From Minor Unorthodox Cultivator to Primordial Spirit Dao Lord

Such a good book with such a good subject matter, I can't stop reading it! The whole book is non-toxic and has no black spots. The plot is compact and interlocking, and the protagonist is vividly portrayed. This is what a book about gods should be like. It can make people like Tang San call the author daddy. The origins and functions of various exercises and skills in the book have strong traces of Chinese Taoist culture, which will make you happy if you like this part! The author has extraordinary cultural skills, and there are a large number of magically modified poems interspersed in the book. It is not an exaggeration to call the author a little expert in poetry. Even the chapter names are all highlighted. For example, Chapter 2l8: Hu Tian obtains the secret method for refining demons, and the Three Treasures Tian Yuan refining the Tao Foundation, all have chapters that return to the flavor of the novel. Come on, the Qi training period is so exciting, I look forward to developing to a higher level in the future!

This book is awesome and really good-looking. I feel that the author has a wide range of knowledge and uses good words. I didn't expect that Tomato also has such excellent products. The first hundred or so chapters are quite interesting, but the later chapters are not so good. They are a lot watery. I guess I used AI to write them, so I can't stand them.

I really need this book. From beginning to end, I can see many classic shadows in this book, like Li Changshou when he is slutty, the green-robed ancestor of Shushan Side Gate when he is ruthless, as cheap as Bai Xiaochun, and like the reincarnation of Emperor Zhetian when he is hot-blooded. The practice system is a mixture of immortality, traditional immortality, and classical immortality. The author's imagination is neither too big nor too small. The protagonist is self-interested and principled, and does not indulge in love. Whether the villain or the supporting role, they are all very distinctive. The IQ is basically up to standard, and the world view is greatly shaped. The appearance of new maps will not be sudden. Each chapter has a feeling of being narrated. The author updates steadily, adding three chapters every day. Now this book is almost dying due to malicious damage. My heart aches. Such a big tomato cannot accommodate a good-looking book. I finally found this book among a pile of shit. Support authors, support good books, resist bad money and drive out good money.

This book can be regarded as a god, the author's writing style is very good

This book is of high quality and is not comparable to ordinary tomato books.

See Chapter 258 Good looking, can be seen Recommended to add to bookshelf to watch and follow up 4.5 Stars rounded to 5 stars Plot: The overall story is good, with a little more inner drama, but it becomes a bit bland as it develops. The protagonist is too sure of other people's psychological descriptions, and seems a bit omniscient. However, if you have the talent for systems, you can understand it. However, this way there will be less twists and turns, and it is difficult to form foreshadowing and riddles. You must know that it is human nature to explore the unknown, but the overall plot is foreshadowing. Writing style: It's really good, but it's not top-notch in every aspect. There are too many Internet terms and old memes. In Tomato, these kind of memes are good or bad for the book itself. I feel that if you work hard, you can turn the book into a small masterpiece. Unfortunately, some of the jokes suddenly kicked out the sense of substitution. Maybe it is difficult for the author to write a sense of humor in this cultivation world without using memes. Although I enjoyed reading it, not everyone can understand the memes. There are also some early driving scenes, which I feel are not too necessary. After all, the protagonist starts to use the cauldron in Chapter 258. If this book could make the pace of the story a little tighter, because sometimes there is no way to find people to fight with a small improvement, and the effect of the improvement cannot be reflected, basically the fight starts with a big improvement, and the transition is not smooth enough. In the later stage, if you have a clone, you should be able to do something, and it will look better. If the plot were described in more detail The writing could be more beautiful Bury some pitfalls in the plot, clarify the main plot, and create a linkage with some of the branch plots. The supporting characters should be given more characterization This book should be able to confer gods After all, some of the settings and systems are quite innovative. Daomen. Although the settings of Daomen are terrible, it is important to write the system as if it were real. With the Taoist system in front of you, the author will feel much more relaxed Maybe the author wrote the book casually and didn't pay too much attention to it. The above is my personal opinion for your readers' reference. Again, I would like to remind book friends that the books are good and can be read. A reader who has read novels for more than ten years

Very good, very exciting. The monastic system is combined with reality and has original integration, the human world is realistic and dark, the world system has a large framework, and the future is promising.

Humorous and flexible bottom line funny style, quite nice. How do you say that? The practice system is so foggy and difficult to understand. Everything else is great, especially the dialogues, various games and explanations. The supporting characters hate the protagonist so much that they hate it.

This novel is quite good. Toad's Immortal Gourd Style has a place in Xianxia novels, which refers to the creation of this genre. After all, the books ten years ago were still much worse than they are now, and you can basically skip reading Toad's books in the early stages. Even before Xianhu Yuanshen, what's the point of looking good after Yuanshen? This book is not the original route, but based on the setting of Xianhu flow, adding the refreshing feeling of mortal flow, and adding the unique humor of modern Internet literature and the pleasure of cheating. After all, it was not as rubbish before cheating. If you cheat, it will still be trash. Isn't cheating in vain? It is a relatively good-looking modern novel, not a book that blindly suppresses the protagonist. 😏

A top-notch masterpiece in Tomato 🍅, with brilliant writing, funny content, and repeated jumps on the yellow bottom line. Personally, the weak point is that it is nearly 300 chapters in. The male protagonist has not finished a year and is still in the Qi training period, but the combat power setting is even better than that of the Ancient Golden Immortal. If the author didn't get stuck behind the pen, this book would definitely be on the list. [Top post]