Western Fantasy: The Straight-Laced Knight Can’t Stay Away from Me

Well, it's like a male video versus a female video. The pace is very fast, and the writing tends to focus on the emotional line and is more secretive. It can be said that it satisfies people who want to watch both male and female videos. Overall, the two male protagonists are very neat and tidy without being whiny or anything. It's not as straightforward as other dual-male protagonist stories where the genders are changed, but the overall role in the relationship remains the same. Really, I've always wanted to complain. In some stories, the male protagonist is written to be more female than the female, like Xiangxiang's cute little p. What's so disgusting? This book is well written [laugh][laugh][laugh]

A lot of people always make irresponsible remarks about the word "nanny article", which I really don't understand. If you really want to be logical, in a relationship of sincere companionship and walking together, the stronger person will instinctively protect the temporarily weak companion around him. When everyone reads the story, the strong person can calmly accept the protagonist's efforts to pave the way, provide opportunities, and offer golden fingers. How come the protagonist takes the initiative to help people around him and distributes resources to his companions, and is labeled as a nanny in the story? Readers who prefer mindless and solitary novels don't have to force themselves. The Tomato platform, which only revolves around the protagonist, has a large number of streamlined novels that are more in line with your reading preferences. This article itself follows the path of group portraits. Most of the supporting characters have complete roles and will appear repeatedly in the future. There are reunions and separations, and the ups and downs of the bonds between people are the core of this article. A good story is never qualified only if it is a one-man show that focuses on the protagonist throughout. The supporting characters should not just be tools to set off the aura of the protagonist.

Beautiful! The protagonist is rational and decisive but not the Holy Father, which is great! After entering the city, it didn't look as good as during the adventure in the forest. The highlight gradually shifted from the protagonist to the attacker, and the protagonist felt a bit reduced to a foil. I originally thought that the protagonist finally got the potion book and could develop new skills. Start high and go low, and add 3 slutty characters from the adventure team. Now they are focusing on being a nanny. Looking at the development later, the protagonist should also step by step towards the destination of being a free nanny.

It is a very novel article that combines male and female stories in a sophisticated way. What is commendable is that the emotional line does not appear to be abrupt. Although the writing is relatively green, the plot can be supplemented. This is also the usual method for male stories. However, the plot design dropped significantly after entering the city. From my point of view, the Golden Clover adventurer and the fangs lack attractions, the logic is obviously reduced and the protagonist is out of touch. To put it bluntly, the poisonous points are greater than the pleasant points. There are also some flaws in the character creation. Contradictions in plot, characters, etc. Are the key elements to attract readers. The author may wish to boldly add contradictions, whether it is the protagonist's personality, plot design, or emotional line. A plain plot that is divorced from the emotional line is very fatal. Since this article is characterized by a male channel carrying a female channel, you might as well stick to it. For a simple example, from the perspective of the protagonist, the main choice is small skeletons in the early stage, and large ones in the middle and late stages. The incremental changes have made some readers uncomfortable. As far as the character of the protagonist is concerned, being too kind will appear indecisive, but it cannot destroy human nature. There is a degree, that is, a principle. The overall contradiction between the personality differences of the two male protagonists and the contradiction in the emotional line is a good entry point. Of course, this is just a small suggestion. The key lies in the plot design. Maybe a relative main line can be added? Extend corresponding subplots and emotional lines? In fact, when it comes to reviews, I tend to hesitate between three and four stars. There are many male videos and they are mixed. Most of them are really too lazy to rate or think more carefully. It is really difficult for female video writers, so it is okay. I usually give five stars, but this one is not pure, and there are indeed some flaws in the plot, so in the end I will give it four stars. Finally, I still hope that the author can read my comments (I think it is relatively pertinent and objective). I did read this article for a while, so I am still very sorry for the decline in the quality of the plot (I will decide whether to adopt the suggestion, maybe the author has other plans? Just pretend I didn't say it [laughs]) Finally, I wish this book a good result (after all, novel articles are rare, haha) Come on [Like] [Like]

It's very good-looking, and it's updated every day. Although it's not perfect, it's still considered a high-quality product in Tomato. And I read the bad reviews, don't you know this is a female-channeled female-channeled female-channeled female-channeled essay? [Laughing and crying] What are you asking for with the fast-paced and refreshing male-channeled content? The emotional description between the two male protagonists is also very delicate, which is quite good. This is a highlight. And we can't just start scolding Xiaobai for writing too much about Resuzel just because he appeared early. Look forward to the subsequent plot development, author, come on!

Some people say that the protagonist works as a nanny and carries three bottles of oil. Well, actually I don't think much of this, but the protagonist is portrayed as flesh and blood, not a pure monster. There are also those who say the writing is not good, well, I thought someone would say this book is not good, but I never thought it would be for this reason. I think I have read a lot of books of this type on Tomato. In comparison, I still think this writing is pretty good, but I feel comfortable reading it at the moment. From other aspects, this article is very suitable to my taste. I like the settings, plot and the author's writing style. It can be regarded as the alternation between daily life and combat. This kind of sometimes loose and sometimes tense can give people a certain sense of freshness. My opinion is, no Two people come up and get together (this is one of the things I hate the most). You are not here to read cool articles. It is best to read this book by yourself. Even though I am not good at words, I still hope to be able to help you who are looking for books. Thank you for watching✌🏻️

At present, I have tied it and I have continued to chase it for a while. There are no surprises. I am very happy. I am very picky. I can't read many popular books. It must be fun where it should be. The protagonist suffers a lot. If I don't pull it in the later stage, I predict that the book will be rated higher than 9.3 In the future. The only thing that may be regarded as a surprise is that after the two protagonists enter the city, they want to join the adventure team for experience, but there is a requirement for the number of people. I was uncomfortable watching it at the time, and thought that being a nanny might affect the enjoyment. After watching it, I discovered that a large part of the plot later depends on this adventure team. Many of the slaps in the face are related to this adventure team, and it is not too much. The family disputes between the members of the adventure team, and it is quite refreshing to watch the protagonist abuse the genius haha. To follow up again, the protagonist and the adventure team are a bit like poverty alleviation. Those who don't like it can eat it and run away (the specific situation is that every time the protagonist helps the adventure team, he does not need to repay, but when the protagonist asks for help, he will give good things. Although the people in the adventure team said no, they still gave it in the end, and the main character Every time the character requests something, it is actually beneficial to the people in the adventure team, and the benefits are huge. It is obviously a process of sharing risks and enjoying benefits, but the protagonist has to throw out extra benefits every time. In short, it is really a bit like poverty alleviation, and it may not be good for some protagonists.)

It's so beautiful. It's the first time I've seen this kind of golden-fingered protagonist. She has wheat-colored skin. It really hits my mark. I beg you for more updates [Adoration]

It's a very good Western fantasy novel. I like the story of a young couple who adventures together from the beginning. There won't be a problem of one being the main character and neglecting the other. The dual male protagonists should have a good relationship! The main story and emotional development are equally important! ! Ps. It seems that the two male protagonists, one focusing on wisdom and the other focusing on force, complement each other very well. I also hope that the author can pay more attention to the wording and avoid using words that are too oriental, such as hour, inn and so on. .

What I like is the setting of magic + two male protagonists. Neither of them fall in love at first sight, but the relationship gradually heats up, and both have the bud of love in their hearts. This kind of love but uncertainty is awesome, plus both parties are working hard to enhance their own strength while seeing the wonders of the world and exploring the other side of the world. It's simply perfect! ! ! Come on, author! This novel will definitely reach the top of the list, so be sure to update it every day! Looking forward to updates every day..[Blow kiss]