Hunter X Hunter: I Transmigrated in Cosplay and Ran Into My Lookalike, Then Fell in Love

It's great, but I have a small suggestion. I don't know why, but the protagonist's intense reaction when he said Killua was only three years old felt a little strange. Even after experiencing so much and knowing how the family is, his reaction was still so intense, which felt odd. It felt like he hadn't fully integrated into the story; his reaction should have softened a bit, right?

It's alright. There aren't many similar works. The writing style is average and needs improvement. One annoying thing is the excessive use of emoticons; there are more than two in every chapter, which slightly affects the reading experience. Otherwise, there aren't any major problems, and minor issues are negligible. Some readers' trigger points are also marked in the synopsis, which is a plus. Yes, there's a high probability that emoticons will stop appearing after chapter 45.

The details are rather rough, and there's a lot of repetition in the sentences. The author probably used AI; some sentences have a strong AI feel, but not many. I quite like the early plot, so I'll continue reading and leave a follow-up review later. It's not just the details that are rough. The book-eating is quite serious.

The protagonist is a bit frustrated in the early stages, but that's unavoidable. The romance is sweet, but the author's grasp of the protagonist's mindset isn't quite accurate. Some daily scenes overlap, which can be tiring to read (PS: The inaccuracy in the mindset is particularly noticeable during the Hunter Exam.

It's incredibly good, I haven't finished it yet, and here are some minor issues I have: From Killua's birth onwards, the plot is largely repetitive, with the protagonist showing affection to Killua (like hugging, touching his little face, etc.) And Illumi getting jealous. This repetition is a bit tiring; Illumi's strict training or control over Killua's food (controlling sugar intake, etc.)

The author's writing is truly excellent; I absolutely love it. The scenes where they're together are incredibly sweet. Illumi's subtle jealousy and possessiveness are so endearing! The couple is so sweet, and the main characters and Illumi are perfectly complementary. As the main character says, one plays the good cop, the other the bad cop—it's so charming!

It's very well-written, hehehe, the most anticipated part—having babies—is almost here! So exciting! The two babies are so sweet!!! But maybe it's just me, I feel this novel has a faint hint of pornography.

The author's premise is novel and refreshing, though the writing style could be improved, but there aren't any major problems. The emotional development of the young couple progresses quickly but lacks detail; hopefully, the author can explore this further and refine the writing. Wishing this novel continued success, and even greater surprises from the author's breakthrough! Iz99 💕

It's so good! The details are beautifully described, it feels like sweetness is just a part of everyday life! I've seen many people say that Wiz could be won over with just a piece of candy… But I think in that world, in that kind of family, that kind of candy (the kind that rewards you after seeing your efforts, and as you'll see later, there wasn't a reward system under the original rules.

Wow, this novel is like "electronic ibuprofen"—it completely cured my mental exhaustion! Is the author a natural talent? The writing is absolutely superb; every paragraph feels like a massage for my brain. While reading, I was constantly "hissing and laughing," my lips and temples were practically bulging with joy—I couldn't control myself!