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I've finished reading it. Overall, it's a pretty good novel (relatively speaking in Tomato). I can see a lot of flavors from other novels in this book (Seize the Body, Transformation Tie Tie, Dungeon Adventure, Underworld Coin), but that doesn't hinder its excellence, but its shortcomings are also obvious. The writing is not precise enough, and it could be written more exciting and logically (this is definitely not qualified if it is a copy flow!), And the characters are not three-dimensional enough. The emotional transition is too sudden and blunt (for example, when the protagonist saves her ex-girlfriend, when she just gets the intelligence tip, you can timely Describe the protagonist's expression and mood. Would a normal man be indifferent if he knew that his ex-girlfriend didn't love him but was taken away from her and suffered a lot? No matter if the author wants the protagonist to save her and the three of them get together, or if he is forced to forget about each other because of his body? In Jianghu, whether the author kills this ex-girlfriend and makes her become the protagonist's eternal regret, there should be no lack of description of the protagonist's mood from getting the truth to saving the ex-girlfriend). Author, you have incorporated too many things and need to be polished. It is a masterpiece at best! By the way, you can go and watch the ghost talk live broadcast room. The author also imitates a super thriller style, but he has found his own way and is very successful. Come on, author! ! !

It involves skin objects, possessions and puppets. When someone dies and gets up again, you don't know who it is. It's a bit overloaded. But the story frame is very interesting. I hope you won't become addicted to it. I'll come back and give it a 9-star review if it turns out to be good.

It feels good. Although the apocalyptic novel written by the author in the second book is not interesting, this one is really good. It seems that you are still suitable for this track. What happens next? Can the ex-girlfriend be rescued? Also, will Lin Weiwei upgrade her skin? Although it is not as evil as other novels, I think the author is still planning something?

It looks much better than those high scores, not bad

I saw someone recommending it and thought it was quite cliche, but I didn't expect it to be unexpectedly exciting, compact and not protracted, the plot has ups and downs, the logic is rigorous, and there are no flaws. It's really good!

It feels quite satisfactory and the logic is basically self-consistent. I haven't seen any OOC issues yet, so I'll give it a try. At least when I watched it, the words and sentences were quite fluent, and the plot didn't stretch my shoulders.

I have nothing to do at home during the Chinese New Year, so I lay on the bed and read a novel. Not to mention it is quite good. I read it. I just read the first few, so take your time and see if the later ones are still so attractive [please read carefully]

This book will definitely become a masterpiece. Whether it is the structure or the details, it is the best book I have read in the past few years. Of course, I love this kind of subject matter, and I hope you will like it too!

The author is really talented in writing, the scenes are described with a sense of pictures, and the characters are vivid. One person has thousands of faces, and his wisdom can be seen in every inch.

The writing is really good, the details are full, and there are wonderful things everywhere. I love it so much. Keep going! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]