Harry Potter: Severus? He's Mine!
hp：西弗勒斯？我的了！
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Snape Pairing, Strong Female Lead, No Tragedy, No Male-Male Romance
Looking for books like "Harry Potter: I Really Do Want to Raise a Snape!!".
Looking for High-Quality Harry Potter Fanfiction. Don't Bother Unless It's on the Level of the Book I Posted
New Books, Mutual Reviews, Mutual Update Reminders, Mutual Follows
Looking for books like Unrivaled National War. New books, review each other's work, remind each other to update, and add each other to our bookshelves.
Hogwarts's Protagonist Has an Incredible Background: Everyone Was Shocked When His Surname Was Read During the House Sorting
HP Masterpiece Incoming (Complete)
Looking for books like "HP and Draco's Hogwarts Romance". I want Harry Potter fanfiction. Any style is fine, but it has to be complete. Complete, complete, complete! Please!
Looking for Harry Potter Watch-Along Stories
Any Novels About Transmigrating into Snape or Snape Being Reborn? Male-Male Romance or No Romance Are Both Fine.
I'm looking for books similar to HP: Transmigrated into a Giant Bat. Something like this.
Harry Potter Stories About Professor Snape, with Characters Around the Same Age. No Transmigration or Rebirth
I want to read something similar to This Female Lead Is Actually a Death Eater. I'm suffering from a reading drought. Are there really no good Severus Snape stories in the Harry Potter fandom? Are there truly no stories without transmigration, rebirth, a golden finger, or a System...?
Any Harry Potter Fics with an All-Male Love Interest Group?
I want books like [Harry Potter] Becoming the White Moonlight at Hogwarts.
I’ve Given Up Hope of Finding High-Quality Harry Potter Fics. Prove Me Wrong with Your Recommendations
Beast World, One Female Lead and Multiple Male Leads, Pack Living, Fluffy, Fast-Paced, Brainy, and Funny
Looking for stories like Beast World: I Transmigrate into a Seahorse and Coast to Victory with the System.
[Harry Potter] An Older Man Goes Off the Rails!! Female Lead X Snape
Looking for books like [Harry Potter] Good Morning, Mrs. Snape! I want the kind where the heroine doesn’t show up with the goal of winning someone over, but falls in love as they gradually get to know each other. Preferably with Professor Snape in the Marauders’ Era. Older men losing their minds are just the best!!!
Any Non-Cringe Harry Potter Female-Targeted Fanfiction? Keep the Characters In Character, Preferably One-on-One Romance. I'm Not Picky About the Male Lead
HP, Looking for Something with a Fresh Premise (T▽T)
Waaah, I have no more Harry Potter books to read (╥﹏╥)
I Dare Say There Are No Masterpieces in the Harry Potter Fandom!!!
Snape Pairing, Strong Female Lead, No Tragedy
Looking for books similar to "HP: I Really Do Want to Raise a Snape!!"
Looking for Severus Snape Fanfiction with Good Writing
I've noticed that most highly rated stories also have characters acting out of character and writing that's pretty amateurish. There are very few good ones. Please recommend well-written Snape fanfiction that isn't amateurish. Thank you so, so much.
I Just Want to Say Harry Potter Fanfiction Has Really Fallen Off. There Are Hardly Any Good Books Left
Harry Potter Series, Severus Pairings
Looking for books like [Harry Potter] The Dungeon's White Moonlight. I love Severus 😍😍😍😍 Unfinished ones are fine too 😚😚😚 You know what I mean!!!
Harry Potter: Loves Practicing Potions, Smart, and Has a Crush on Professor Snape
There Are No More Masterpieces in Harry Potter Fanfiction. Prove Me Wrong. (The Protagonist and Their Family Are Both Seriously Powerful)
Any Non-Cringe Female-Oriented Harry Potter Stories?
I'm in a reading slump lately. Please recommend something!!!!!
Please Recommend Good Harry Potter/Snape Pairing Fics
Looking for books similar to The Old Bat, I Heard You’ve Become a Wife Guy?
Harry Potter! If You're Not a Fan, Don't Recommend Random Books. Lately, I Can't Get Into Anything I'm Reading
Anything in the Harry Potter fandom is fine. By the way, absolutely don't recommend anything pairing Snape with Sirius. Nothing too outlandish, and it has to have a happy ending. Thanks.
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I haven't finished reading it, but the beginning was really good! Black Lily and the four highway robbers! The author's viewpoints resonate strongly with mine! The heroine's banter with Jaime and Sirius is also very much to my liking, so it was really enjoyable to read!
I really enjoyed this story. Before, when I read other stories, I was always curious why Lily never intervened when Severus was bullied, and why she fell for someone like Potter later on. I really like Severus, so I always hoped he could be happy. Thank you, author. O(∩_∩)O
This book is excellent, at least in my eyes. It handles the punishments for Lily and the group of four with utmost seriousness, but avoids anything less severe like cutting off all contact. Fundamentally, it doesn't severely vilify Lily and the group; the separation is clean and decisive, making for a satisfying read. I'm looking forward to the romantic developments later on!
At first, seeing the female lead's name and the Eastern cultivation setting, I thought it would be another typical Mary Sue story. But after reading it, I found it quite good. The writing flowed smoothly, the plot was good, and the writing style was also good; at least it wasn't a simplistic story. It's a top-notch work among sweet romance novels set in the Soviet Union.
Amazing!!! This is the first time I've discovered a fanfic about Lily, it's fantastic! The transitions are all great, and the breakup scene felt so natural. I don't think it's really a case of "blackening" Lily; she seems to have always been like that in the books (I haven't actually read them, but I'm just getting the gist of it).
First, you have to accept the breakup of childhood sweethearts. The author did a good job of this, the process was quite smooth and reasonable. It's worth noting that the female lead and Penny have a good relationship (they become best friends later on). The protagonist and Penny are practically acquaintances.
I absolutely loved it! The writing is excellent, the female and male leads are so sweet, and the author's character development is incredibly profound. I especially loved the storylines of Penny and Peter. Penny's situation at home was portrayed so clearly—ignored and neglected by her entire family, subjected to subtle bullying. She desperately wanted and needed to be seen.
I started writing this on a whim, without even an outline. But I'm so happy that everyone seems to enjoy it. I've tried my best to write it well. Of course, some readers might feel the female lead is too much of a scapegoat. But my initial intention in writing this was for Severus, so I might have a slight bias towards him.
It's a great read, my favorite of all Harry Potter books, mainly because it doesn't forgive or redeem Sirius Black and James Potter. Those two are truly despicable. Many fanfictions from the younger era depict the female protagonist redeeming Sirius, even tolerating him—it makes me furious! Bullying is unforgivable, and I won't accept any whitewashing.
Five stars! Five stars!!! First, let me state my disgust for the bullying group. My opinion is biased, but I don't have that much of a dislike for Harry (not to mention his reckless justice). Who can understand how satisfying it was to see Harry get revenge?!