How I Failed to Raise My Little Sister and Ended Up With a Brother-Obsessed One

This is my first time to write a review. The author writes very well, the writing is fluent, there are many details of life, and the plot is relatively close to reality (of course, I personally don't like the scene where the heroine is kidnapped). The portrayal of the male protagonist and the female protagonist is also excellent. The two children who were injured by the disintegration of their families can depend on each other and understand each other to find their own future. It is a touching thing in itself. I'm halfway through reading it, and I can see that there are no parts that make people hypertensive, and the daily interactions are very natural, not like industrial saccharine, which is particularly commendable. Overall, I personally think it is at the upper end of the Tomato genre of works. The writing is really good, and there are no uncomfortable moments until now. On the day when Zhao Lin hit rock bottom, Xu Xi was willing to lend a helping hand to her, hold up an umbrella for her, heal her wounds, and give her a destination, even though she once wanted to hurt herself. Just as Xu Nian was willing to take Xu Xi out of the gloomy prison at her most broken and helpless moment, shining like an angel and leading her through the darkness, and protecting her tenderly in his arms, what a kind child he was. In fact, after working, I feel more and more that life is not perfect. It is difficult to maintain relationships between people and understand each other. All we can do is help each other to gain more goodwill.

These people are really strict. They are really good-looking. The writing and descriptions are very clear and logical. They are cruel, but the ending is in a positive direction. I am very lucky to see such a good work. Where is your home, the author? I want to give you some souvenirs.

There are fireworks and happiness in the world between the lines. After reading it, I still feel that the aftertaste is long. The words have warmth and the plot has bones. A few words are worth a thousand words to move the face. After reading it for so long, I will comment again. This novel does not have cheats, slaps in the face, etc. The focus is on the mutual redemption of the two protagonists. The emotions are delicate and real. The male protagonist is also gentle and kind, while the female protagonist is more sensitive and paranoid. They are all written in a very layered manner. The slight shortcoming is that the pace is slow and the plot is flat [Blow kiss] To put it simply, it is a slow-paced, emotionally-heavy daily reading of the market. It is suitable for readers who like two-way redemption and healing and can accept the slow pace [Blow Kiss] If you like fast pace, I don't think it is recommended [laughs]

I gave it four stars because the five-star rating on the platform will not count towards the score. In my mind, it is absolutely a five-star masterpiece. I have a premonition that it will definitely become a masterpiece in the yandere circle in the future. It is so delicate and the writing is very good, especially the smell of fireworks. I even suspected that it was the author's personal experience (I am not criticizing the author's family [I'm about to cry]). The writing is too delicate. Tsk, tsk, tsk, I got a little angry after reading this. The summary is that if you hate looking at group portraits, you don't need to read this book. There are a lot of things about this in it, and it's so disconnected that you can't read it. If you can resist the fact that the male protagonist is a transparent person, I can say that the plot at the beginning is a god within a god. It makes me want to read it. I came to another masterpiece "Let the Broken Cousin Find Happiness, Xia Lian" (but the original author of this one also said that the plot has reached the climax and can only be written about the other two people, so it ended, giving me a feeling of completion), and this one I don't understand why there is a group portrait? ? ? What is the significance of their appearance? I think Xiaoxi no longer has the possibility of becoming a yandere. She is too healthy. She has everything and lacks nothing. Also, I don't understand why these people are paired together? ? ? And it took up a lot of space to write the story of these people showing affection. The most disgusting thing is that as the protagonist, as a male channel novel, I am not even familiar with the male protagonist's thoughts! ! ! Do you dare to think that a lot of space is devoted to Xiaoxi and her friends, and the male protagonist is actually a marginalized person in more than a dozen chapters? Oh my God, it's just Tiangang. I have written nearly 200 chapters and the yandere is nowhere to be seen? ? ? The ring is already ridiculously slow! In fact, I don't even understand why I have to write a zero score for the college entrance examination essay. I don't think Xiaoxi would not write well for her own loyalty. She would not be like this for her brother. I really think it would be enough to delete several other characters or just mention them when Xiaoxi goes to college. I really don't think it is necessary to keep them in this way. The main character has not been written much, so why should I write about them? It's superfluous to even advance the plot. It's better to rely on ordinary things to advance it on your own. I really don't understand how blindly using the mandarin ducks as puppets results in a small drama being turned into a big drama.

In fact, I just came here to look for interesting articles that are unique to Tomato when I am bored. It's a very unexpected book. It was indeed a bit painful to write at the beginning, and it was quite heart-wrenching to read. Chapter eighty-nine so far, except that the kidnapping is a bit weird. The other plots are very smooth, the details of daily interactions are very good, the atmosphere of life is very strong, and the description is very good, which will make people fascinated. Especially after the heroine entered school, I felt that the author had found a comfort zone and the writing got better and better. Finally, I'm looking forward to the author's plans for the male protagonist's future development. It's too routine now, and based on years of experience in following series, it always feels like something's not quite right [take a closer look]

Meeting each other is already a sign, so there is no need to miss lovesickness for a fleeting year. This book stood out to me. The content of the story is not just a cool novel. The protagonist walks up step by step on his own and meets the person who wants him to protect him for life. The two lonely people who are not favored by fate redeem each other. It is really touching. The writing is delicate and the character creation is perfect in my opinion. There are no points for complaining in the content for the time being. I hope the author will continue to work hard and not stop because of ridicule. He should not be complacent with boasting. "Xu Nian": I miss you with my heart. "Xu Xi": Nostalgic thoughts are like Xu Xi, and the spirit is like a stream. Hope they have a good ending. [Understood][Understood][Understood][Like]

The character creation is really good, and it's clear that it's a good ending, so I feel relieved and continue to pursue it! But... The writing is too immersive (although this is not a shortcoming). Several chapters where Xu Xi was critically ill and Xu Nian was imprisoned made my heart ache. So much so that I only feel distressed when reading the current yandere plot. But to be objective and fair, I can say that this novel is really beautiful and tear-jerking.

Hahaha, a very sweet little article, um, this is so sweet, especially after chapter 200, you must go and read it [laughs], oh, by the way, please give me the author's address [laughs]

The early stage is very healing, Xu Nian is the backbone of the family, and Xu Xi also grows up through repeated hardships. In the middle stage, 183 to 240 is the knife part, which is mainly about how Xu Nian raises money to save Xu Xi. If you are not used to it, you can skip this part. The subsequent plot will be healing again. It is the process of Xu Nian step by step to save the insecure Xu Xi from the psychological trauma. The whole later stage is sweet.

The characters are vivid and this is a good group portrait novel. Whether it is the reformed character or other characters, they are all very coherent and natural. In this book, my favorite character is the people's police uncle. In the novels I read before, I had a bad impression when I saw the police. But this novel gives people the feeling that once the police comes, everything will be stable and peaceful. People can leave the matter to him with peace of mind, and he will handle the results for you fairly. No inhibitions. There is also no disgusting and frustrating plot. It's an excellent, excellent book. The knife is a small knife, but the storm will eventually pass. Thousands of times of hard work casts iron into the heart, and a sword is forged with great effort. With one heart and one mind, God wishes success, and the minister should be listed with 9 points. Good fortune descends from the sky, and everyone in the world can share in it. All the fantasies in the world will come true, and there will be no disease, no disaster, and many blessings. The Chinese people welcome the prosperous times and wish the motherland to become more prosperous and stronger.