High Martial: If You Were the Last Embers of Ka'oslana

The enemy that day was scoliosis. The butterfly of that day remains on the other side. On that day, the cat was elbowed and flew to the door and could no longer be so angry and mischievous. Such a big person turned into a bracelet. The flattest shape is more sighing. The one-eyed professor is cruel and merciless, and he rips out both the heart and the liver. At the end of the west wind, there is also Tiningtian who has a split character. The West Wind Qi Die group is offline one by one, how do you want me to play?

My favorite Bai E role-playing novel, every time the protagonist's role value increases, I feel like reminiscing about Bai E's life.

Like it very much! In fact, I thought it was a cool article at first, but later I found that the story is more tragic. Although it is a role play, in my eyes, Bai Jin can already be regarded as Bai E from another world who is also struggling with his own destiny. Bai Jin is the "Bai E" and "Savior" of this world, but his birth is more tragic. His rapid growth is completely forced by Gui Ji. Whether it is creating an environment for him to perform or adding crises and difficulties to the world, Bai Jin can only passively accept it. The overall plot is a drama, and all the foreshadowing in the early stage has been taken back. I enjoyed watching it, and I don't know about other people, but I really like this tragic and epic style. Each character has his own unique personality and story. Even if he knows his final ending, he will fight without hesitation. Even if he fails, it will still touch people's hearts. (Although it may be because I prefer tragedy and beauty, but it tastes good [like]) Although I like tragedy, teacher, the final ending must be for White Ember to elbow the Lords of Extinction and Nanook, okay? [Cry]

The writing is very epic. Although some of the foreshadowing is really unclear, it is really good. My favorite story about Bai E's role.

The logic of the overall plot is great, and the basic direction is very clear, but the empathy contained in the text is not enough. For example, Wei He, I only saw his heroic, mature and stable side, but this is obviously not enough to become the switch activated by the protagonist. The two of them do not have much personal contact in daily life, and they do not have much emotional basis (comradeship), so I don't see any reason for the protagonist to sincerely have sincere feelings for him, which leads to readers who understand and are confused when reading this paragraph. If you still want to use a character to trigger the protagonist's improvement, then the other person must be someone very important to him, and the question of why it is important lies in how you shape the relationship between them. At present, except that the logic of the story is better than that of ordinary people, the whole story is more like the author himself telling a story, and there is only a small sense of involvement for readers. I hope you can think more about the interpersonal relationships and emotional chains of the protagonist and secondary characters in the future, so that more people will like your words and stories. We should say "the whole article is more like..." Or "the whole article is more like...". These are repetitive and long-winded sentences. Children should not learn them.

This is a retelling of Bai E's life, and it is also Bai Jin's own tragic epic. I hope Bai Jin and the people in that world will have another tomorrow.

Well, in the early part of the book, the protagonist felt very well written and very passionate. But later on, he felt a bit like the bad boy Lu Mingfei in the early part. Maybe I felt wrong, but I still highly recommend this book [smile]

There are almost no peeing spots. It may be a bit literary in some parts, and some of the paragraphs and sentences are completely based on the original work, but it is definitely of the highest quality. I can give it four stars for the novel and five stars for the fanfic. I hope there will be a sequel.

After reading it, I was very shocked. I usually rarely leave book reviews, but this time I was really shocked by the author's writing style and ideas! This is the best Baietong humanistic book I have ever read! (Okay, this is also the first Baietong humanistic book I have read) The author has done a good job of integrating Ompharos and Earth-42 to a certain extent, and has also mapped the corresponding characters. Bai Jin's companions and the memory of Ompharos flashing back in his eyes were also handled perfectly! And Heie is still so handsome, so strong, and so miserable But the final outcome still makes me a little regretful. Will the efforts of mortals in several lifetimes not be as powerful as the "gods" (ok, this is very Ompharos) But overall it's great!

The foreshadowing is well filled in, and it is logical from beginning to end. There are a few minor flaws, but they are insignificant compared to the overall situation, and the protagonist is not mindless. The revelation of the foreshadowing at the end is also exciting. It is not overwhelming and not particularly OOC. The ending is very good. It is a very good fanfic. I am very lucky to have read this book. I will always support you! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]