Bai E: Forging a Savior’s Legacy Through Destruction

So far the characterization is very good, Bai E is not too OOC, and the plot arrangement is also very good. But can the author please give me an accurate answer? Is there a cp? Some of the plots are so ambiguous that it's a bit scary... In the end, I hope there is no cp. If there is cp, I will really run away. . I have followed so many chapters, and I feel that there are too many plots and descriptions of "falling into confusion", which makes me very tired. Before 3.3, Baie couldn't figure out why he was the savior. Baie was indeed a confused person, but he was also a ruthless person who was result-oriented. So after the strong external stimulation of the deaths of Aglaiya and Tibao, he became extremely determined. After understanding that his goal is to "get the truth," his confusion should be greatly reduced. People like Bai E are unlikely to remain confused because of doubts about the process of "why humans kill each other". They can occasionally be puzzled, but in the face of the purpose of "pursuing the truth", these puzzles will at most make him stagnate for a moment, but they will definitely not slow down his progress towards the goal. At present, the author writes that Bai E has been confused for too long. He talks about "finding the truth", but he lacks subjective initiative in action and is very contradictory in perception. I can understand why the author wants to describe Bai's confusion. After all, this "confusion" makes Bai'e closer to the concept of "human being" - sentimentality; but Bai'e has more "divine" qualities than ordinary people, so when he faces difficulties, even if he loses his memory, he will not be confused for long. Reasonable confusion adds "human" reality to the character, but excessive confusion will destroy the arc of the character. I hope the author can adjust the narrative layout. Even ordinary people in reality will generally not be confused for such a long time when faced with the question "Why do humans kill each other?" Moreover, Bai'e is not an ordinary person, and Xingtie's world view cannot be compared with reality.

I rarely see authors who dare to write about war themes. War themes are heavy and depressing and easy to write down. However, this book has not been written down so far. Especially the description of the officers from the Lost Star Tribe reminded me of "Resurrection". They are all people who fell into the abyss, but they still maintain the light of humanity. It is very contradictory and I like to read it. But what happened to Xiaobai? There is too little information to tell. The slow pace is suitable for people like me who chew the plot carefully. Every update is full and full. Thank you to the author for cooking [like]

The author's creativity is really good, and the writing is also very exciting. The war between two races on the original planet under the original world view of Xingtie is really rare in Xingtie's fan fiction. Looking forward to further developments. The four stars are simply because I was traumatized and I only watched it because I had no CP. I personally think the Erlian interaction is normal and acceptable. But the supporting characters keep mistaking them for being a couple, which I can't accept. My first reaction when I saw it was that I went back to the interface to see if it was free of CP. It is recommended to give an early warning, it is really annoying.

The author writes very well [Blowing Kiss]. At the beginning, he listened to emo on the road. It felt like he had gone through the reincarnation of Xiaobai all over again. This is not a cool article. Baie has experienced and grown up again and again. It is an excellent work.

It's really good-looking (♥∀♥). The world is set in the world of Bengtie Yuan. The journey of the amnesiac Bai E is very interesting. As for the ambiguity between the characters, it is well written. Whether it has cp or not depends on the author's writing skills. If it is well written, I feel happy😋. If it is not well written, I will still be embarrassed. Also, please make Bai E happy, please😭

Yes, I like it very much. If this subject can be written well, it will definitely have both depth and plot. However, in this fast-paced era, this book may not have much traffic. Alas, I can't selfishly tell the author not to "negotiate". I can only say to work hard. I rarely see such books anymore. As for cp, that's not a problem at all. As long as it's logical and doesn't impose a plot with settings like Beng Tie, I can accept it and even like it. Very good. If you want depth, you can have depth. Looking at the reverse, there should be some at the end. I really like this kind of writing about ordinary people and people who resist.

The author must not give up.

The writing is very good, and the original world is also very good, ah, it just lacks a bit.

The fighting scenes and details are well written, but the pace is slow, but there are too few now to see anything. I look forward to continuing with more.

Bai'e is not OOC, and it is an original planet in Bengtie's worldview [Like][Like][Like]