I, Zombie Detective, Specialize in Slaying Vengeful Ghosts from Hong Kong Movies

I like the subject matter. Let me tell you a few of my opinions. The character traits and charisma of the protagonist can be further explored and made more three-dimensional. Kuang Tianyou and Constantine can be used as a reference. Don't become a pervert or a gangster. The storyline and environment are not described enough, and the overall feeling is dry. The power system is a bit constrained. Improvement can be of its own. You can only improve by sucking blood. It is too indigenous. You can refer to the rigid contract system.

So far, everything is clear! He is a protagonist who upgrades steadily and gradually, and... His three views are still positive. It is recommended not to open a harem or engage in ambiguity, because Long Aotian's protagonists are really as numerous as the stars in the sky! Let's do something different, author~

It seems okay, the sentences are fluent, and the logic is not bad at the moment. It would be better if there were more female protagonists, haha,,,

Real author, online coding, not Ai, no Ai. Please give it a five-star review and add it to your bookshelf. [Top post][top post][top post]

It's very good. It fits the style of Hong Kong movies. It matches the Hong Kong movies I've seen. You can imagine the scenes from the article [laughs]. The article doesn't feel awkward at all. The protagonist's strength is moderate, and there aren't so many love scenes. It's good. The author keeps up the good work.

The writing is very good, and it's a pleasure to read. It's neither a noob nor a fool, nor a saint. It doesn't kill people indiscriminately or mess around. It's rare to have such honest articles. It's just too little. Who can read it? I want to lock the author in a small dark room [laughter]

The writing is quite good, and it connects various Hong Kong ghost movies very well, such as Cat Monster, School of Ghosts, Chu Renmei, Ghost Mansion, etc. It has both funny and exciting points. Unlike other stories, the official knows that there are supernatural events, but they just don't set up a response organization. , The protagonist here is a zombie with an official position, and he is also a senior police officer. I just hope that in the future, it can be added to classic movies such as Ghostly Foot, Zombie Rebirth on the 7th, and Night of Resurrection. There are also some names that I can't think of. I will tell you when I read the commentary later. Lao Da, why did you crash? Now that you're gone, who can write for me what I'm missing [laughs]? Children, this book has been discontinued. Please observe again to see if it is a eunuch.

First of all, this is a book that normal people will find quite enjoyable, because the author writes very smoothly. It's very smooth, unlike some AIs. Secondly, this worldview is well integrated and cleverly designed. Will the combat power collapse? What about the protagonist? This kind. What kind of combat strength and stage are they at? It's very smooth, not jerky all of a sudden, but very strong at the same time. First of all, this is a book that normal people will find interesting, because the author writes very smoothly and smoothly, unlike some AIs. Secondly, this world view is also well integrated and designed very cleverly. The combat power will not collapse. As for the protagonist, what kind of combat power and what stage is he in? It is very smooth and will not suddenly become too strong or suddenly very strong. And we have some impression of many decent villains, and the way the protagonist is written sometimes makes us unexpected, a little surprise. All I can say is that it's great, author, you are awesome. You are awesome

It's well written. The author's writing style is very good. I hope it can be updated steadily. I like this book very much. After all, zombie movies are so classic. Although it is not the era of Uncle Nine, I feel that it is not far from the exorcist police. I hope that Uncle Nine, the police officer, can appear later.

It must be five stars, it's super good-looking, and by the way, you can join "Ghosts Come and Go", someone can be a ghost messenger, and you can also inherit the father's legacy. There are also magic fetuses, strange threads, dead silence, and the devil's slaughterhouse. There are too many. I can only think of these for now. It's unfinished, but there's obviously so much more that could be written. I'm really looking forward to Ren Jiu and Chen Fulai from The First Commandment meeting [face covering]. The subject matter is so good, why not write it?