Harry Potter: Dear Miss Portrait

It's good-looking. It's different from others I've seen. It's not that the male protagonist likes the heroine as soon as he sees it. It's because of the heroine's character. To be precise, he should be in love for a long time. Regarding Snape, I don't think there's anything wrong with what the author wrote. I also have a complicated feeling when I look at him. The character has a feeling of being sympathetic and loved, but he has a negative side. People have a kind of vanity, and he is no exception. He also came from the bottom. If he forgets how he came here because of his current glory, it is really not understandable.

Chew, chew, chew, it seems like fine chaff, chew, chew, chew, eh, Hao Chi, squeeze it down, pure love is fragrant, chew it for two more times, the emotional descriptions of the two protagonists are very delicate, both are good babies, it seems to be a two-way redemption, this two-way redemption is so cool [Love] [Love]

The author's writing style is very delicate. The setting of the heroine's portrait in the beginning is very novel. I look forward to the heroine coming out of the portrait! The only drawback is that it's not finished yet, too little! ! Update it! Big[cry][cry][cry]

It's a very good-looking fanfic. I'm very happy to see such a work that resonates with me on New Year's Eve. The author's Elise is a brave and tenacious girl. I have played Huo Yi, and the heroine is well written. Looking forward to the story of Elise and Sirius 🥰🔥💥❤️💋 Where is Black Snape? If some people want to read the whitewashing of Snape, they should look for his whitewashing articles and read them. Don't be too sensitive. It's said that the heroine is cheating, Huo Yi's protagonist setting is a genius, and the copywriting is also lightning-proof.

It's good to read, but I have to say that Snape in this book is really a bit annoying [smiles] [spits] [spits] But whether it is in terms of plot or characters, most of them are very successful! ! ! [Like][Like][Like][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] Come on, come on, come on! ! ! [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript] When will our heroine's baby come out of the portrait [laughing and crying]

The setting is interesting, the subject matter is novel, and the writing style is also relatively mature. There are too few main chapters, and the female protagonist is still not three-dimensional enough. The plot should gradually become fuller. Seeing that the author has something to say and a clear outline, the plot should not be too broken. As a free text for love, there is nothing to criticize. Comparing the design of the heroine 🍅 The hp of other Goldfinger is pretty normal. It can be seen that the author's writing skills are good and the control will not be dramatic. At present, I don't think the characters are too OOC and worth watching o>_<o So please update more! I'm very curious about the follow-up plot (about Remus's Wolfsbane potion and Peter Pettigrew's future choices and stance, Regulus' final heroism, MacKinnon and Neville's unwillingness to betray even after being tortured… there are too many ovo)

The tie was tied in one breath, which made me scratch my head and scratch my head. I need to take good care of myself. So far, what I am looking forward to the most is that the heroine will come out of the portrait as soon as possible. It feels like it won't take long. After all, there is a new plot later (a wild guess), but I really hope that it won't be until the finale before the heroine comes out. It will be too uncomfortable to watch [I'm about to cry]

Snape has no OOC at all, he is the one who can steal the portrait [laughs awkwardly] Don't be brainwashed, he did a lot of sinister things when he was young, every day I think he is some pure white flower. Your Uncle Snape laughed so hard when he saw you thinking so.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh not apparent no apparent interaction of the interactions between the interaction between the heroine and Sirius. The interaction between the heroine and Sirius was so sweet. The description of Zhan Li was so cute that I couldn't stop talking about it. Moreover, the characters are very delicately drawn, the heroine is really powerful, and there is no procrastinating plot that prevents the heroine from coming out of the portrait and returning to her body. Baozi who likes Siris CP can rest assured! ! !

It's finished. It's very interesting. The character of the heroine is very well grasped. She has the bravery of Gryffindor but not completely reckless. Sirius fell in love with the heroine and there is a complete process. I recently read my favorite article about the male protagonist being Sirius. I hope the author can update it quickly and that Sirius's character design will not go astray.