HP: Every Effort Turns Me into a Witch's Plaything

It's so delicious, but I eat it uneasily and fearfully, fearing that it will start being abused. Chasing serials is a big gamble for every novelist. When will Voldemort completely overpower me, will I be able to eat it boldly? Please keep updating the author, it's really good! I also ask the author to adjust the other one so that I can continue writing it as planned😭😭😭😭, it's really good. Scam, the heroine of the text is dead, the ancient story about abusing women, it makes me so angry, it makes me so angry, avoid lightning, avoid lightning, avoid lightning, avoid lightning

Very sweet love, very fond of daily life. This is a book that makes Sri Lankan teachers feel happy after reading it. Although it is not finished yet, the author updates it every day, so it is good to catch up on it every day. [Love][love][love] The heroine in the second half is too love-minded, and the teacher is too scumbag, both of them are reduced to blood bags. I always liked it and kept following it, but now I am slightly disappointed. Abandoned. The second half of this article will really make you angry because of the emphasis on the heroine.

Super in line with the character! And it's so sweet. Why is it so sweet? It made me smile with big teeth in the middle of the night. It was a lightning escape. I was just giving it a five-star review, but when I saw the different reviews, I immediately wrote it to death for the heroine. Snape also lived a life worse than death. I don't know what the author wanted to write such an article about revenge against society.

The beginning is good, the middle is good, but the ending is unbearable. It is recommended that you only read chapters 142/143, the graduation ceremony and prom, and up to chapter 145, and don't read the rest. I will assume that this book ends when the heroine and SS graduate, and that they will travel around the world. They have been hanging out for about 2 years. Old Fu is like the original, and so are Lily and Old Potter. SS returns to work at Hogwarts in a normal capacity. I can even accept that under the setting of this book, SS will still provide some protection to Harry, and then add an extra chapter... As for how to completely eliminate Lao Fu in the end, I think Lao Deng will always find a way [Like] I have to admit that the author does have a good way of writing extras, and the previous writing is really good, and the book is still finished, so I gave it 4 stars. Otherwise, I would have given this ending 2 stars. The following is a summary of the lightning protection plot and some personal gossip. If you don't mind, don't scroll down. [Smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] The ss followed Lao Fu insistently, and throughout the period of following him, the heroine was in pain, distressed, fearful of war, and worried about the ss. The predicted events are as in the original work. The heroine helped Lao Deng behind her back. In the end, on that day, old Potter was still dead. The heroine used ancient magic with protection and love as the root to die together with Lao Deng who used Avada in the form of a shield. Lily and Harry were left alive. The heroine died for Lily. There is no need to elaborate on the plot that follows. Finally, at the point where SS died, SS seemed to hear the heroine telling him to live, so he asked the trio to take out the medicine from his pocket and treat himself. At the end, the war ended, and the heroine came back with memories of when she was just 17 years old and had just graduated. It is said that all memories will be restored in the future, but the details were not written. Seriously, what does this mean to the heroine? I understand that it is difficult to write about the period when ss followed Lao Fu, but it is better to just show that he is, and then write it in a vigorous and touching way. What does that count now? Now that she is back with the best memories of that period, what does the heroine's previous pain count? Moreover, SS has not changed at all, and his timeline and important nodes have basically not changed at all. I understand that the SS who have experienced these are the SS we see later. But now the author has given ss happiness and enough light when he was in school. In the end, he still has to follow the route of the original work, he still has to kill Dumbledore, and he still has to be bitten by Nagini. Even because the heroine dies in the book, ss will probably be more painful than the original work. So? ? ? Finally, I also wrote an ending where the heroine returns with incomplete memory. Why bother? It's better to just be. After reading other people's comments, they make sense. The heroine is a good tool, and her beauty, intelligence, thoughtfulness, respect and other advantages are just a label. The 4 stars I gave before were still too much.

This meal is so delicious. The portrayal of the young SS is not naive at all. I feel like I have seen a living student SS. She is gloomy, mean, sensitive, talented and has a high self-esteem. Her early transformation is so cute that her face is full of blood. The baby heroine is also a little snake with a strong talent for magic, gentleness, rationality and a little evil taste. She is born in a French aristocrat and yearns for freedom. At heart, she is a little eagle who pursues knowledge and truth. I want to see if SS will join the Death Eater camp and the relationship between her and the heroine.

How can there be such a sweet cp in the world? I'm not happy with the psychological committee. It feels like the heroine is just like an accessory, and Snape is the protagonist, right? It's also a bit confusing at the end. The heroine doesn't have any role at all. It's a high-pitched and low-key role. To be honest, I feel that the supporting role is deeper than the heroine. If you talk about the first impression, the heroine is just like an ordinary person. I know all his good friends better than the heroine. I feel that his good friends are more three-dimensional than the heroine. I also feel that Snape and the heroine don't have much censorship behind them, and it seems that the heroine is always being wronged! ! Maybe this is life, but am I reading a novel now? These three stars are for the heroine and the first half of the love story during school days. I hope the author can change it (I didn't expect that my well-received novel would collapse later, but I rarely give reviews)

It's simply too good to watch. The male and female protagonists are so compatible. They are really good at emotional changes and mutual pull, and they go both ways. The male protagonist is attracted first, and then the female protagonist is enlightened, making Sijiao completely unbearable. Moreover, the relationship progresses very smoothly and smoothly. There are no other people in the middle, and there are not too many supporting characters and deputy CPs to make a mess. The duo of the male and female protagonists is simply great. Just enjoy the story of the male and female protagonists quietly.

It's so nice to write, Mrs., Quoting the original text: The chocolates Severus gave Lexia on Valentine's Day. The first layer was very bitter, like Severus's original family, patiently melting his guarded and sharp heart. The second layer of sour and sweet daily life The last layer is a taste unique to them. I didn't express it very well, but in short, this article well describes Severus's changing heart. Their interaction made me feel like Lexia existed beside them. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Read this book for me. It's very delicate and beautiful. Come on, try to update a thousand chapters before finishing it Yes, it's so good that I can't bear to let go when the person next to me is crunched. It's so good that I can't let go even if I slap someone in the face. Hahahahahahaha

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh so sweet Before, I remembered that the introduction said HE. I was originally fattening up, but then I saw that the heroine was gone in the title, and then there was no HE in the introduction. So why did this book change so much [awkward laugh]

It's so delicious when I go [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] It's so cool, my relationship develops so quickly, my aunt can't stop laughing. The really cute boy Snape, I can't do it anymore. The author [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] The more I write, the better.