Mecha Girls in Battle: What’s a Human Like You Doing Out There?

It's okay, but it just gives people the feeling that there are too many dialogues, no scenes, and even most of the settings are crammed into the dialogues. Moreover, there is no appearance description of the characters, or very little. You can't tell that the heroine's first owner is a woman unless you look carefully. Instead, a bunch of names are used to give people no impression. The settings don't have to be so complicated. If you use numerical values, you don't need to deduct such detailed divisions.

The third young master of the Tang family was about to cry when he saw it, and Tiancan Tudou was amazed when he saw it! This is the reincarnation of the Four Great Classics, the leader of the literary world in the 21st century! "Holy Ruins" lost some of its literary talent! "Dou Po" lost some connotation! "Zhu Xian" lost some emotions in front of it! "Shading the Sky" lost a third of imagination in front of it! "Buddha" lost half of its layout in front of it! This is a classic that has not been seen on the Internet for a century! The greatest literary masterpiece of the 21st century! From Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin, to Confucius and Mo Laozhuang, the poets and poets, Sansu Jiaxuan; from Qin Emperor Hanwu, Tang Zongzu Song Zu, Genghis Khan, to Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernicus, Aristotle, who has read it and not been amazed?! This book by the author is really the work of a man of heaven! The writing is brilliant, the diction is exquisite, inherits the style of the Wei and Jin Dynasties, and promotes the charm of the Tang and Song Dynasties. It is deeply penetrating! It is really a blessing in three lifetimes to come across this book in my lifetime! However, after reading this book, a sadness suddenly arises: Such a masterpiece, if I never have the chance to see it again in the future, what is the point of my life? What's the point of my life?! Fortunately! I made a prompt decision and put it on the bookshelf! Only when my restless heart can find a moment of peace. However! If such a masterpiece is covered in dust and the world cannot see it, wouldn't it be a waste of resources and the author's efforts?! After a battle between heaven and man, I finally made up my mind: sacrifice the ego to fulfill the greater self! This book review is dedicated to the world for everyone to appreciate! This book must be held up again and again, to the sky, and let the world know it! Walking between the heaven and the earth, the scorching sun and the bright moon are proof: Is this book good enough? Not enough! Across the rivers and lakes, rivers and lakes are proof: Is this book enjoyable? Not enough! Standing on the top of the fairy mountain, Qionglou Yuyu echoes: Is the update fast enough? Not enough! Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters! Not fast enough! Not enough content! Not enough! 💪

So why did the author update? Because they want to continue the breath of the story, but this is impossible. So, in your opinion, they must update. When the deadline for perfect attendance hangs high like the sword of Damocles, only the author who breaks the update can escape the fate of oblivion. That's right, in order to prevent the story from sinking into the sea of oblivion, I dismantled ribs to make pen holders, forged moonlight into punctuation points, and composed heartbeats into chapter rhythms. But if you want to witness the new chapter, you... You must endure me until the end of time. These are the logic of the author after crossing the history of online literature. Come on, everything I carry It has nothing to do with choice, it has nothing to do with life or death. At this moment, the urging of all people converges into the only ambition. Hundreds of beasts from the Brahma sky are added to this body. Karmic demons enter the abyss. Break the key and step forward. This is the inscription of [Blow Update].

Books, why are they updated? Is it simply because they want to be written about? But that can't be the answer. Because they must be written. When the meteorite of discontinuation falls from the book, only the author of the series can escape from the predetermined demise. In order to prevent the work from being discontinued, the author flies high into the sky and takes away your book waste, and because of this, he will write and fall into discontinuity. And if you want your works to be constantly updated, you, you, must be pushed to a higher place than him. This is the logic of interruption after serialization. This is the author's pen. It is the end point of this book. It has nothing to do with choices. It has nothing to do with life or death. At this moment, the ideals of all people are gathered. Step forward! This is the inscription of [urge to update]

Let me give you a review (subjective, don't criticize if you don't like it👍). First, the writing is a bit rough. You can learn from the book Grayscale Fighter Girl. Second, there are too many dialogues and they are too long. My suggestion is to break what one person said into several paragraphs, which can be combined with some actions. Third, the connection between the various fragments is not smooth. I can't recommend this. You still have to understand it yourself. Fourth, you can't update faster, the requirements are not high, just 10 chapters a day, no one in the production team can rest like you😏 🖐🏻😭🤚🏻 There is nothing else, the above suggestions are purely personal feelings, don't criticize if you don't like it. The writing is still very good, but currently I feel that it is not as good as Goose and Grayscale. Keep up the good work! Babadagne😡😡😡 Attack point D!

The writing is very good, the skills are very unique, and the emotions develop quickly. Except for some sentences that seem not smooth, there are no poisonous points, and it is very interesting 😄 Finally, I hope the author will not die [full]

It feels different from Penguin's original novel. This one tends to be confrontational, but the quality is good. I hope the author can finish it and not leave it unfinished.

The writing is good, which is okay for me, who started reading novels in the third grade of elementary school and has now graduated from high school. The narrative is a bit straightforward, and the character arcs are not very fleshed out, but the plot tone has a certain connotation. The story is a good one, but the author's writing skills are slightly lacking. Come on

It turned out to be a mecha text, I thought I just pulled out the battery [laughing]

Hope to survive