After Flirting with Ping Xie, Hei Hua, and Pang, I Faked My Death

Nice looking. I would like to give you some small suggestions (bad ideas). When the protagonist ends the strategy, try to impress the five protagonists. Of course, I don't know if the author's outline will all include death escapes. (The following are all ways to die in the underworld provided by individuals. It is best to give them painlessly). Later, you can do a movie viewing, because the time set by the editor can be connected together and let them think about it (Jiejiejie, I am good or bad [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]) Where is the blind man? The protagonist probably has to die once in the fantasy world (shielding a kid from the knife when destroying the family/getting killed while protecting the kid while escaping/etc.), It is also possible to die once in reality (I feel that the death method in the fantasy world can be synchronized), giving the blind man a sense of fate [smile] [smile]; or, giving the blind man the opportunity to kill the protagonist, but still unable to retain the "feeling of powerlessness", which impresses him (after all, this old guy is more defensive) [smile] [smile]. However, it is best to have the protagonist's memory blurred or sealed when he leaves the fantasy world (retaining basic living habits and giving people a feeling like an old friend has returned). After all, the protagonist's baby acting may not necessarily fool the old boy. As for Hua'er and Wu Xie, I feel that the protagonist's acting skills, strategies, and skills in grasping people's hearts have been improved. Is it possible to make the protagonist become a top player at once? Or maybe it won't be that difficult. (For example: Poor Tom was manipulated in the palm of his hand) (I met the top succubus just after leaving the novice village), quack, quack, how bad am I. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. What is the brain? No more. Great writing. What are three views? No more. Nothing is needed in the second dimension, as long as the writing is good! In the third dimension, I abide by the law, but in the second dimension, I do evil things. So sweet, so sweet.

So pretty! Record: It is rare that the plot line is not completely followed, but the pure emotional line. Each timeline is basically a 1v1 format. The protagonist is really super gentle and a super good person. However, my favorite is the pure love line of Xiao Guan and the family line of Fat Mom. The final ending is a happy ending for ALL. Everyone has a bright future. Key points: Warmth and affection can be brushed twice.

The plot is very interesting, and the writing is very delicate. The emotional line between the brother and Yan Tangqing is also very natural, but the update is too slow, and it quickly tied up [crying] [crying]

It looks so good on me, I can't help it, it smells so good, I like this kind of charming person, I like it so much [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [sending heart] ][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart ][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The author's writing is super good, all of them, Qiqi is a heartthrob. Generally speaking, the whole text is paranoid about images. First, the unit takes turns accompanying him in the new small world, and then finally blends into one world. I think the story is very exciting, the plot of the protagonists getting along is also very heartwarming, and the ending is also refreshing, which makes my heart warm.

In the early stages of relationship development, there is a bit of stiffness, and it feels like a head-to-head kiss. Very sweet in the mid-range. The emotional description of near-death in the later period is also a bit blunt. Overall it's good, but I don't recommend it for the abuse, blood vomiting, and awkward emotions. The sweet part is still good.

Big, can you update it? It's not enough. It's not enough at all. It's so beautiful.

The relationship between the protagonist and Zhang Qiling is not inexplicable, but is very good, but it is too slow, the author [crys]

The writing is exquisite, the emotions are portrayed in detail, the characters are vividly created, and the ending is happy. Everyone gets their own happiness. When I was about to finish reading, I was like what a copywriter said, "When a story is about to end, we will always think of its beginning." Overall, it's a good book worth reading! I hope that Yan Tangqing and Brother Da Zhang can continue to live happily. I also wish Da Da that in the new year, all your wishes will come true, all the best, good luck to the God of Wealth, your family will be happy, and you will be happy every day! We are destined to meet again!