Honkai: Star Rail: No Naughtiness Allowed, Because We Have Keqing

It's nice to read, and for novice fan authors, there's no need to take fairy tales with too much salt. The current shortcoming is that the protagonist is too perfect and may be broken when it collapses, which means it is not easy to use the knife. The author can work hard to break the strong inner city~ It's quite sweet, it's great, you can buy it. Among the Bengtie fanfics, this book may not be very popular, but as long as there is more marketing, it will definitely become popular, and it is estimated that it can reach 9.5 (Estimate). Anyway, it looks good, please update soon. Novice writers usually have a common problem: the descriptions of big foreshadowing and major case settings may be too eye-catching, and they want to deliberately express the uniqueness and mystery of the book. However, if the foreshadowing and settings are too cliche, it will easily bore the readers. You can compress the highlights and key points that you want to express, and don't overdo it. The rain and dew will be the same. The foreshadowing should be written with a sense of mystery, and the foreshadowing can be written inconspicuously, but it can hook the readers. Of course, our Lao Tomato does not require novices. If you really want to make progress (Bushi), then write more books and read more books. This may not be of much use, but at least it can increase your skills a little bit, which is also a bit of meat. Anyway, come on! If something goes wrong, I'll come back and change the book's rating to one star! This is what you have to write yourself. It can be seen that the author is very passionate. If you can't write well, then just wait for it to be defeated by Super! ! @ Pigeon

The writing style is quite good and the plot is quite enjoyable. It is a rare masterpiece. Finally, the author's mother, please update me more. If there is no update, Oniga, Wadaxi [crying]

This book has received mixed reviews. But I think this book is well written! First of all, the author's treatment of the character Song Jiang is novel and unique. This completely broke Song Jiang's previous style of obeying Tang Monk's advice. Tang Seng is not like before, always chatting with Lin Daiyu and not doing his job properly. Secondly, the description of the battle between Xiahou Dun and Xu Sanduo is extremely accurate and lifelike. Completely subverting Xu Sanduo's sinister XL image in our minds. Moreover, Xiahou Dun did not have a crush on Hua Qiangu from the beginning as in the original work, but only after experiencing Mei Changsu's transference and separation, sparks sparked with her. The logic of the plot becomes mellow because of this The only drawback is that the emotional scenes are too abrupt. I have something to say about this: Why do you confess directly? 😨This is not what is written in Marxist philosophy at all! ! Love is not an abstract spiritual hobby, nor an emotional suspension divorced from reality, but a practical relationship under specific historical conditions - it is an essential connection between people formed in material production and social interaction, with objective inevitability, and is definitely not an accidental burst of subjective imagination! 😤😤😤 You must first prove the practical nature of love: it is not a one-way projection of consciousness onto reality, but a two-way construction of "intersubjectivity" - your heartbeat cannot stay at the level of thinking, but must be transformed into concrete actions to transform the objective reality of "our relationship". Through care at the material level, empathy at the spiritual level, and responsibility at the practical level, a dialectical leap of "knowledge-practice-re-understanding-re-practice" is completed. 🤓

The protagonist spent 120 minutes, flicked the fishing rod 951 times, and caught 7 Heisei.

It is quite well written and can be regarded as a masterpiece among the Bengtie fanfics. The only shortcoming is that it is still too little and not satisfying, but considering that there are three updates a day, it can be ignored. At present, it seems that it is a dual heroine and Cerydra. The emotional description of Haisein is very delicate and sweet, but the score is a bit low. I personally think it should be at least 9 points or above, but I believe it will gradually increase in the future. Good luck, author^ω^

The five stars are to prevent being hidden. Thank you to the two Shennongs in the comment area for reminding me. I will add something here. If you want to read this book, you can read Chapter 185 first. If you can accept it, you can read it. I really regret reading this book.

From the perspective of watching 5000 hours of "experience", it is very good. For fans of Bengtie, it has a dull "sense of redemption". The characters are also well drawn and fit the original characters in the game. The portrayal of the protagonist is also perfect, without the inhuman indifference of a genius. The only thing about this book is that it has too few words. It looks good, I love reading it, I will update more.

After reading it, I think this book is a very well-written fan work. There are no poisonous points in the text, and the author writes very delicately on the emotional line, especially the relationship between the male protagonist and the two female protagonists. In my opinion, this book can score 8.5 To 9.0. I don't understand why it only scores 7.5. There are also some holes that the author has not filled in in this book. For example, what is the relationship between the male protagonist's sister and Ke? But these are not problems. Overall, I highly recommend everyone to read this book. It is really beautiful. Finally, I hope that the author can write better and better and bring us better works [blowing kiss]

The writing style is very comfortable, and it is a very good article. However, some of the proper nouns of Star Iron are a little loose. Senatos is changed into Thanatos, which really affects the perception. After all, this is Ompharos and not ancient Greece. For the plot-oriented audience, it is a very awkward feeling, awkward and a bit uncomfortable. Of course, there are no problems with anything else. Overall, it's a very good article.

The writing is quite good, but I didn't like the plot of giving away a girl, so I ran away. Although the reason was that, I still prefer to accept it decisively if I like it, instead of writing a story that looks like the protagonist must not be married suddenly later.