I Brought My OC to Demon Slayer: The System Forced Me to Become a Big Shot

It's okay, the writing is nice and the plot is very coherent, but the heroine's character may be a bit too timid. . . ? The little girl who has traveled through time has so many OCs, and her spiritual world should be much richer, not to mention the age of a middle school boy. But coming to a strange world and creating her own tragic scripts and powerful OCs with so many OCs is indeed very scary for a little girl. In fact, as long as it is an OC created by herself, she must have her own favorite points, but I haven't seen it yet, and neither has the heartthrob. The heroine can actually be more outgoing and abstract (_:(´□`" ∠):_Just a small suggestion from me) This will have more of a modern teenage vibe, and the plot will be more interesting. The heroine is a bit weak, but cute⁽˙³˙⁾◟( ˘•ω•˘ )◞⁽˙³˙⁾, Yanyu can write some other characters, and always show her introverted, timid, and somewhat weak character, (but actually cute) In fact, the character can be changeable (˘❥˘) Write more emotional dramas, of course, warm daily life is also very comfortable つ♡⊂ The teacher's writing style is very coherent, detailed, and very comfortable to read. All in all, the writing is very beautiful, and it can actually make the characters more three-dimensional (♡>𖥦<)/♥

If you want to watch a strong female protagonist, I think you can quit (the female protagonist is a little girl who takes advantage of her) (bushi In fact, I always feel that the heroine is timid, as if she has been scared😱😱The heroine is an OC mother. Logically speaking, her children should be absolutely aware of her [Thinking][Thinking] But OCs looked down on the heroine at first, which is actually a bit annoying😡 Summary: Yan Yu is actually an ordinary stupid beauty [laughing and crying] Indeed👍🏻each one is as good as 258,000😢😢Without the heroine, you wouldn't exist at all, okay?😞I read novels to enjoy myself, not to suffer.

It's good to watch. I thought Yan Yu was Yan Yu's own creation. Well, after reading it, I found out that it's not the case. But they are surprisingly at odds with each other. But I still like Yan Yu who is like an old lady. It's very good to watch. 100 Chapters a day. Oh my gosh, I have never seen such a good author. Ten chapters a day is amazing! Author, you are my god, the plot is also online, the later stage is super invincible and good to watch, it is so good to me, so good to watch, faster and faster! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

After watching it for a while, I felt very frustrated in the early stage. Grief is the biggest drawback of online novels. I hope the author will change the early plot. The reason is because when the five OCs came out, it was obvious that the protagonist felt sorry for them and they were not happy to ask them to do the task, especially It's the cold brother who appeared last. Life and death have nothing to do with you. Then go find the King of Hell. I know that the protagonist will feel scared when facing powerful people, but it's very uncomfortable to be scolded and criticized for being kind. Moreover, this kind of portrayal of those OCs is really special! Special! Not good! Without the protagonist, you wouldn't be pure at all, right? Why do you want to be arrogant and arrogant towards the protagonist (I admit that I am the heroine, why don't you let me like the heroine because she is so obsessed with her)? You can have other thoughts, but on the surface, you still have to respect and give face, right? (I don't know how it is in the middle and late stages, I only saw the first few pictures) The point is not how awesome the reversal is in the later stage, the early stage is really important, especially this little-known one, not so many people have the patience to see the later stage. If the character really changes a lot later, please change the early stage as well. Retaining talents in the early stage is important, (I have been disgusted since the system came out) The above are my true feelings. It was okay after reading Chapter 2. This cowardly character is also very cute, but when the other OCs came out, the feeling of suffocation made me have the urge to quit directly. The book reviews said that there will be big changes in the future, but I can't jump directly to read the latter part, even in the early stage. It's a foreshadowing, but it also needs to have a plot that retains people's attention. I'm not talking about pure cool writing, but you can't be aggrieved for no reason or out of kindness [I'm about to cry] (I hope to be seen, I really begged to change the previous one, I like this setting very much, but when I clicked in, I found a sense of redemption that was tasteless and was a pity to abandon...)

The teachers have very good ideas and their writing is very good. The teacher is recommending it here. The other book is about the connection between Yuanshen and Demon Slayer. It is also very well written and very beautiful. I am particularly reassured by the writing style written by the teacher. I was originally indifferent to the book about the connection between Genshin Impact and Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, but after reading it, I was simply shocked. Others say that the heroine is a bit cowardly in the early stage. I think this can be regarded as a psychological transformation, because I think the heroine gradually becomes stronger from the early stage to the later stage. People who watch too much have soft hearts. It's impossible to fall in love with a heartthrob as soon as you meet them. They are gradually warmed by the heroine after long-term contact, right? I think the character of the heroine is particularly well written. Teachers can listen to other people's suggestions and make modifications, but they must not make major changes. I think this character is full enough. If there were major changes, the character of the heroine would have completely deviated from the original track. I think she is great now.

I would like to give a good review. I think it is generally good. However, one lightning protection point is that the heroine is called cowardly in the early stage. Maybe it is because she feels guilty about the OC, so she is not that strong. If you like to see the heroine being particularly strong, you will be very disappointed in the early stage. This is just a simple lightning protection. Overall, it is very good and very interesting. I am currently looking forward to getting to know the heroine and the heroine OC. That person, in front of him, and then the heroine said to his OC, I am his mother, this kind of plot, I am very much looking forward to it, I just want to wait for a while to see if it will happen, because it feels really good, but this article is very interesting, worth looking forward to, you can read it, if you are stubborn, uh, you can not wait, just read it now, and then you will get the same symptoms as me, scratching your heart and liver, waiting for updates

It looks good. Yan Yu is really cute. It doesn't seem to be too bad at the moment. It will be okay if I don't write down later.

The teacher's writing is really good, and the character creation of O C is also super perfect. I don't know why there are so few comments on it, but it is so good. Also, the author is really diligent. I saved a lot of pictures after a few days. The teacher seems to be alone every day. I didn't pay much attention to it. The teacher is really great [please update] [love] [send heart]

Come on, author, I feel like the novels you write are very imaginative. I felt that the relationship between Tang Wu and Tanjiro was very well described in the previous one. I also read half of the first one (but I have only read Demon Slayer and Conan, and I didn't understand one thing, so I read it very slowly). My expectations for this one are very high. I feel very good so far. The rating is low. The heroine's personality is very detailed, the characterization is also good, and the plot is relatively smooth. Come on! O(￣▽￣)ｄ

It's a very satisfying book. I followed it from the previous one. The setting is very interesting and the character of the OC is also very distinct. Tong Minshu is a bit tsundere. I really like to see her interaction with the heroine. The heroine's character is also very cute! She is gentle and playful. Her performance when she accepted the ghost-killing mission for the first time really made me want to call her mom [laughs] and my motherhood almost spilled out of the screen. Anyway, I am looking forward to the following plots. The fight scenes are actually pretty good to watch, but the heroine is still too weak right now. I'm especially looking forward to the fight scenes where the heroine's strength will increase greatly in the future. I think it will be good to watch (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡