
I Founded the Immortal Realm in Ancient Times, and Modern Livestreamers Exposed It
我在远古创仙界,被现代直播公开
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 752k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Fantasy High-Concept
- Updated
- 7mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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291Chapters
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No wonder no one commented, there are a lot of poisonous points. It would be outrageous for a person from later generations to see the protagonist's system, and isn't this thing in the protagonist's mind? How did the woman see it? There are a lot of contradictions in the article, all kinds of word order errors, it makes my head hurt to read, and the whole protagonist lacks mystery in later generations. It is outrageous that a broken machine can follow and observe 100%, but this is a narrative in itself, and I won't say more. But have you ever considered that millions of years have passed, and even if you follow the protagonist's period, you are sure that what is recorded in the genes must be complete? Okay, I will treat it as complete, but the machine can follow the protagonist, that is, it can see the image of the protagonist, and it can also analyze the energy of that period, including the energy belief fluctuations in the protagonist. Are you a little too outrageous?
It's a bit weird to read a chapter that is half ancient and half modern. The writing of modern technology is a bit awesome. The protagonist is equipped with a surveillance camera and can see everything. He can also monitor body and environmental changes after millions of years. It is better to write about the changes of important nodes and reveal the face after a few chapters. Later, when the ancient times prosper, I will add the drama. The ancient protagonist should be longer here, and the timeline and story should be detailed. Otherwise, it would be a bit confusing to keep jumping back and forth between ancient times and modern times. Many things are not even mentioned in one sentence.
A little confused, a little confused