The Great Dharma Master

It's good-looking, but those who say that the female apprentice does have some flaws, and it fails later, [Like] [Like] But the level and plot are both relatively good.

The background frame created by the author every time is very good. This is the author's advantage. The cheats and plot arrangements are also relatively reasonable. Although the female characters are slightly poisonous every time, this does not affect the author's level. Why are there not many people reading it every time? I think the author can pay more attention to the rhythm and arrangement of pleasant points. If the rhythm and pleasant points are allocated more reasonably, the reading volume of the book will definitely be greatly improved. Everything else is done well. It is a pity to lose a good book monster because of this shortcoming. Moreover, the author always has new ideas every time, which is rare. If the author is a little more ordinary, don't treat online articles too much as writing, learn some cool writing rhythm, and arrange the rhythm a little, it will definitely be much better.

The writing is good, but the protagonist is too flamboyant without a background, and the novel reads like a game about killing monsters and upgrading.

The plot is pretty good, but the level of cultivation is too low, a bit slow, and the things you encounter are beyond too many levels. When you reach the golden elixir realm, you won't get a thousand chapters to start with.

It's very interesting. I've been a bookworm for many years and I'm in a book shortage. I'll be able to read it after seeing it.

It only represents my personal feeling that the writing is good, but why did it stop updating @ Sorry, Aite is wrong.

I just started watching it and it feels pretty good

It's okay, at least it doesn't smell like brainless blowing skills, [laughing and crying]

A very nice book

After reading it, this book will definitely become popular, as long as you persist, 5 stars will indeed work. It's just that updates are slow