A 30-Year-Old Man Voluntarily Becomes a Magical Girl!

Found a treasure. This magical girl book is considered to be of high quality. Advantages: The writing is smooth, the logic is smooth, and the protagonist has a brain. Moreover, the author's writing style is not bad and the writing style is relatively comfortable to read. These have surpassed the level of most authors. Disadvantages: There are few transformation plots, and it has only changed three times so far. The plot is more group-like, and the protagonist's plot is relatively small. And the main character's name is a bit plain, I don't know if it will be changed after the change. My personal feeling is that the protagonist is set to be an invincible numerical monster plus a mechanical monster. There are fewer battles and he is basically a one-shot-second thing, and it is not very procrastinating.

Good reviews. Solid language skills and good expression. The plot is also good, not too toxic, and worth watching. The low rating is mainly due to the author's layout. The main character is said to be super awesome and Bigger is too big. There are many plots of other characters in the back, which look like novices pecking each other, which is not interesting. It is not a clear group portrait novel, and there is no clear second protagonist, resulting in a very low sense of substitution and the feeling that the author is in trouble.

Nice! ! ! Nice! ! ! Compared with other magical girl novels, this one is written more from the perspective of an onlooker (starting from the perspective). This, combined with the author's excellent writing style and plot, gives it a unique flavor. After all, it has just begun, and I am full of expectations for the subsequent plots, hoping to bring you a different experience. Author, author, your language is really concise, with almost no water characters. This is very valuable, but the shortcoming is also the conciseness. You update 4,000 words a day, and the content is bland. It is difficult to retain readers. You lack the characterization of details, so there is really no foreshadowing (I don't know) I have read it 3 times), and the psychological description is also very weak. The author can consider adding some environmental hints and plot twists. No one likes a dull story. The contrast and contradiction in the plot are the soul of the novel (your contradictions are too popular). I really hope the author can 9.0

Not bad, but the number of times the protagonist transforms is a bit rare. When will the protagonist completely change? The progress is too slow, 200,000 words in, and the protagonist is still changing back and forth. This is almost 400,000 words long, and it's still the same, so annoying [laughs awkwardly]

It looks okay [laughs]. As for the problem in the comment section that the protagonist has few transformations and few scenes, I think it's okay. After all, the protagonist's initial strength is high, and the risk of exposure is too high if he often transforms and runs around. It would be better if the author can work hard and update. 10 Updates a day will not be a problem [laughter]

Although this book has no highlights, it also has no shortcomings. An ordinary book has a sense of temptation that makes people keep reading. I read Shuangwen, which is almost 3000 hours long. Most of the articles I read have a purpose. For example, the marriage-changing articles are about looking forward to the moment of getting married. But this book has a very daily feel, a sense of novelty that is different every day, and every day. It has the same sense of daily life as Tiandu. This is also a semi-invincible protagonist with a high starting point and is still growing. What I will never forget is the S-class lord alien beast who can only say "somewhat interesting". In short, I still highly recommend this book. Although it says Lily in the title, the protagonist has just completed her feminization in more than 200 chapters. Lily is currently unavailable. I hope the author can write more

The subject matter is still good, but at the end of the writing, the protagonist Meimei becomes invisible. I feel that more than half of it is a supporting role, and the proportion of the protagonist is not large. I hope the author can write more roles for the protagonist later.

It's good-looking, but it feels like AI. Please read it from the beginning yourself, author.

It looks good, the descriptions are sufficient, the pace is slow but the details are well done, the plot and characters are rich, a bit messy but harmless, the only problem is that the progress is slow and the update speed is not fast. I made a mistake. It's not that the plot is advancing slowly, it's simply squirming.

Overall, it's okay, but it's a little bit toxic. It's interesting at every turn, especially one of the fight scenes. It's interesting when the villain is beaten, at least three or four times, which makes me feel a little ptsd when I watch the interesting moments later.