About How I Reincarnated and Ended Up Raising a Chatterbox Dragon Girl

Many readers are right, I admit. The early plot was indeed handled too harshly, which was the result of my lack of experience and my impetuous mentality. I really knew I was wrong. Woohoo. So, instead of escaping, I chose the stupidest way - rewriting. I corrected the poisonous points pointed out by everyone, word by word. I sorted out those irrational logics again. The current version may not be perfect, but it is definitely much better than before, and it is closer to the warm and interesting story in my heart. I am not making this announcement to defend myself, I am just asking for a chance in a humble way. Can everyone treat me now as a brand new author? Can you treat this book as a new book? I'm still growing and learning. I will read every chapter review and paragraph review you write carefully. If there is anything I wrote wrong, please point it out gently and I will definitely change it! Real! Please don't deny everything I say right from the start. A sapling needs water to grow into a big tree. Please don't trample it to death when it just sprouts... QAQ. It's been really hard these days. If you in front of the screen can say "Come on" to me, it would be a great salvation for me. Thank you all for listening to my rants. I will wipe away my tears and continue coding. Because I love this story, and I hope you can fall in love with it. Sincerely, humble new author

I have finished reading the first volume so far. Overall, I feel it is good. The plot is quite interesting but it does have flaws: 1. The author's vocabulary is a bit short, and the descriptions are repeated in many places. For example: It seems... Not bad? In fact, for a plot person like me, I don't really care (( 2. There are minor conflicts in the logic of the plot. For example, the dagger of the protagonist was broken when he went to the casino. The subsequent plot was not excessive, but he could still take out the sword and continue to use it in the subsequent plot. I can only say it's harmless 3. In Elf's personal plot, the protagonist has been fighting with her for so long before the festival, but he still has to wait until the festival to save her. I can understand it as an emotional foreshadowing, but to be honest, it feels very crude (( 4. In the first volume, I clearly felt that the author deliberately skipped the personal past story about Naira. Did he want to leave it until later to expand on it in detail, or did she really sleep in the cave playing with gold and silver treasures for 2000 years? There is also the fact that you can talk to souls. Except for the sense of presence in the beginning, the subsequent plot feels a bit like a decoration. . (I still like the character of Naira, especially because the two souls are connected, so I sincerely (and selfishly) hope that Naira can be the main palace rather than the embarrassing position of a daughter or sister. Naira has lived for 2000 years. Even if Naira first entered human society and has immature thoughts, she will not always be in that "unenlightened" child-like mental state. Moreover, there is also the setting of "the possessiveness unique to the dragon family") Finally, I wish the author a happy day and work hard to make more updates❤️

Very obvious light novel style. It is a setting for male protagonists who are emotionally insensitive between men and women, and whose normal fighting ability is average, but can explode under certain circumstances. The whole story is very cheerful, and the plot is not bloody. I haven't seen this kind of novel in a long time. This is a great article for those who like this style.

What should I say? The story is well written, and the main plot line is very smooth without any poisonous points. Well, a little bit, around the 1980s, the very traditional Western fantasy flavor of Dragon Quest. Readers who like this are in luck.

I don't know why, but it feels like the transition between events is a bit abrupt, but that doesn't stop it from being a good book. It's quite interesting to calm down and read it slowly. Come on, author [Like] I hope there will be more updates [laughs]

So far, everything is going well, at least on the Tomato platform, it is quite rare for me to find a book that is slightly to my taste. Compared with what I found before, the reading (listening) experience is much better (could it be that all I ate before was *** no no no no no no no)

It's a daily light novel type, and the plot is quite normal and relatively... Bland? There are also battles and stuff, that is, except for Xiaolong, the other female protagonists I have seen so far, including goddesses, elves, succubi, little ghosts and female knights, seem to have no feeling. In fact, maybe I have read too many books about this kind of female protagonist (I have been in elementary school for more than ten years now and I am already in my twenties). But I haven't seen much yet, so I'll continue reading.

Very good, basically all are loli, and the update speed is also fast. I feel that in addition to the introduction of the heroine, there should also be the theoretical king and princess who appear later?

I don't know what it looked like before the revision [thinking] [thinking], but I think the current story is very good. Seeing that the author has worked so hard to revise it, support me, author, come on [like] [like] [eat melon]

I think it's quite good, but why no one has read it? Although there are many novels of this type, this novel is better than those that are relatively "old-fashioned", right?