
Honkai, Genshin Impact, Zenless Zone Zero: A Palu Adventure
崩坏原神绝区零:帕鲁冒险记
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 208k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
78Chapters
15Reads
1Listens
1.8kReads · all time
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Are There No Serious Genshin Impact Stories Anymore? It's Romance, Romance, Romance Every Day, and Everyone's Characterization Is a Mess
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Zenless Zone Zero! Zenless Zone Zero! Zenless Zone Zero!
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A Slightly Unhinged Honkai: Star Rail and Genshin Impact Story
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Reader comments 5
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Good book, the writing is also quite satisfactory But there are also some problems. The four protagonists actually test the writing skills. Especially when the four protagonists are present at the same time, it is even more difficult to control the core. In the current process, the author has suppressed the core difficult-to-control problem through successive events (conquering) and imagination, but as the number of paloos increases, this problem will gradually emerge. And in fact, there will be a lot of details that can be detailed in the content, such as refining the base construction and planning, for example, Palu's characteristics need to be developed, for example, Palu will not immediately get close to humans after being subdued, for example, if Palu is injured, he will have a natural defense against humans. There are many, many points that can be expanded upon Moreover, in the story, it is best to form a team of 1-2 people each time you go out to explore, and leave one team at home so that you can have a two-line story, such as sudden upgrades to help fight, etc. When building a home, you should abandon the gameplay and return to handcrafting to make the world more realistic and increase the writing content Anyway, that's all. Ps: It's best to change the title of the book. First of all, the title is not attractive. For example, [Miha Universe: Four Sisters' Journey of Phantom Beasts] or something like that, you can add words like Genshin Impact, Honkai Impact 3, etc. To the introduction (≧w≦)
Looks good, I wish there were more characters
The quality is high, and the subject matter and content are innovative. Although the text is a bit human-machine, the flaws are not hidden. Worth a look.
It's quite interesting, I'm looking forward to seeing others appear in the future.
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