
Harry Potter: Severus? He's Mine!
hp:西弗勒斯?我的了!
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I haven't finished it yet, but the front part is really good! Black Lily and the Jie Dao Four! The author's views are highly consistent with mine! The heroine's words against James and Sirius also fit my taste, so I enjoyed watching them! When the foursome bullied Mr. Si, the heroine arrived in time and bullied her back every time. It was really cool to watch. It wasn't until I saw the two of them breaking off their relationship with Lily that I calmed down. Penny also has her own wonderful life, which is great. These are developments that are in line with my expectations~
I think this article is very interesting. When I read other articles before, I have always been curious about why Lily never took action when Sif was bullied, and why Lily, a person like Pote, fell in love with him later. I really like Sif, so I always hope that he can live a happy life, thank you author. O(∩_∩)O
This book is very good, at least in my eyes. It is a punishment for Lily and the foursome, but not a serious punishment for the plot. It is not particularly serious and does not communicate. In a fundamental sense, it's not serious. Black Lily and the quartet separated very simply and decisively. It's a great pleasure to watch, and I'm looking forward to the emotional line in the future!
At first when I saw the name of the heroine and the setting of Eastern cultivation, I thought it was just another Mary Sue. After reading it, I realized that it was okay. The flow of the text and the plot were still very good, and the writing style was also good. At least it was not a novice. It is considered a masterpiece among Sri Lankan sweet texts. Recently, I only like to read sweet stories, which are not suitable for the elderly. The heroine is really a good baby. The concepts of friendship, love, and family in the text perfectly suit me, so I enjoyed reading it (I hate predators, but have no feelings for Lily). I don't know if Sri Lanka is considered OOC, but It's all about humanities and it's pro-era, so let's face it, grown-up women should watch some happy movies [Sending Hearts]. The movie is also incredibly good to watch, and I personally think it's better than the main story, hahahaha, because I just want to see Si She die with bad intentions, it's so interesting (actually, I want to see him come out, what a pity). The author is even more active in the comment area like that [thinking]. She is often seen in likes and replies, expressing her love for my wife [sending heartfelt wishes]
Nice! ! ! ! It's the first time I discovered Chongsi Jiaowen. It's great, the transitions are very good, and the breakup is so normal. I don't think it's Black Lily. She seems to be like this in the original book (I haven't actually read it, but I just rely on my understanding). Anyway, if it were my good friend who was in a life-and-death situation like this, I couldn't help but attack those who took action. The extra story is not over yet, the original movie is really good to watch. If Harry had seen the newly-cleaned place, he would have been very disappointed with his father and godfather. He had been looking forward to this place so much.
The first choice is to accept the separation of childhood sweethearts. The author does a good job of dismantling the process. It is quite smooth and well-founded. Among them, the relationship between the heroine and Penny is not bad (they become best friends in the middle and later stages). Sijiao and Penny are semi-acquaintances. There is zero tolerance for school bullying and the heroine's family is very supportive of Sri Lanka. Those who don't like black deer dogs here can be protected from lightning. The Sri Lankan cultivator has not joined any illegal organization (regardless of which side). He has already become a married woman and cultivated a little bit of immortality before he even started dating. The overall plot is quite reasonable. Although it is not over yet, the plot has been completed and Tom is about to get married and honeymoon! Come and see~
I really like it, the writing is also very good, the heroine and the hero are really sweet, and the author's character creation is very deep. I like the two characters of Penny and Peter so much. The situation of Penny at home is clearly written. She is ignored by the whole family and invisible bullying. She really wants and needs to be seen. It was just a simple opportunity that allowed her to walk out of her own not easy path and become a big star. Many people saw her and liked her. Peter's line is really surprising. In the previous articles I read, he was always a "betrayer", a bad guy who was ignored by "friends" and ignored by readers. Even though I knew that his position in the foursome was very embarrassing and he was the lowest among the four, I never thought about whether it would be easy for him. It was clear that he just didn't want to be bullied at the beginning. In the end, he changed beyond recognition. This time, he left the foursome early and had real friends. He was able to save others and redeem himself. Lupine also gave him a good ending. Although he basically didn't do anything when the foursome bullied the teacher, I just hate him. Now that he has a real friend, instead of a friend who treats him as a killing tool, the identity of a werewolf is no longer so rejected because of the wolfsbane potion, and the disgusting life-saving grace of the werewolf incident is reversed. This is really a relief.
It's a very good book. It's the one that resonates with me the most among all the HP books. The reason is that it doesn't forgive or redeem Sirius Black and James Potter. These two people are really hateful. Many sub-era fanfics write about the heroine redeeming Sirius and even tolerating Sirius. God, I get angry when I see this. Bullying is unforgivable and whitewashing will not be tolerated. What's more, what Sri Lanka has always wanted is unreserved trust and favoritism. He didn't get the favor from his mother when he was a child, he didn't get the favor from his friend Lily when he was a student, he didn't get complete trust when he took refuge with Voldemort, and he didn't get complete trust when he took refuge with Dumbledore. His life was so bitter and sad. This novel gives Severus a completely different path, allowing him to heal from childhood, which is satisfying.
The article I wrote in a hurry actually didn't even have an outline. But I'm very happy that everyone quite likes my writing. I tried my best to write this article well. Of course, many readers may feel that the heroine serves Sif too much. But my original intention of writing this article was for Seaver, and I may prefer Seaver. The setting of the heroine itself is that of a relatively Buddhist girl, just an ordinary person. Live the same life as us. She just traveled through time, and her temperament is still the same as before. If I fail to meet everyone's requirements, then I can only say that it is a pity that my ability only goes so far. According to my own understanding, I want to give everyone a good ending (except for Voldemort, Fenrir, etc.). Finally, thank you all for liking Luo Xue and my writing about Xifu.
Very sweet! ! ! The extra is also very cute! ! The whole process was sweet from beginning to end, highly recommended! ! Si and Lily broke up with each other in the first grade, and became only casual acquaintances after that. In the finale, everyone has a happy ending, a very beautiful life and world.