The Troubled Girls Fall for Me

It's quite good to watch, but Dongfang Yuan is a pseudo-gay at the beginning, and it can't be said that being gay means being dependent on Lin Yao. Brothers may have a bad impression after watching it. You can skip to the 50-odd chapters where Dongfang Yuan changes his mind. Without her little tricks, everyone may have some opinions, but it was different after changing the goal from Dongfang Yuan. I really like this character later on. The author updates quickly, and everyone doesn't need to keep books. You can read them every day. The author will also listen to readers' opinions. As long as the differences are not major, we can discuss them. It's pretty good.

The male protagonist is too perfect, and the plot is too novelistic. This is the first sentence that came to my mind. I typed it out naturally, but it doesn't have the greasy choke-holding feeling of ordinary emotionally delicate novels. It's more refreshing, but still a bit greasy. The male protagonist has a mold-like feel, and the plot is more classic, but okay. The emotional lines of these female protagonists are quite clear, but the advancement speed seems to be even. There is still a strange feeling that I can't put my finger on. Overall, it's pretty good. The author will update it as soon as possible.

The writing is good, and the character creation is also good, but it seems that the later writing is too exciting, and it feels a bit rounded. The sister is too rich, and the other characters are relatively flat and not so three-dimensional. Mo's feelings don't seem that good, and he is not affectionate enough. Is he that scumbag? I don't know what Mo will do next. I hope the author can work hard.

I've read more than a dozen chapters so far. I'm not saying it's not interesting, I can only say it's weird. Probably because other book friends said that the male protagonist is too perfect and cannot be brought into the story at all. The language of the article is very beautiful, but too beautiful. It gives me the feeling that when I was writing an essay in high school, I tried my best to pile up words to describe the atmosphere. Maybe some jokes can be mixed in appropriately, to reduce the idealization of love and add more trivial quarrels between the characters. Come on author The author's first priority is to change the cover of the novel. This cover is not very good-looking.

It's pretty good-looking, but Xia Hui is really a little stuck. Personally, I feel like she doesn't have any personal characteristics, but she's not ordinary. She's considerate and always by her side. She's average. If she's not above or below, she's low.

Loli is the sky, Loli is the light, Loli is the only myth The wind has stopped, the rain has stopped, you must go, I am still waiting in my memory The wind has stopped, the rain has stopped, you must go, I am still standing there, waiting, you are so damn gentle, oh~oh If time forgets to turn and there are no waves, will you take me away from this shabby world

The author must have seen the problem sister fell in love with me

The emotional line is well written. Give the author some support. The pace is slow. If you want to see a fast-food romance, don't click here.

I feel that the author's writing is very good, but not many people read it, but things will definitely get better later. Also, how many female protagonists does the author have? [What] I want to ask, come on, author.

It looks good, you can give it a try 👍