abrupt (such as the Golden Bone Recruitment, which was too abrupt), and some settings disappeared as if they had been eaten. It feels like the author doesn't have an outline and starts to come up with ideas one at a time. The story before the Orange Cat chapter may have been revised and fine-tuned several times by the author before being posted. The plot behind it seems to have been busy updating and there was no time to polish it. I'll give it four stars.

It's a good new book but it still needs improvement. [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] It can be seen that the author's writing is getting better and better, and I hope to continue to work hard! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's well written and logically clear. The plot is compact. But why, sometimes there are repeated sentences.