I Drew an Evil God from the Start, and You Call This Martial Arts?

It is already a very good martial arts novel, but it imitates the movie scenes too deliberately and does not have a good ending, which really makes it feel a bit poor. After all, the plot of the movie is not related to the plot of the novel. It is okay to write one or two famous scenes, but writing them all is not right. Nine out of ten readers will feel uncomfortable. Don't expect the last one to give up. Therefore, there is no problem with the plot conception of this book, and there is no problem with the outline of the main body. It is just that the insertion of some branch plots is not very good, and it makes me feel uncomfortable no matter how I read it. This is the disadvantage of imitating it too deliberately. However, if you read the uncomfortable part, you can skip it and go directly to the next chapter. It is still readable. As a result, I finished reading it in less than an hour... Ugh! In short, this book has great potential and there are still opportunities for improvement. There is still a lot of room for improvement. It is not completely dead. It is just that the insertion of the story and plot is not suitable. It is still far from being a hit. If you can make some changes in the future, there is a chance that it will become a high-quality product.