In Marvel, I Transform into Ultraseven from the Start

Severn's homework hasn't been completed yet [laughing evilly] Tony should let Severn see more complexities of human beings, for example, he can help and sacrifice his life in various disaster places a second ago. But in the next second, he may give Zero multiple earthly "brothers" in bed.

The idea is good, but the character design of Savin is too weird. It is neither Savin TV nor Leo TV. It is like a directly made-up Star of Light Savin or some kind of time traveler Savin. But after reading part of it, your Savin is indeed the original Savin. It is too twisted. Many of the words are completely different from what Saiwen would say. I don't know if the author originally wrote it like this or if it was flattened directly after being polished by AI. The polishing with AI needs to be appropriate. With your AI, everyone's character has been molded into the same mold by AI. Except for the name of each character, you can't see much difference at all. The various settings are also unclear. Use less words that look very mysterious. It feels like many words are created by AI for you. For someone who often watches Oven, it is too weird. Use less AI polishing, I really like this idea and idea.

Driving a 50-meter Ferrari is so funny that it's really something Tony could say and write well.

At present, the combination is good, neither deliberately bringing down one party nor overly promoting one party.

Written by real people and polished by AI, it should be. There are too many conflicts in the article.

It's a very good cross-over work. I don't feel any obvious shortcomings so far. Let me list my feelings: + Abundant Ultra spirit: Human self-improvement and Ultraman assistance are well balanced. Stark is a very suitable contact point to deal with various public opinions. + The plot logic is reasonable: the appearance of Saiwen and the development of the conflicts between the parties are very smooth. It can be seen that the author has carefully thought about setting the outline. + Diverse and three-dimensional character images: no one speaks the same way, the character style is restored, and the characteristics of supporting characters and monsters are written out + Good basic writing skills: standard wording, no random jokes, no typos, no random use of punctuation marks, and nothing wrong except sometimes a little more exclamation marks. This is especially rare in tomatoes. Also, tell me about your feelings about the style. The positioning of Ultraman in this book currently seems to be "strong" rather than "invincible". Although his strength is crushing, he does not abuse the plot of transforming first when faced with trouble. It gives people the impression that he is rational and not arrogant, even if his human body is a Stark. Very careful writing choices, overall a book with great potential.

Sheep Persimmon is a cute little creature. Every brother and sister who passes by will touch his head and leave a like. ∧ ∧ (=ω=)

Neither party is bragging, it's simply a masterpiece.

It's really good-looking and the most important thing is that it basically fits the character image [Adoration]

So far, not bad